तेरे हिस्से का दर्द :- By "Betaab"

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बेखुदी में एक अज़ब काम कर गए,
अपनी चाहतों को दुश्मनों के नाम कर गए,

पास हो के भी तुझको महसूस न कर पाए हम,
तेरी मोहब्बत को मुफ्त में बदनाम कर गए.

रातों में तेरे ख्वाब देखूं तो किस तरह देखूं,
जुदाई के वो लम्हे मेरी रातें ख़राब कर गए.

तुझको फिर से मनाने की खातिर,
तेरे हिस्से का दर्द खुद में ज़ब्त कर गए.


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बेखुदी में एक अज़ब काम कर गए,
अपनी चाहतों को दुश्मनों के नाम कर गए,
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बेखुदी में एक अज़ब काम कर गए,
अपनी चाहतों को दुश्मनों के नाम कर गए,

पास हो के भी तुझको महसूस न कर पाए हम,
तेरी मोहब्बत को मुफ्त में बदनाम कर गए.

रातों में तेरे ख्वाब देखूं तो किस तरह देखूं,
जुदाई के वो लम्हे मेरी रातें ख़राब कर गए.

तुझको फिर से मनाने की खातिर,
तेरे हिस्से का दर्द खुद में ज़ब्त कर गए.


      Composed by ;- D K Saxena " Betaab"

nice,sir but kafiya are dissimilar
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Bahut umda peshkash hai betaab jee..happy9
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बेखुदी में एक अज़ब काम कर गए,
अपनी चाहतों को दुश्मनों के नाम कर गए,
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nice,sir but kafiya are dissimilar
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