पवन कहलाये हम आज इतने महशूर हो गये.......

by pawan16 on August 04, 2012, 10:18:14 AM
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आज  अपने एहसासो मे इतने  चूर हो गये,
लगा हम दुनिया से जुदा खुद से ही दुर हो गये,
जब हम लिखने मे हम इतने मगरुर हो गये,
हमारे लिखे लफ्स तुम्हारे दिल के दस्तूर हो गये,
पढे तुमने हर हमारे जज्बात तुम इतने मजबूर हो गये,
पढकर ये लफ्स तुम्हारे दिल के निशान गहरे जरुर हो गये
धीरे-धीरे हम तुम्हारे सांसो  मे सुरुर हो गये,
पवन कहलाये हम आज इतने महशूर हो गये..........
.....पवन
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2012, 11:01:46 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2012, 01:34:19 PM »
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vaaah vaaah kya baat hai pawan

pawan kahlaaye ham aaj itne mashhoor ho gaye
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2012, 04:53:25 PM »
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आज  अपने एहसासो मे इतने  चूर हो गये,
लगा हम दुनिया से जुदा खुद से ही दुर हो गये,
जब हम लिखने मे हम इतने मगरुर हो गये,
हमारे लिखे लफ्स तुम्हारे दिल के दस्तूर हो गये,
पढे तुमने हर हमारे जज्बात तुम इतने मजबूर हो गये,
पढकर ये लफ्स तुम्हारे दिल के निशान गहरे जरुर हो गये
धीरे-धीरे हम तुम्हारे सांसो  मे सुरुर हो गये,
पवन कहलाये हम आज इतने महशूर हो गये..........
.....पवन
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2012, 06:07:57 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2012, 07:01:04 PM »
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आज  अपने एहसासो मे इतने  चूर हो गये, icon_scratch icon_scratch
लगा हम दुनिया से जुदा खुद से ही दुर हो गये,
जब हम लिखने मे हम इतने मगरुर हो गये, icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch 'hum' yahaan ek baar aanaa chahiye
हमारे लिखे लफ्स तुम्हारे दिल के दस्तूर हो गये,
पढे तुमने हर हमारे जज्बात तुम इतने मजबूर हो गये, icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
पढकर ये लफ्स तुम्हारे दिल के निशान गहरे जरुर हो गये
धीरे-धीरे हम तुम्हारे सांसो  मे सुरुर हो गये,
पवन कहलाये हम आज इतने महशूर हो गये..........
.....पवन

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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2012, 11:33:23 PM »
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bahut badhiyaji
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2012, 11:35:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2012, 05:59:42 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2012, 04:22:46 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai Pawan ji... bahut khoob....!!!  Applause Applause Applause
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