जब से अहसास की अग्नि में - By"betaab".

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जब से अहसास की अग्नि में जल रहा हूँ,
बन के कीमिया और भी निखर रहा हूँ.

अपने ज़मीर की गलियों में भटकते हुए,
बन के खुश्वू तेरी साँसों में ठहर रहा हूँ.

मुझको सुनना है तो आँखों से सुनकर देखो,
तेरा कल हूँ जो आज में होकर गुजर रहा हूँ.

मुझको इस जहाँ में न ढूंढना "बेताब",
तेरा ही अंश बनके तुझमें बसर रहा हूँ

   Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab"
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2016, 02:16:20 PM »
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wah wah kya baat hai...last two lines superb
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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2016, 02:47:24 PM »
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wah wah kya baat hai...last two lines
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bahut bahut umdah waah waaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2016, 05:46:25 AM »
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on March 29, 2016, 01:27:24 PM
जब से अहसास की अग्नि में जल रहा हूँ,
बन के कीमिया और भी निखर रहा हूँ.

अपने ज़मीर की गलियों में भटकते हुए,
बन के खुश्वू तेरी साँसों में ठहर रहा हूँ.

मुझको सुनना है तो आँखों से सुनकर देखो,
तेरा कल हूँ जो आज में होकर गुजर रहा हूँ.

मुझको इस जहाँ में न ढूंढना "बेताब",
तेरा ही अंश बनके तुझमें बसर रहा हूँ

  Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab"


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Bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause
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bahut bahut umdah waah waaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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Thanx

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