//...मिट्टी का बंदा हूँ मिट्टी में मिल जाऊँगा...// @Advo.RavinderRavi'Sagar'

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 21, 2013, 12:33:59 AM
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मिट्टी का बंदा हूँ,
मिट्टी में मिल जाऊँगा.!
दो पल की हस्ती है,
जाने कब चला जाऊँगा.!!
कुछ करने आया था,
क्या पूरा कर पाऊँगा.!
अपनो की उमीद पा,
खरा भी उतार पाऊँगा.!!
उसके हाथ डोर अपनी,
और ना माँग पाऊँगा.!
जब चाहे भुला लेगा,
उसे ना कहना पाऊँगा.!!
अपनी और से काम,
पूरे कर ही जाऊँगा.!
फिर भी जानता हूँ,
काम कोई छोड़ जाऊँगा.!!
लोग आते जाने को,
मैं भी चला जाऊँगा.!
याद करे दुनिया मुझको,
काम कोई कर जाऊँगा.!!


Mitti ka banda hun,
Mitti mein mil jaoonga.!
Do pal ki hasti hai,
Jaane kab chala jaoonga.!!
Kuch karne aaya tha,
Kya poora kar paoonga.!
Apno ki umeed pa,
Khara bhi utar paoonga.!!
Uske haath dor apni,
Aur na maang paoonga.!
Jab chahe bhula lega,
Use na kahna paoonga.!!
Apni aur se kaam,
Poore kar hi jaoonga.!
Phir bhi jaanta hun,
Kaam koyi chod jaoonga.!!
Log aate jaane ko,
Main bhi chala jaoonga.!
Yaad kare Duniya mujhko,
Kaam koyi kar jaoonga.!!
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2013, 12:59:08 AM »
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waah ravi jee..kya kehne..bahut bahut khoob likha hai..happy9

Aur yakeen maniye aap itne umda kalamo.N se nawaaz kar hamesha sab ke dil me hi rahenge..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2013, 01:39:46 AM »
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waah waah waah waah Ravi ji, bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2013, 08:05:51 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2013, 08:57:53 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2013, 01:58:04 PM »
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Bahut hi achchi soch aur bahut hi achche khayaal ravi ji.. dheron dheron daad..
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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2013, 01:12:23 AM »
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Thanks allot.Nshwani ji.
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waah ravi jee..kya kehne..bahut bahut khoob likha hai..happy9

Aur yakeen maniye aap itne umda kalamo.N se nawaaz kar hamesha sab ke dil me hi rahenge..happy9
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2013, 01:33:04 AM »
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Shuqriya Hriday jee.
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waah waah waah waah Ravi ji, bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2013, 02:25:47 AM »
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Thankyou !
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2013, 02:38:21 AM »
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Thanks Sir.
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«Reply #10 on: September 22, 2013, 02:41:22 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shqriya Aqsh Jee.
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Bahut hi achchi soch aur bahut hi achche khayaal ravi ji.. dheron dheron daad..
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