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कभी साथी तो कभी साकी बनके मिलते हो,
कौन सा रूप तेरा असली है कौन सा रूप तेरा जाली है.

कल रात मैकदे में तुम क्यों नहीं आये,
येही वज़ह है हर रिंद का जाम खाली है.

जो भी डूबा तेरी आँखों में निकल न पाया कभी,
अब तू ही बता तूने कितनो की जान निकाली है.

तेरी मदभरी आँखों की झील की गहराई से मैंने ,
जाने कितने डूबे हुए आशिकों की लाश निकाली है.

तुम अपने हुस्न का इस तरह छिडकाव न करो "बेताब".
फिर न कहना मेरे हुस्न का जाम खाली है.


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कभी साथी तो कभी साकी बनके मिलते हो,
कौन सा रूप तेरा असली है कौन सा रूप तेरा जाली है.

कल रात मैकदे में तुम क्यों नहीं आये,
येही वज़ह है हर रिंद का जाम खाली है.

जो भी डूबा तेरी आँखों में निकल न पाया कभी,
अब तू ही बता तूने कितनो की जान निकाली है.

तेरी मदभरी आँखों की झील की गहराई से मैंने ,
जाने कितने डूबे हुए आशिकों की लाश निकाली है.

तुम अपने हुस्न का इस तरह छिडकाव न करो "बेताब".
फिर न कहना मेरे हुस्न का जाम खाली है.


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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2013, 05:46:15 PM »
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Saksena Jee Aadaab...!


Badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai jee... achche ashaar rahe..
Hume yeH quoted ashaar behad khoobsurat aur umdaa lage..

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye janab ...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...



कल रात मैकदे में तुम क्यों नहीं आये,
येही वज़ह है हर रिंद का जाम खाली है.

जो भी डूबा तेरी आँखों में निकल न पाया कभी,
अब तू ही बता तूने कितनो की जान निकाली है.



    Composed by:- D K Saxena " Betaab"
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2013, 08:29:19 PM »
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Saksena Jee Aadaab...!


Badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai jee... achche ashaar rahe..
Hume yeH quoted ashaar behad khoobsurat aur umdaa lage..

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye janab ...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Parwaz ji. Bahut dino baad aapka comment mila. Dil se khushi huee. Shukria.
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