क्षणिकायें -सुधीर अश्क

by Sudhir Ashq on July 18, 2013, 03:02:36 PM
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क्षणिकायें

    (1)

तुम चोर,
वो चोर,
हम चोर,
सब चोर.
क्यों शोर ।

    (2)

तुम दलाल,
वो दलाल,
हम दलाल ,
सब दलाल,
क्यों मलाल ।

-सुधीर अश्क

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   (1)

TUM CHOR,
WO CHOR,
HUM CHOR,
SUB CHOR.
KYON SHOR.

    (2)

TUM MALAL,
WO MALAL,
HUM MALAL,
SUB MALAL.
KYON MALAL.

-SUDHIR ASHQ



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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2013, 03:09:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2013, 03:13:33 PM »
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chalo to phir ek rau ho jaaye
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2013, 03:24:07 PM »
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क्षणिकायें

    (1)

तुम चोर,
वो चोर,
हम चोर,
सब चोर.
क्यों शोर ।

    (2)

तुम दलाल,
वो दलाल,
हम दलाल ,
सब दलाल,
क्यों मलाल ।

-सुधीर अश्क

***************************

    (1)

TUM CHOR,
WO CHOR,
HUM CHOR,
SUB CHOR.
KYON SHOR.

    (2)

TUM MALAL,
WO MALAL,
HUM MALAL,
SUB MALAL.
KYON MALAL.

-SUDHIR ASHQ






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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2013, 03:32:38 PM »
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good
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2013, 04:08:24 PM »
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क्षणिकायें

    (1)

तुम चोर,
वो चोर,
हम चोर,
सब चोर.
क्यों शोर ।

    (2)

तुम दलाल,
वो दलाल,
हम दलाल ,
सब दलाल,
क्यों मलाल ।

-सुधीर अश्क

***************************

    (1)

TUM CHOR,
WO CHOR,
HUM CHOR,
SUB CHOR.
KYON SHOR.

    (2)

TUM MALAL,
WO MALAL,
HUM MALAL,
SUB MALAL.
KYON MALAL.

-SUDHIR ASHQ




very very good afternoon sir.
i am nitin kumar kamboj
sir m bhi poem lihta hu.aapne meri id par meri poem "vyakul man" ke liye mujhe suggess bhi kiya tha.sir bahut bahut thanks aapka ki aapne mujh jhaise chote poet ki poem read ki.


sir aap apna contect n. agar mujhe de dege to m aapke guidence me aage poem likh sakunga.
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2013, 04:18:57 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:kya baat hai sudhir ji wah wah kya khoob likha hai dili daad kubool karein
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2013, 05:16:35 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2013, 05:57:23 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2013, 07:25:51 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2013, 02:59:42 AM »
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Nice Creation.
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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2013, 03:47:46 PM »
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bahut khoob sudhirji...
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«Reply #13 on: July 19, 2013, 08:15:39 PM »
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क्षणिकायें

    (1)

तुम चोर,
वो चोर,
हम चोर,
सब चोर.
क्यों शोर ।

    (2)

तुम दलाल,
वो दलाल,
हम दलाल ,
सब दलाल,
क्यों मलाल ।

-सुधीर अश्क

***************************

    (1)

TUM CHOR,
WO CHOR,
HUM CHOR,
SUB CHOR.
KYON SHOR.

    (2)

TUM MALAL,
WO MALAL,
HUM MALAL,
SUB MALAL.
KYON MALAL.

-SUDHIR ASHQ





Waaaaah Janab waaaaah ....bahut khoob.....Raqeeb
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