रमजान के महीने मे छत पर ना आया करो.!! @Advo.RavinderRavi'Sagar'

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रमजान के महीने मे छत पर ना आया करो.!
कोई रोज़ेदार रोज़ा छोड़ देगा महताब जानकार.!!
वक़्त-बेवक़्त अपने घर से बाहर ना निकला करो.!
कोई जान लूटा देगा तुझे अपनी जान जानकार.!!
छलकते जाम के पैमाने आँखो के काबू मे रखो.!
कोई प्यास भुझा लेगा तुझे मैखाना जानकार.!!
यूँ छिप-छिप कर झरोखो से जो देखा करोगे.!
कोई खुदा से माँग लेगा तुझे वरदान जानकार.!!
यूँ होंठो पर ना बिखेरो तबस्सुम की कहकशां.!
कोई अपना मान लेगा तुझे तेरी हाँ जानकार.!!


Ramjaan ke mahine me chat par na aaya karo.!
Koyi Rozedaar Roza chod dega Mehtaab jankar.!!
Waqt-Bewaqt apne ghar se bahar na nikla karo.!
Koyi jaan luta dega tujhe apni jaan jankar.!!
Chalkte jaam ke paimane aankho ke kabu me rakho.!
Koyi Pyaas bhujha lega tujhe maikhaana jankar.!!
Yun chip-chip kar jharokho se jo dekha karoge.!
Koyi Khuda se maang lega tujhe Vardaan jankar.!!
Yun Hontho par na bikhero tabassum ki kehkashan.!
Koyi apna maan lega tujhe teri Haan jankar.!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2013, 10:41:52 PM »
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waah waah waah kya baat hai ravi jee..behad umda..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2013, 10:44:54 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 14, 2013, 08:11:50 PM

रमजान के महीने मे छत पर ना आया करो.!
कोई रोज़ेदार रोज़ा खोल देगा महताब जानकार.!!
वक़्त-बेवक़्त अपने घर से बाहर ना निकला करो.!
कोई जान लूटा देगा तुझे अपनी जान जानकार.!!
छलकते जाम के पैमाने आँखो के काबू मे रखो.!
कोई प्यास भुझा लेगा तुझे मैखाना जानकार.!!
यूँ छिप-छिप कर झरोखो से जो देखा करोगे.!
कोई खुदा से माँग लेगा तुझे वरदान जानकार.!!
यूँ होंठो पर ना बिखेरो तबस्सुम की कहकशां.!
कोई अपना मान लेगा तुझे तेरी हाँ जानकार.!!


Ramjaan ke mahine me chat par na aaya karo.!
Koyi Rozedaar Roza khol dega Mehtaab jankar.!!
Waqt-Bewaqt apne ghar se bahar na nikla karo.!
Koyi jaan luta dega tujhe apni jaan jankar.!!
Chalkte jaam ke paimane aankho ke kabu me rakho.!
Koyi Pyaas bhujha lega tujhe maikhaana jankar.!!
Yun chip-chip kar jharokho se jo dekha karoge.!
Koyi Khuda se maang lega tujhe Vardaan jankar.!!
Yun Hontho par na bikhero tabassum ki kehkashan.!
Koyi apna maan lega tujhe teri Haan jankar.!!

ravi bhai musalmaano.n ke jazbaat ka aur mazhab ka kuch to qadr karo ab roza ramzaan namaaz ko to apne ishq mohaabt mein na shamil karo.

aur roza chaand dekh kar nahin kholte hain bhaijaan. ye karwachauth ka upwaas nahi hai ki chaand ka pratibimb dekh kar khola jata hai.

roza  roz shaam ki azaan ke saath khola jata hai.

haan ramzaan.idd.bakrid aur baaqi saare mahine chaand dekh kar hi shuru hote hain.

meri guzarish hai.bina ilm ke likhna jehaalat ka sabab banta hai

thanx
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2013, 11:24:59 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 14, 2013, 10:44:54 PM

ravi bhai musalmaano.n ke jazbaat ka aur mazhab ka kuch to qadr karo ab roza ramzaan namaaz ko to apne ishq mohaabt mein na shamil karo.

aur roza chaand dekh kar nahin kholte hain bhaijaan. ye karwachauth ka upwaas nahi hai ki chaand ka pratibimb dekh kar khola jata hai.

roza  roz shaam ki azaan ke saath khola jata hai.

haan ramzaan.idd.bakrid aur baaqi saare mahine chaand dekh kar hi shuru hote hain.

