कुछ तो ज़रूर है bekarar

by bekarar on February 01, 2011, 08:13:34 PM
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ग़लत क्या है, अगर तुझे अपने हुस्न पे गुरूर है
इक निगाह ही देखा था मुझे अब तक सुरूर है,

तुझे छूकर मेरे ख्वाब की तामील हो गई,
चाँद को कैसे छूता, जो कोसों दूर है,

तुम्ही तो सहते रहे हर ज़ुल्म बेआवाज़,
अब इंतिहा हुई तो, किस्मत का कसूर है,

ना गोलियों की दरकार ना जाम की फरमाइश,
बेफिकर सो रहा है, जो थक के चूर है

बेखयाली मे भी दुपट्टा, सरकने नही देती,
मेरे मोहल्ले की लड़कियों मे अब भी सहूर है

सोच मे पड़ जाता है, जो तेरी ग़ज़ल पढ़े,
तेरी बातों मे "बेकरार" कुछ तो ज़रूर है
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2011, 08:31:47 PM »
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Kya Khoob Kalaam Se Bazm Ko Nawaza Hai
Bahut Badrhya Peshkash Janaab Bekara Saheb.

Bahu Bahut Khub...Dad
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2011, 05:14:00 AM »
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तुझे छूकर मेरे ख्वाब की तामील हो गई,
चाँद को कैसे छूता, जो कोसों दूर है,

तुम्ही तो सहते रहे हर ज़ुल्म बेआवाज़,
अब इंतिहा हुई तो, किस्मत का कसूर है,

बेखयाली मे भी दुपट्टा, सरकने नही देती,
मेरे मोहल्ले की लड़कियों मे अब भी सहूर है

सोच मे पड़ जाता है, जो तेरी ग़ज़ल पढ़े,
तेरी बातों मे "बेकरार" कुछ तो ज़रूर है


Kyaa baat hai ... Bahut Khooooooob ... bekarar ji !

bahut umdaa khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne ... bayaani aur adaayegi bahut asardaar rahi ... dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ...  Applause Applause Applause

aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se ru-ba-ru karaate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !

SuperBBBBBBBB Creation .... Bhaai !!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2011, 09:43:54 AM »
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 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

god hai yaar aap to 
bas kuch arz karna chahunga aapke liye

"hukumat wo  karte hai jinka dil pe raaj hota hai |

baki to kehne ko murge ke sir pe bhi taj hota hai  ||"
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2011, 11:48:41 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro...Har Ek sher lajawaab!!!

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notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

god hai yaar aap to 
bas kuch arz karna chahunga aapke liye

"hukumat wo  karte hai jinka dil pe raaj hota hai |

baki to kehne ko murge ke sir pe bhi taj hota hai  ||"

Hahaha..bahut bahut Khoob Manishji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley[/color][/b]
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2011, 03:58:34 PM »
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Kya Khoob Kalaam Se Bazm Ko Nawaza Hai
Bahut Badrhya Peshkash Janaab Bekara Saheb.

Bahu Bahut Khub...Dad

hum dum ji..dil se shukriya...aapne is kalam ko rooh tak samjha aur apna kimati waqt diya...
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2011, 04:01:41 PM »
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Kyaa baat hai ... Bahut Khooooooob ... bekarar ji !

bahut umdaa khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne ... bayaani aur adaayegi bahut asardaar rahi ... dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ...  Applause Applause Applause

aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se ru-ba-ru karaate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !

SuperBBBBBBBB Creation .... Bhaai !!!!!!!!!!!!


Appki har daad sir -aankhon par....anshu ji........housala-afzai ka dili shukriya..bhai
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 04:05:38 PM »
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notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

god hai yaar aap to 
bas kuch arz karna chahunga aapke liye

"hukumat wo  karte hai jinka dil pe raaj hota hai |

baki to kehne ko murge ke sir pe bhi taj hota hai  ||"

manish bhai aapne kya likh diya is layak nahi hun mai...magar fir bhi aapke dil ko kahin choo paya to mera likhna kamyaab raha............
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2011, 04:06:41 PM »
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bahut khoob bekrar ji..
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2011, 05:06:54 PM »
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kya khoob likha hai bekaraar ji.
aisi peshkash aur aati rahen.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2011, 08:18:07 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro...Har Ek sher lajawaab!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Hahaha..bahut bahut Khoob Manishji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



bahoot abhar bhai khwaish.....housal-afzaai ke liye... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 08:19:14 AM »
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bahut khoob bekrar ji..

tah-e-dil se shukriya BBl ji
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 08:22:54 AM »
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kya khoob likha hai bekaraar ji.
aisi peshkash aur aati rahen.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


bahoot abhar suresh ji.....aapka saath milta rahega to likhna bhi jaari rahega.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 09:18:10 AM »
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Mast baat kahi aapne Bekaraar ji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Naari teri khoobsurti mai kuchh tou baat jaroor hai
Dekhlo ittihaass mai ye naam itne mashhoor kyu hain

Helen-of-troy-Cleopetra-Paddmini-Delilah kaa hushnn
Dekho tum kara gaya history ki badi-badi laddaiyein


ग़लत क्या है, अगर तुझे अपने हुस्न पे गुरूर है
इक निगाह ही देखा था मुझे अब तक सुरूर है,

तुझे छूकर मेरे ख्वाब की तामील हो गई,
चाँद को कैसे छूता, जो कोसों दूर है,

तुम्ही तो सहते रहे हर ज़ुल्म बेआवाज़,
अब इंतिहा हुई तो, किस्मत का कसूर है,

ना गोलियों की दरकार ना जाम की फरमाइश,
बेफिकर सो रहा है, जो थक के चूर है

बेखयाली मे भी दुपट्टा, सरकने नही देती,
मेरे मोहल्ले की लड़कियों मे अब भी सहूर है

सोच मे पड़ जाता है, जो तेरी ग़ज़ल पढ़े,
तेरी बातों मे "बेकरार" कुछ तो ज़रूर है

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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 09:35:32 AM »
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khub bekararji....

sach hai aapki baato main kuchh to zarur hai...

jo bahut khub hai.....
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