कौन कहता हे की बादल तडपते नंही................

by pawan16 on March 11, 2012, 12:13:10 PM
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कौन कहता हे की बादल तडपते नंही,
गरज-गरज धडकने सुनाते हे,
फिर भी कहते हो ये तडपते नंही,
मिलने की आस होती हे,
ना मिलने पर आसूओ से टपकते नंही,
ये धरती जब तप कर लाल हो जाती हे,
क्या तब इन बादलो की आहट आती नंही,
बादल की वफाई देखो,
अपनी मेहबूबा को तडपने से बचाता हे,
ओर खुद सुरज के सामने आ खडा हो जाता हे,
इससे अच्छा प्यार का  नजराना हमे नंही दिख पाता हे.......पवन गुप्ता
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«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2012, 12:14:47 PM »
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Quote from: pawan16 on March 11, 2012, 12:13:10 PM
कौन कहता हे की बादल तडपते नंही,
गरज-गरज धडकने सुनाते हे,
फिर भी कहते हो ये तडपते नंही,
मिलने की आस होती हे,
ना मिलने पर आसूओ से टपकते नंही,
ये धरती जब तप कर लाल हो जाती हे,
क्या तब इन बादलो की आहट आती नंही,
बादल की वफाई देखो,
अपनी मेहबूबा को तडपने से बचाता हे,
ओर खुद सुरज के सामने आ खडा हो जाता हे,
इससे अच्छा प्यार का  नजराना हमे नंही दिख पाता हे.......पवन गुप्ता


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«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2012, 12:16:58 PM »
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Quote from: pawan16 on March 11, 2012, 12:13:10 PM
कौन कहता हे की बादल तडपते नंही,
गरज-गरज धडकने सुनाते हे,
फिर भी कहते हो ये तडपते नंही,
मिलने की आस होती हे,
ना मिलने पर आसूओ से टपकते नंही,
ये धरती जब तप कर लाल हो जाती हे,
क्या तब इन बादलो की आहट आती नंही,
बादल की वफाई देखो,
अपनी मेहबूबा को तडपने से बचाता हे,
ओर खुद सुरज के सामने आ खडा हो जाता हे,
इससे अच्छा प्यार का  नजराना हमे नंही दिख पाता हे.......पवन गुप्ता



Bahut Khooooob Pawanji

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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2012, 02:15:17 PM »
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Pawan ji bahut achhaa kahte ho aapke ander badaa khoobsoorat poet hai.bas ek to spelings par dhyaan do aapkaa ang ki bindee waalaa hisaab gadbad hai.doosre urdu ke lafz bhee gadbad hain aap ek hindi waalee aur doosree urdu waalee dictionary khareed kar unkee madad len main khud bhee esaa hee kartaa hoon is liye aapko salaah de rahaa hoon. keep it up god bless you
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2012, 02:31:28 PM »
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saniji bhut bhut sukriya apka......main aage se bhut dhyan rakunga...main jaldi hi dictinaly khreeb in galtiyo ko sudharunga......bas yu hi saath dete rahyie...
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2012, 02:38:00 PM »
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thnaks sheba ji...........
thanks khwish ji........
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2012, 02:41:09 PM »
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bahut sundar pawanji
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«Reply #7 on: March 11, 2012, 02:46:31 PM »
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thanks dollyji........
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«Reply #8 on: March 11, 2012, 02:51:20 PM »
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Good one Pawan
new idea Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 11, 2012, 02:53:33 PM »
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sir bas yu hi khyaal aa gaya baithe baithe........thanks mkvji
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