काल्पनिक कौवा

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«Reply #15 on: July 05, 2010, 05:28:45 PM »
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are haidar sahab mere baare me aapke ye khayalaat kab se ho gaye janab....
..just kidding....aate rahen...jab bhi waqt ijajat de

Aap ka hukm sar aaNkhoN par janaab, maiN to bohot dinoN se akela ghoom raha hoN. JahaN bhi koi post daalta hoN log udhar se faraar karne lagte haiN. Na jaane ? baat hai.
khuda ka shukr hai ke aap ne mera dil nahiN toRa.
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«Reply #16 on: July 07, 2010, 12:58:22 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Bekarar ji....!!!
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«Reply #17 on: July 07, 2010, 04:54:10 AM »
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bahoot bahoot shukriya klaskar ji
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«Reply #18 on: July 07, 2010, 04:55:03 AM »
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Aap ka hukm sar aaNkhoN par janaab, maiN to bohot dinoN se akela ghoom raha hoN. JahaN bhi koi post daalta hoN log udhar se faraar karne lagte haiN. Na jaane ? baat hai.
khuda ka shukr hai ke aap ne mera dil nahiN toRa.
are bhai hum bhi aapki tarah hi dil todne me nahi jodne me bharosa rakhte hain
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«Reply #19 on: July 08, 2010, 05:51:03 AM »
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superbbbbbbbbbbbbb

kya baat hai

bachpan ki yaad dila di bhai
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«Reply #20 on: July 09, 2010, 05:46:59 PM »
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superbbbbbbbbbbbbb

kya baat hai

bachpan ki yaad dila di bhai

bahooooooooooot shukriya..
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«Reply #21 on: July 10, 2010, 12:36:31 AM »
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are bhai hum bhi aapki tarah hi dil todne me nahi jodne me bharosa rakhte hain
Be Karar bhai jab bhi maiN aap ke is pasand kiye huye photo ki taraf dekhta hoN to mere dil meN do iHsaas paida hote haiN.
Jab maiN is ko ba zaahir dekhta hoN to baar 2 aap se mizaaH(shokhi) ko dil karta hai, kyoN ke aap ka nishana meri taraf hai, aur........
 
Doosra iHsaas is photo ki ma'naviyyat se paida hota hai. Apne desh ke un bahaadur nau jawaanoN ki yaad aati hai jo jaan ki baazi laga kar apne desh ki hifaazat karte haiN. Un ki mohabbat, un ki wafa daari, un ki qurbaani..... bas kuchh likhne ko ji chaahta hai.
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«Reply #22 on: July 12, 2010, 02:20:35 PM »
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Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro....

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Khayal..Aapne Zindagi Ke jis Vaakya Ka Varnan Kiya Hai,Mere hisaab se Har koi Aise pal Zaroor Jeeta hoga,aapki yeh kavita padhkar mujhe bhi sach mein yaad Aaya hai ke haan, Maa Sach mein Hum bacho ko aise hi Khilaate hai Ke khaalo Varna Koi Aur Khaa Jaayega..

Padhkar bahut Acha Laga.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #23 on: July 16, 2010, 05:54:58 AM »
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Be Karar bhai jab bhi maiN aap ke is pasand kiye huye photo ki taraf dekhta hoN to mere dil meN do iHsaas paida hote haiN.
Jab maiN is ko ba zaahir dekhta hoN to baar 2 aap se mizaaH(shokhi) ko dil karta hai, kyoN ke aap ka nishana meri taraf hai, aur........
 
Doosra iHsaas is photo ki ma'naviyyat se paida hota hai. Apne desh ke un bahaadur nau jawaanoN ki yaad aati hai jo jaan ki baazi laga kar apne desh ki hifaazat karte haiN. Un ki mohabbat, un ki wafa daari, un ki qurbaani..... bas kuchh likhne ko ji chaahta hai.
ha ha ha jawab nahi aapka haider bhai...aap waqi lajawab shaqs hain...
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«Reply #24 on: July 16, 2010, 05:56:52 AM »
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Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro....

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Khayal..Aapne Zindagi Ke jis Vaakya Ka Varnan Kiya Hai,Mere hisaab se Har koi Aise pal Zaroor Jeeta hoga,aapki yeh kavita padhkar mujhe bhi sach mein yaad Aaya hai ke haan, Maa Sach mein Hum bacho ko aise hi Khilaate hai Ke khaalo Varna Koi Aur Khaa Jaayega..

Padhkar bahut Acha Laga.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


bahoot shukriya khwaish bhai.....aapko ye pryas pasand aaya.   icon_flower
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