न पल में हसाऊँगा

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न पल में हसाऊँगा न पल में रुलाऊंगा,
मैं तो एक बुत हूँ पल भर में टूट जाऊंगा.

तेरी तरह मैं तो चल सकता नहीं,
कैसे कह दूं हर तरफ तेरे पास नज़र आऊँगा.

मैं तो पत्थर था सरे राह खा रहा था ठोकरें,
अब तू ही बता तेरे अहसानों से मैं कैसे उभर पाऊंगा.

मुझको बुत बनाके तूने किस्मत बदल दी मेरी,
अब तो मैं तेरे घर के किसी कमरे में नज़र आऊँगा.

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न पल में हसाऊँगा न पल में रुलाऊंगा,
मैं तो एक बुत हूँ पल भर में टूट जाऊंगा.
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न पल में हसाऊँगा न पल में रुलाऊंगा,
मैं तो एक बुत हूँ पल भर में टूट जाऊंगा.
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