छीन ली

by suman59 on September 05, 2012, 04:19:18 PM
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कुछ अँधेरे दिये, रौशनी छीन ली
इक सितमगर ने सारी खुशी छीन ली !!

ले लिया इक नजर में ही दिल आपने,
चीज जो काम की थी, वही छीन ली !!

ऐ गमे-ज़िन्दगी तुमने ये क्या  किया,
मुझको आँसू दिये और हँसी छीन ली !!

कच्ची उम्रो पे संजीदगी छा गई,
मेरे बच्चों की किसने हँसी छीन ली !!

लाब पे आई तेरे जो मेरे दिल मॆं थी,
तूने मुझसे मेरी बात ही छीन ली
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2012, 04:24:28 PM »
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bahut khoob..
aala darje ka kalaam Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2012, 05:21:35 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 05, 2012, 04:19:18 PM
कुछ अँधेरे दिये, रौशनी छीन ली
इक सितमगर ने सारी खुशी छीन ली !!

 Applause Applause

ले लिया इक नजर में ही दिल आपने,
चीज जो काम की थी, वही छीन ली !!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ऐ गमे-ज़िन्दगी तुमने ये क्या  किया,
मुझको आँसू दिये और हँसी छीन ली !!

 Applause Applause

कच्ची उम्रो पे संजीदगी छा गई,
मेरे बच्चों की किसने हँसी छीन ली !!

 Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

लाब पे आई तेरे जो मेरे दिल मॆं थी,
तूने मुझसे मेरी बात ही छीन ली


 Applause Applause


bahut bahut khoob suman ji..

ek se badkar ek sher kahi hai aapne..

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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2012, 06:40:37 PM »
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bahut khoob suman ji kabil-e-tareef kalaam
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2012, 12:30:54 AM »
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bahut khoob suman ji, dhero dad
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2012, 02:38:10 AM »
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bahut khoobsurati se likhi gayi hai aap ki rachana....
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2012, 04:09:34 AM »
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waah waah wonderful
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2012, 09:41:46 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 05, 2012, 04:19:18 PM
कुछ अँधेरे दिये, रौशनी छीन ली
इक सितमगर ने सारी खुशी छीन ली !!

ले लिया इक नजर में ही दिल आपने,
चीज जो काम की थी, वही छीन ली !!

ऐ गमे-ज़िन्दगी तुमने ये क्या  किया,
मुझको आँसू दिये और हँसी छीन ली !!

कच्ची उम्रो पे संजीदगी छा गई,
मेरे बच्चों की किसने हँसी छीन ली !!

लाब पे आई तेरे जो मेरे दिल मॆं थी,
तूने मुझसे मेरी बात ही छीन ली





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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2012, 10:45:29 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob, bahut bahut sundar... bahut achcha likha hai aapne Suman ji...!!!
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Suman ji, behetareen, 'bachcho ki masoomiyat' wala sher to inshaallah..bahot khoob
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2012, 11:57:58 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 05, 2012, 04:19:18 PM
कुछ अँधेरे दिये, रौशनी छीन ली
इक सितमगर ने सारी खुशी छीन ली !!

ले लिया इक नजर में ही दिल आपने,
चीज जो काम की थी, वही छीन ली !!

ऐ गमे-ज़िन्दगी तुमने ये क्या  किया,
मुझको आँसू दिये और हँसी छीन ली !!

कच्ची उम्रो पे संजीदगी छा गई,
मेरे बच्चों की किसने हँसी छीन ली !!

लाब पे आई तेरे जो मेरे दिल मॆं थी,
तूने मुझसे मेरी बात ही छीन ली






 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2012, 12:08:46 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 05, 2012, 04:24:28 PM
bahut khoob..
aala darje ka kalaam Applause Applause

thank you mkv jee
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 05, 2012, 05:21:35 PM
bahut bahut khoob suman ji..

ek se badkar ek sher kahi hai aapne..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya Touhid  jee
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Quote from: ahujagd on September 05, 2012, 06:40:37 PM
bahut khoob suman ji kabil-e-tareef kalaam
ghansham das ahuja
shukriya ahuja sb
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 06, 2012, 12:30:54 AM
bahut khoob suman ji, dhero dad
thank you nandbahu jee
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