चूल्‍हे में फेंक बेतुकी गाज़लों को फाड़ के

by suman59 on April 04, 2013, 12:44:44 AM
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उस्तादे-फन हँसे तेरी परतें उघाड़ के,
मुश्कल से ऊँट आया है नीचे पहाड़ के !!

शोहरत की भूख ने तुझे अंधा बना दिया,
पापड़ समझ के खा गया पल्ले किवाड़ के !!

आख़िर कबाड़ियों ने खरीदी तेरी किताब,
हैं कुछ तो कद्र्दान शहर में कबाड़ के !!

गुमराह पीढ़ियां न हों पढ़कर तेरा कलाम
चूल्‍हे में फेंक बेतुकी गाज़लों को फाड़ के !!

भैसे-सा पल रहा है तू जिस भैस के यहाँ,
मुँह फेर लेगी वो तेरा खूँटा उखाड़ के !!

कुछ इस कदर गिरा है, ख़ुद अपनी नजर से तू
आइना शर्मसार है तुझको लताड़ के !!

"सुमन है" हम तो कर दें खताएँ तेरी मुआफ,
आए जो तू जमीन को पालकों से झाड़ के !!
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2013, 01:18:30 AM »
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Waah waah waah waah, kya baat hai, kya khoob likha hai Suman jee, maza aa gaya padh ke. KaafiyoN ka jawaab nahiN, bemissal kaafiye chune haiN aapne. Saath hi thought bhi shaandaar nikaale haiN aapne. Khaas taur pe Ye ash'aar bahut pasand aaye:

Aakhir kabaadiyoN   ne  khareedi  teri kitaab
haiN kuch to  qadrdaan  shahr  meiN kabaad ke

Gumraah peedhiyaaN na hoN padhkar tera kalaam
Choolhe meiN pheNk betuki ghazloN ko phaad ke

Kuch iss qadar gira hai khud apni nazar se tu
Aaina  sharmsaar   hai    tujhko   lataad  ke


DheroN mubarak baad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se.
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2013, 01:37:11 AM »
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वाह वाह क्या लिख दिया आपने?

मैं लापता हो जाऊँगा तुझको निहार के
आऊं कभी गर मैं जमीं पलकों से झार  के!
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2013, 01:59:47 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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Suman Je Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH jee waaH kia kahne jee kia kahne behad umda shaayri ka la jawaab shahkaar hai aapki yeH kalaam .. Usual Smile

Gazab ke ashaar aur gazab ki kavish kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile
Aik se badhkar aik laa jawaab sher rahe jee.. har ashaar par hazaaroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile


Likhati rahiye... bazm meiN aati rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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Bahot hi umda shayri.
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2013, 11:41:46 AM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Sumanji,
Very nice,Bahut khoob.Really Execellent.
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गुमराह पीढ़ियां न हों पढ़कर तेरा कलाम
चूल्‍हे में फेंक बेतुकी गाज़लों को फाड़ के !!

Ghazal ka sabse khoobsurat sher
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ye peshkash hai ki hydrogen bomb yoindia par ye bahut bhaaree padee hai meraa salute ek rau ke saath
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Quote from: suman59 on April 04, 2013, 12:44:44 AM
उस्तादे-फन हँसे तेरी परतें उघाड़ के,
मुश्कल से ऊँट आया है नीचे पहाड़ के !!

शोहरत की भूख ने तुझे अंधा बना दिया,
पापड़ समझ के खा गया पल्ले किवाड़ के !!

आख़िर कबाड़ियों ने खरीदी तेरी किताब,
हैं कुछ तो कद्र्दान शहर में कबाड़ के !!

गुमराह पीढ़ियां न हों पढ़कर तेरा कलाम
चूल्‍हे में फेंक बेतुकी गाज़लों को फाड़ के !!

भैसे-सा पल रहा है तू जिस भैस के यहाँ,
मुँह फेर लेगी वो तेरा खूँटा उखाड़ के !!

कुछ इस कदर गिरा है, ख़ुद अपनी नजर से तू
आइना शर्मसार है तुझको लताड़ के !!

"सुमन है" हम तो कर दें खताएँ तेरी मुआफ,
आए जो तू जमीन को पालकों से झाड़ के !!




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meri taraf se ek rau aur dili mubaraqbaad is kalaam ke liye, bahut behtareen peshkash rahi ye.... Usual Smile
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