मन्दम्-मन्दम् नुदति पवनश्चानुकूलो यथा त्वाम्

by abdbundeli on March 01, 2014, 02:35:43 PM
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Though, 'translations' seldom succeed in representing the original text to their core, yet 'people' are seen succeeding in a big way! I had translated, 'Meghdootam' in HINDI (verse to verse), but only the first 20 'shloks' in English. My translation of the following shlok (Poorwa Megham - 10), follows as below:-

मन्दम्-मन्दम् नुदति पवनश्चानुकूलो यथा त्वाम्
बामश्चायम् नदति मधुरम् चातकस्ते सगन्ध:!
गर्भाधानक्षणपरिचयान्नूनमाबद्धमाला:
सेविष्यन्ते नयन्सुभगम् खे भवनतम् बलाका:!!१०!!

"A Lovely Light Breeze Blows Slowly: Favourably
To Propel You Northwards, Towards The Goal!
Chataka, In Anticipation, In His Sweet Tune,
The Ensuing Rains Have Turned Him That Hilarious,
Is Singing On Your Left Pleasantly-Proudly!
Also, In Anticipation Of The Moments Sweet,
In View Of Nearing Season Of Their Conceptions,
The Female Cranes Are Flying, In Close Company
Of Their Respective Males, In Lovely Rows
High In The Sky, Fondling Them For The Event;
Serving You, As Well, With Eye-Charming Movements!"


"मंद -मंथर गति, पथ-अनुकूल, पवन-प्रवहन; 'पी कहाँ' सगर्व
बोलता चातक मृदु  तव बाम! गर्भ-धारण-क्षण सुख मधुपर्व
लेख, अनुभूति निमित्त बलाक-प्रेमिकाएं प्रिय को  सत्कार,
मुदित सेवा करतीं, अभिराम पंक्तियों में कर गगन-विहार!!"  

           - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'/ abd bundeli        
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2014, 02:40:53 PM »
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अति उत्तम प्रयास......
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2014, 05:24:30 PM »
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dono bhashaon ki  jitni jankaari  hai  uske anusaar
mujhe yeh aapka translation bahut bahut sundar laga .
bahut bahut badhai aapko.
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2014, 01:23:26 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 01, 2014, 02:40:53 PM
bahut sunder

Dhanyawaad, Saini ji!
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on March 01, 2014, 02:57:49 PM
अति उत्तम प्रयास......

Dhanyawaad, Amit ji!
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 01, 2014, 05:24:30 PM
dono bhashaon ki  jitni jankaari  hai  uske anusaar
mujhe yeh aapka translation bahut bahut sundar laga .
bahut bahut badhai aapko.

Loads of thanks, Siddiqui ji!
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Quote from: nandbahu on March 01, 2014, 08:04:51 PM
very nice

THANKS!
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Quote from: ahujagd on March 01, 2014, 08:33:40 PM
very nice

Thanks!
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2014, 02:14:46 PM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on March 02, 2014, 01:23:26 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wow vry nic keep writing

Loads of thanks!
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