sksaini4
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मुझसे रूखी बात न कर |
ज़ुल्मों की बरसात न कर ||
बद्कारों का साथ न कर |
ओछी अपनी ज़ात न कर ||
दिन को दिन कह रात न कर |
झगड़ा यूँ बेबात न कर ||
ख़ुद्दारी कुछ सीख मियाँ |
सबके आगे हाथ न कर ||
उसकी भी सुन बात कोई |
अपनी - अपनी बात न कर ||
संसद के अन्दर तू कभी |
धक्का – मुक्की लात न कर ||
डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
Mujh se rookhee baat n kar.
ZulmoN kee barsaat n kar.
BadkaaroN kaa saath n kar.
Ochhee apnee zaat n kar.
Din ko din kah raat n kar.
Jhagdaa yooN bebaat n kar.
Khuddaaree kuchh seekh miyaaN.
Sabke aage haath n kar.
Uskee bhee sun baat koi .
Apnee apnee baat n kar.
Sansad ke andar too kabhee.
Dhakkaa – mukkee laat n kar.
Dr.Surendra Saini
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2011, 10:15:39 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2011, 12:55:56 PM » |
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DARD È ULFAT SEHNA BHI MOHABBAT H KISI SE DUR RAHNA BHI MOHABBAT H DIL KI HER BAAT JUBA SE KAHNA ZAROORI NAHI KISI KI YAAD M CHUP RAHNA BHI MOHABBAT H
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2011, 01:04:32 PM » |
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DIL KI BAAT ....... Sun LIZYE.....
DUNYA H YE YAHAN WAFA NHI MILTI MOHABBAT YAHAN KABHI MUKAMMAL NAHI NAHI HOTI JAAN BHI CHALI JATI H LONGO KO BATANE ME PHIR BHI LONGO KO KISI KI WAFA NZR NAHI ATI
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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2011, 02:31:12 PM » |
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"ख़ुद्दारी कुछ सीख मियाँ| सबके आगे हाथ न कर||"  अच्छा शे'र| अच्छी ग़ज़ल| बधाई | शुभकामनायें| -अरुण मिश्र. |
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2011, 03:29:22 PM » |
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bahut khoob
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sksaini4
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2011, 04:43:20 AM » |
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Shihab ji shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2011, 06:06:13 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2013, 10:50:04 AM » |
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Qalb ji shukriya
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«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2013, 10:57:17 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Saini Ji, bahut bahut badhai aur dheron daad
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2013, 11:19:01 AM » |
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aasif saheb shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2013, 11:27:12 AM » |
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Mujh se rookhee baat n kar.
ZulmoN kee barsaat n kar.
BadkaaroN kaa saath n kar.
Ochhee apnee zaat n kar.
Din ko din kah raat n kar.
Jhagdaa yooN bebaat n kar.
Khuddaaree kuchh seekh miyaaN.
Sabke aage haath n kar.
Uskee bhee sun baat koi .
Apnee apnee baat n kar.
Sansad ke andar too kabhee.
Dhakkaa – mukkee laat n kar.
Dr.Surendra Saini
kya kahu .... bahut bahut pyara kalam pesh kiya hai aapne saini sb. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. last four lines fantastic. overall .... EXCELLANT  |
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sksaini4
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2013, 03:13:23 PM » |
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Mishraa ji dhanyawaad
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«Reply #14 on: January 29, 2013, 04:37:22 AM » |
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Hasan bhai jaan shukriya
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