मुझे अल्लादीन कर गया********************************ALFAAZ

by alfaaz on May 22, 2015, 06:39:37 PM
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बचपन की कुछ बात याद आयी 
जो गालों को नमकिन कर गया
मेरे हातों में चिराग थमाकर
मुझे अल्लादीन कर गया

उर्दू का शुक्र गुज़ार हैं जमाना 
जो लबज़ों को आफ्रीं कर गया
मुसीबत को मोहब्बत और
नागिन को नाज़निन कर गया

कितने प्यार से पाला था उसे
जो गुलगूँ मेरा आस्तीन कर गया
भूल मेरी थी जो गैरों को छोडकर
मैं अपनो पे यकिन कर गया

उसने रईस समझा होगा मुझे  के 
कुछ यूँ मैं बज़्म में बन-ठन कर गया
कोस रहा होगा अपनी तक़दीर को 
वो मेरा खाली बटवा छिन कर गया
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«Reply #1 on: May 22, 2015, 06:42:48 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa baat hai Raj ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, abhi RAU dene ki koshish kar rahaa thaa aapko magar de nahi paayaa, error aa rahaa hai ki waqt pooraa nahi huwaa, main kal subah detaa hoon aapkaa due waalaa RAU, likhaa hi aapne itnaa masssttt hai ki apne aap haath RAU waale plus sig tak pahuch gaye mere...!!!

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2015, 01:05:44 AM »
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waah waah Alfaaz bhai....hathke likhte ho bahut aap..bole to ekdum mast....sabdon ka chayan bhi khoob hota hai aur bhaavnaaye bhi .....mujhe rau dena aata nahin warna aaj ki hriday bhai ki rachna aur aapki rachena dono ko deta ...khair will inquire about it...meri taref se bahut bahut shukriya is tareh ki rachna share karne ke liye Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2015, 03:58:54 AM »
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@Raj ji: Aapkaa RAU de diyaa maine abhi...!!!


@Akash ji: RAU dene ke liye jisko dena ho, left side par uske naam ke niche ek plus sign rehtaa hai orange colour mein, uspe click karnaa hotaa hai...aap 8hrs mein ek hi RAU de sakte hain.. aur same user ko 15hrs mein ek... !!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2015, 04:56:49 AM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa baat hai Raj ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, abhi RAU dene ki koshish kar rahaa thaa aapko magar de nahi paayaa, error aa rahaa hai ki waqt pooraa nahi huwaa, main kal subah detaa hoon aapkaa due waalaa RAU, likhaa hi aapne itnaa masssttt hai ki apne aap haath RAU waale plus sig tak pahuch gaye mere...!!!

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

rau to theek hai bhai par jo labz tareef ke hain wo hamesha yaad aayenge. Shukriya.
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2015, 05:01:48 AM »
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waah waah Alfaaz bhai....hathke likhte ho bahut aap..bole to ekdum mast....sabdon ka chayan bhi khoob hota hai aur bhaavnaaye bhi .....mujhe rau dena aata nahin warna aaj ki hriday bhai ki rachna aur aapki rachena dono ko deta ...khair will inquire about it...meri taref se bahut bahut shukriya is tareh ki rachna share karne ke liye Usual Smile
aakash ji us raau ko maarye goli.
asal baat hai ki aapko meri likhi cheez pasand aayi.
and that is what which will stay forever.
thanks bro.
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2015, 05:44:36 AM »
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2015, 05:50:35 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2015, 08:06:58 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2015, 09:23:01 AM »
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Awesome. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2015, 06:31:40 PM »
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you deserve Rau.
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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2015, 09:11:14 PM »
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waah waah waah
thank you sir
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thank you
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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you deserve Rau.
thank you
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