कंही आदबअर्ज कंही राम राम@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ALFAAZ

by alfaaz on May 23, 2015, 09:46:28 AM
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आते जाते सबको सलाम करता हुँ
कंही आदबअर्ज तो कंही राम राम करता हुँ
इन्ही दो लबज़ों से अक्सर
तमाम दिलों को अपने नाम करता हुँ

मेरे दामन में काँटे भी घूलते हैं गुलों में
बागबाँ हुँ गुलिस्तां हर अंजाम करता हुँ

ईंट-ईंट लेकर घर में ही मैखाना बना रहा हूँ
घर की बात घर में ही रहे इसका इंतज़ाम करता हुँ

लोगों की बातों का मुझपे कैसा असर?
नाक साफ़ करके ईलाज-ए-ज़ुखाम करता हुँ

मेरी नमाज़ में कभी खलल नही पडी
सज़्दा-ए-मैकदा सुब्ह-शाम करता हुँ

जाँ से प्यारी अपनी तन्हाई लूटा रहा हुँ
आपके नाम मेरे सारे कलाम  करता हुँ

"राज" का अलविदा कबूल करो यारों
दोज़ख जाके आपका इंतज़ार करता हुँ
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2015, 05:41:19 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2015, 06:28:37 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2015, 07:22:17 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Raaj ji, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai, bahut hi khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke, bole to too good...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2015, 07:39:06 PM »
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waah kyaa baat hai janaab Awaaz Sahib, 'yak naa shud do shud' ek pehle due hai ek aur Due de rahaa hoon. Kyaa karun aapne likhaa hee aisaa gazab kaa hai.
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2015, 09:02:39 PM »
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behtreen peshkash waaahhhhh daaaaaadddd
thank you
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2015, 09:03:30 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Raaj ji, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai, bahut hi khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke, bole to too good...!!!

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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2015, 09:04:38 PM »
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waah kyaa baat hai janaab Awaaz Sahib, 'yak naa shud do shud' ek pehle due hai ek aur Due de rahaa hoon. Kyaa karun aapne likhaa hee aisaa gazab kaa hai.
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2015, 09:05:57 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2015, 03:01:30 AM »
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waah waal alfaaz bhai Usual Smile tum to yaar gazab hi dha dete ho..fantastic flow and some amazing depth mixed with some unique style...mera bhi rau due raha Usual Smile
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waah waal alfaaz bhai Usual Smile tum to yaar gazab hi dha dete ho..fantastic flow and some amazing depth mixed with some unique style...mera bhi rau due raha Usual Smile
thanks bhai. i am pleased that you have liked it.
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«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2015, 02:49:25 PM »
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waah kyaa baat hai janaab Awaaz Sahib, 'yak naa shud do shud' ek pehle due hai ek aur Due de rahaa hoon. Kyaa karun aapne likhaa hee aisaa gazab kaa hai.
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Janaab Rau main ne aapke khaate main jamaa kar diyaa hai.
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