काल्पनिक कौवा

by bekarar on July 03, 2010, 06:08:14 PM
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कल्पना ही था वो एक,
मुझे बहलाने के लिए,
मा ने गढ़ा था उसे महज़,
मुझे खाना खिलाने के लिए,

अक्सर मेरी ना खाने की ज़िद पे,
मा अपने हाथ से नीवाला बनाती,
एक काल्पनिक कौवा, जो मेरा नीवाला खाने को,
तैयार रहता, उसका डर दिखाती,

और मे कौवे के खाने से पहले,
वो कौर जल्दी से खा लेता,
मा फिर से एक कौर बनाती,
और फिर से एक काल्पनिक कौवा,

ये सिलसिला बरसों चलता रहा,
लेकिन वो काल्पनिक कौवा,
मुझसे कभी जीत नही पाया,
ना ही वो कभी मेरे सामने आया,

मगर अब बरसों बाद,
काम के बोझ की शक्ल मे
अक्सर मेरा नीवाला वो कौवा खा लेता है,
मा, अब वो काल्पनिक कौवा हक़ीक़त है,
अब अक्सर वो जीत जाता है,
और मे हार जाता हूँ
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2010, 07:18:23 PM »
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waaah bekarar bhai! bahut khoob ... bachpan ke jhooth ko aaj ki sachhai mein badalne ka bahut achha prayas hai.... bahut khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2010, 11:24:15 PM »
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MARMIK SACHCHAI KA AISA CHITRAN NAHI PADHA.BAHUT BAHUT BADHAI.....
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2010, 08:13:26 AM »
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Bhaut khoob Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2010, 09:43:44 AM »
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Bahot hi shandaar poem hai Bekarar ji. Ise padhkar kuchh sochne par majboor hona pada. Ek haqeeqat bayaan ki hai aapne. Nice creation.
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2010, 10:08:57 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai....Bachpan ka Bholapan aur aaj k kaam ka competetion....
ek satik vyang saral shabdo mai...
bahut kuchh sochne ko majboor kar deta hai...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: bekarar on July 03, 2010, 06:08:14 PM
कल्पना ही था वो एक,
मुझे बहलाने के लिए,
मा ने गढ़ा था उसे महज़,
मुझे खाना खिलाने के लिए,

अक्सर मेरी ना खाने की ज़िद पे,
मा अपने हाथ से नीवाला बनाती,
एक काल्पनिक कौवा, जो मेरा नीवाला खाने को,
तैयार रहता, उसका डर दिखाती,

और मे कौवे के खाने से पहले,
वो कौर जल्दी से खा लेता,
मा फिर से एक कौर बनाती,
और फिर से एक काल्पनिक कौवा,

ये सिलसिला बरसों चलता रहा,
लेकिन वो काल्पनिक कौवा,
मुझसे कभी जीत नही पाया,
ना ही वो कभी मेरे सामने आया,

मगर अब बरसों बाद,
काम के बोझ की शक्ल मे
अक्सर मेरा नीवाला वो कौवा खा लेता है,
मा, अब वो काल्पनिक कौवा हक़ीक़त है,
अब अक्सर वो जीत जाता है,
और मे हार जाता हूँ
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2010, 04:17:40 PM »
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Quote from: sideffect assured on July 03, 2010, 07:18:23 PM
waaah bekarar bhai! bahut khoob ... bachpan ke jhooth ko aaj ki sachhai mein badalne ka bahut achha prayas hai.... bahut khoob!
bahoot shukriya dost aapne rchna ko pasand kiya....
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 03, 2010, 11:24:15 PM
MARMIK SACHCHAI KA AISA CHITRAN NAHI PADHA.BAHUT BAHUT BADHAI.....
rachna ko apki badhai mili..rachna ka janm sarthak hua...housla-afzai ka shukriya Mamta ji
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 04, 2010, 08:13:26 AM
Bhaut khoob Bekarar Ji
bahot shukriya bhai rajesh...humesha ki tarah aapne is rachna ko padhne ka samay nikala...aur saraha bhi...bahoot aabhar
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Quote from: riyaz106 on July 05, 2010, 09:43:44 AM
Bahot hi shandaar poem hai Bekarar ji. Ise padhkar kuchh sochne par majboor hona pada. Ek haqeeqat bayaan ki hai aapne. Nice creation.
Ji riyaz bhai...hai to ye haqiqat hi....aapne padha, samajha aur saraha..dil se aabhar....
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 05, 2010, 10:08:57 AM
Wah kya baat hai....Bachpan ka Bholapan aur aaj k kaam ka competetion....
ek satik vyang saral shabdo mai...
bahut kuchh sochne ko majboor kar deta hai...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


shukriya koyal ji is panne par aapki upasthiti ne nish-chit hi mera manobal badhaya hai.....dhanywad
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Bohot khoob bekarar ji Kya hi khoobsoorti aur masoomiyyat ke saath aap ne apni feelings ko bayaan kiya hai. Dil se daal haazir hai is achchhi kaavish par.
meri dua'eN aap ke saath haiN,
 Hamesha khush rahiye.
     Haider
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Quote from: Ghulam Haider on July 05, 2010, 04:39:58 PM
Bohot khoob bekarar ji Kya hi khoobsoorti aur masoomiyyat ke saath aap ne apni feelings ko bayaan kiya hai. Dil se daal haazir hai is achchhi kaavish par.
meri dua'eN aap ke saath haiN,
 Hamesha khush rahiye.
     Haider

haidar sahab bahoot dino ke baad aapse mulakaat hui....aur sach maniye bahoot khushi bhi hui.........bahoot shukriya dost
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hamaari to aap ke saamne aane ki himmat hi nahiN hoti!!! Bahi dar lagta hai....
Aap ki posts par bhi comment dene ke liye sochna paRta hai, agar zara si mitake ho gayi to gaye kaam se. ha ha ha ...
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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2010, 05:22:24 PM »
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are haidar sahab mere baare me aapke ye khayalaat kab se ho gaye janab....
..just kidding....aate rahen...jab bhi waqt ijajat de
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