खिलता हुआ गुलाब- By "Betaab". (English version is also available)

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खिलता हुआ गुलाब अजब बात कह गया,
हंस रहे हैं फूल खुद चमन शर्मसार हो गया.

कांटे भी आज झेंप रहे रहे हैं मुंह छिपाकर,
शाखे गुलाब को अजब सा खुमार हो गया.

कलियों के शर्माने का जरा अंदाज़ तो देखिये,
हर गुंचा जाने क्या सोचकर उदास हो गया.

भंवरों के गुनगुनाने से अजब माहौल है पनपा.
जो छोटा सा चमन था आज सब्ज़ बाग़ हो गया.

Khilta hua gulab ajab baat kah gaya,
Hans rahe hain phool khud chaman sharmsar ho gaya.

Kaante aaj jhenp rahe hain munh chhipakar,
Shakhe gulab ko ajab sa khumar ho gaya.

Kaliyon ke sharmane ka zara andaz to dekhiye,
Har gumcha jane kya sochkar udas ho gaya.

Bhanwron ke gungunane se ajab mahaul hai panpa,
Jo chhota sa chaman tha aaj sabz bagh ho gaya.

   Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2014, 03:20:25 AM »
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खिलता हुआ गुलाब अजब बात कह गया,
हंस रहे हैं फूल खुद चमन शर्मसार हो गया.

कांटे भी आज झेंप रहे रहे हैं मुंह छिपाकर,
शाखे गुलाब को अजब सा खुमार हो गया.

कलियों के शर्माने का जरा अंदाज़ तो देखिये,
हर गुंचा जाने क्या सोचकर उदास हो गया.

भंवरों के गुनगुनाने से अजब माहौल है पनपा.
जो छोटा सा चमन था आज सब्ज़ बाग़ हो गया.

Khilta hua gulab ajab baat kah gaya,
Hans rahe hain phool khud chaman sharmsar ho gaya.

Kaante aaj jhenp rahe hain munh chhipakar,
Shakhe gulab ko ajab sa khumar ho gaya.

Kaliyon ke sharmane ka zara andaz to dekhiye,
Har gumcha jane kya sochkar udas ho gaya.

Bhanwron ke gungunane se ajab mahaul hai panpa,
Jo chhota sa chaman tha aaj sabz bagh ho gaya.

   Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".


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Wah Janaab Betaab Sahib khoob kahaa aapne. Bahut daad.
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2014, 09:05:31 AM »
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खिलता हुआ गुलाब अजब बात कह गया,
हंस रहे हैं फूल खुद चमन शर्मसार हो गया.

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

कांटे भी आज झेंप रहे रहे हैं मुंह छिपाकर,
शाखे गुलाब को अजब सा खुमार हो गया.

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

कलियों के शर्माने का जरा अंदाज़ तो देखिये,
हर गुंचा जाने क्या सोचकर उदास हो गया.

 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2

भंवरों के गुनगुनाने से अजब माहौल है पनपा.
जो छोटा सा चमन था आज सब्ज़ बाग़ हो गया.

 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4

Khilta hua gulab ajab baat kah gaya,
Hans rahe hain phool khud chaman sharmsar ho gaya.

Kaante aaj jhenp rahe hain munh chhipakar,
Shakhe gulab ko ajab sa khumar ho gaya.

Kaliyon ke sharmane ka zara andaz to dekhiye,
Har gumcha jane kya sochkar udas ho gaya.

Bhanwron ke gungunane se ajab mahaul hai panpa,
Jo chhota sa chaman tha aaj sabz bagh ho gaya.

   Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".


Aap ki shayri bilkul alag hi hoti hsai. Bahut hi khubsurati se likha hai. Ek rau to banta hai.
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