नादान बचे हैं bekarar

by bekarar on December 11, 2012, 04:12:47 PM
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इंसानियत बची नहीं, इंसान बचे हैं,
ईमान के बस चौखटे, बेईमान बचे हैं

अफवाहों की हवाओं से तिनके तो उड़ गए,
विश्वास की बुनियाद के मकान बचे हैं,

चतुर-सुजान लोग तो लड़-भिड के मर गए,
अब लोग जो बचे हैं वो नादान बचे हैं,

जिन जगहों पे हुआ नहीं, मंदिर कोई आबाद,
खुले आसमा के नीचे ही भगवान् बचे हैं,

नंगे बदन पे झूलता "जनेऊ" का धागा,
ग़ुरबत के मेरे पास ये निशाँ बचे हैं
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2012, 04:42:53 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh jnaaaabbb
lajwaaaaabbbbb Applause Applause Applause

dheroon daad  aapka 1-1 panth khoob likha  gya Applause

bas jism ki bhook hai aaj kal hak kisi mai ...

soni-o-mahival  ke kisse sunne vale bas kaan bachee hain !!
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2012, 05:58:17 PM »
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इंसानियत बची नहीं, इंसान बचे हैं,
ईमान के बस चौखटे, बेईमान बचे हैं

अफवाहों की हवाओं से तिनके तो उड़ गए,
विश्वास की बुनियाद के मकान बचे हैं,

चतुर-सुजान लोग तो लड़-भिड के मर गए,
अब लोग जो बचे हैं वो नादान बचे हैं,

जिन जगहों पे हुआ नहीं, मंदिर कोई आबाद,
खुले आसमा के नीचे ही भगवान् बचे हैं,

नंगे बदन पे झूलता "जनेऊ" का धागा,
ग़ुरबत के मेरे पास ये निशाँ बचे हैं



Justttttt Speechless!!!!!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2012, 06:16:54 PM »
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Wah wah kya kahu, kitna behtareen likha hai, ke aap ne toh kuch kehne layak bhi nahi chhoda...just superb just superb......honored to read..
Rau aap ki khidmat mein...
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2012, 07:01:37 PM »
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Beqaraar Sahaab Aadaab!


Wallaah yeH beqaraari ka aalaam kia kahne... jab bhi
aate haiN janab tez taraar khayaaloN se bhare ashaar
chhod jaate haiN... Usual Smile

Behad khoob aur umdaa kalaam rahi janab.. sabhi ashaar
aik se badhkar aik rahe... waqai haqeekhat ko aainaa
karti hai aapki kalaam... Usual Smile

humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye,, aur khususi guzarish hai ke aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2012, 07:35:27 PM »
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इंसानियत बची नहीं, इंसान बचे हैं,
ईमान के बस चौखटे, बेईमान बचे हैं
insaan bhi kam hi nazar aate hain. Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
अफवाहों की हवाओं से तिनके तो उड़ गए,
विश्वास की बुनियाद के मकान बचे हैं,
 per ghar nazar nahin aate crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2

चतुर-सुजान लोग तो लड़-भिड के मर गए,
अब लोग जो बचे हैं वो नादान बचे हैं,
nadaan koi nahin shaitaan hain zadater log Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

जिन जगहों पे हुआ नहीं, मंदिर कोई आबाद,
खुले आसमा के नीचे ही भगवान् बचे हैं,

 kab tak ladte rahein mazhab ki duhaai dekar tearyeyed

नंगे बदन पे झूलता "जनेऊ" का धागा,
ग़ुरबत के मेरे पास ये निशाँ बचे हैं


 bahut khoob bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


  bahut hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii pyara kalaam bekaraar ji.......!
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2012, 12:42:59 AM »
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just superb
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2012, 03:01:47 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2012, 04:02:39 AM »
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 Applause
  bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2012, 11:12:35 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
brilliant creation
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«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2012, 12:44:37 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2012, 04:15:55 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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