पल दो पल तो मुस्कराने दो,

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पल दो पल तो मुस्कराने दो,
फिर चाहें ग़म में डूब जाने दो.

चार दिन की जिंदगी बहुत है लेकिन,
हाथ में खुशियों का जाम उठाने तो दो.

एक दिन मेरे पास भी दिलवर होगा,
किसी हसीना से दिल लगाने तो दो.

सुना है ठोंकर खाने से आ जाती है अक्ल ,
रास्ते में पड़े पत्थर से ठोकर खाने तो दो.

पलट के मयकदे का निज़ाम रख दुंगा,
बगल में साकी और हाथ में जाम आने तो दो.

मेरी धुन पे नाचेगा ज़माना सारा,
प्यार की मुरलियां बजाने तो दो.

Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".
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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2013, 11:08:03 PM »
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पल दो पल तो मुस्कराने दो,
फिर चाहें ग़म में डूब जाने दो.
Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on September 09, 2013, 10:34:54 PM
पल दो पल तो मुस्कराने दो,
फिर चाहें ग़म में डूब जाने दो.

चार दिन की जिंदगी बहुत है लेकिन,
हाथ में खुशियों का जाम उठाने तो दो.

एक दिन मेरे पास भी दिलवर होगा,
किसी हसीना से दिल लगाने तो दो.

सुना है ठोंकर खाने से आ जाती है अक्ल ,
रास्ते में पड़े पत्थर से ठोकर खाने तो दो.

पलट के मयकदे का निज़ाम रख दुंगा,
बगल में साकी और हाथ में जाम आने तो दो.

मेरी धुन पे नाचेगा ज़माना सारा,
प्यार की मुरलियां बजाने तो दो.

Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".

वाह वाह बहुत खूब.
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Saxena ji, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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Bahaut achchhe .... Bahaut khoob ... Daad Saxena ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 10, 2013, 09:47:20 AM »
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पल दो पल तो मुस्कराने दो,
फिर चाहें ग़म में डूब जाने दो.वाह वाह बहुत खूब.
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waah waah waah waah Saxena ji, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!

Thanks for ur valuable comments.
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Bahaut achchhe .... Bahaut khoob ... Daad Saxena ji
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