meri guzarish hai.bina ilm ke likhna jehaalat ka sabab banta hai

thanx




Please Neta na Bano jo har baat ko galt banaa dete hain,Mujhe bhi ptaa hai Roza kab kholte hain Aur Jis Tarha Se Aapne Apna Dusra Gyaan Diya Hai Wo Bhi Galt Hai,Hum Yahan Bahas Krne Nahin Hain So Please Shayari ko SAMZHIYE Aur Netagiri na Kariye Please,Please....
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2013, 11:50:16 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 14, 2013, 11:24:59 PM
Please Neta na Bano jo har baat ko galt banaa dete hain,Mujhe bhi ptaa hai Roza kab kholte hain Aur Jis Tarha Se Aapne Apna Dusra Gyaan Diya Hai Wo Bhi Galt Hai,Hum Yahan Bahas Krne Nahin Hain So Please Shayari ko SAMZHIYE Aur Netagiri na Kariye Please,Please....
ravinderji apne bilkul sahi answer diya hai,kuch logo ko har side pe politics karne ki habit hoti hai.shayar ka heart to sab ko pyaar karta hai,politics nahi
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2013, 12:03:35 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2013, 12:38:58 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 14, 2013, 11:24:59 PM
Please Neta na Bano jo har baat ko galt banaa dete hain,Mujhe bhi ptaa hai Roza kab kholte hain Aur Jis Tarha Se Aapne Apna Dusra Gyaan Diya Hai Wo Bhi Galt Hai,Hum Yahan Bahas Krne Nahin Hain So Please Shayari ko SAMZHIYE Aur Netagiri na Kariye Please,Please....
good reply ravinderaji
& nice poerty too
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2013, 01:22:30 AM »
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 wave love9
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2013, 01:41:35 AM »
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kon hai ye khamosh awaaz?kya janta hai karwachauth ke bare me?kitni gandi soch hai iski?
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2013, 02:33:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause gorgeous sir
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2013, 03:07:45 PM »
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Awesome Ravindra Sir

Keep writing..
I liked the replies from you, Sapna and shuruti.

there are many who want to dictate on the terms of relegion.
not tolerable.
Forget the negative comments. Let's not discuss religion but truth is. the site is dominated by a special section including moderators.
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2013, 03:53:38 PM »
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shuru ki do lines yaani dono misre yaani pehla sher yoindia par ab tak padhe gaye meri sabse pasandeeda sheron me hain.
agar aapne ise khud likha hai to bahut bahut badhai baaki main yehi request karunga aur shayron se ki pls shayari me mazhabi rang na gholen i mean shayari ko shayari ke istar par samjhen aur apne tasavvur ko aur abaad karen jaise Ravi ji ne kiya hai.

yun hi likhte rahen.
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2013, 05:39:31 PM »
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यो इंडिया एक हवाई दुनिया है. यहाँ कुछ भी  हवाई हो सकता है. यहाँ सबकी पहचान, जान-पहचान हवाई है इसलिए इस हवाई दुनिया के हवाई दोस्तो इस हवाई दुनिया की हवा को समझकर इसका हवाई आनन्द लो.
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«Reply #13 on: July 15, 2013, 09:12:45 PM »
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Quote from: @Kaash on July 15, 2013, 03:53:38 PM
shuru ki do lines yaani dono misre yaani pehla sher yoindia par ab tak padhe gaye meri sabse pasandeeda sheron me hain.
agar aapne ise khud likha hai to bahut bahut badhai baaki main yehi request karunga aur shayron se ki pls shayari me mazhabi rang na gholen i mean shayari ko shayari ke istar par samjhen aur apne tasavvur ko aur abaad karen jaise Ravi ji ne kiya hai.

yun hi likhte rahen.
Yes,It's My Own Creation.Hosla Bhadane Ke Liye Aap Ka Bahut-Bahut Shuqriya,Warna Main To Yahaan Likhna Hi Chodne Ki Soch Raha Tha.Thanks Again.
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«Reply #14 on: July 16, 2013, 12:20:32 AM »
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Quote from: srishti raj chintak on July 15, 2013, 05:39:31 PM
यो इंडिया एक हवाई दुनिया है. यहाँ कुछ भी  हवाई हो सकता है. यहाँ सबकी पहचान, जान-पहचान हवाई है इसलिए इस हवाई दुनिया के हवाई दोस्तो इस हवाई दुनिया की हवा को समझकर इसका हवाई आनन्द लो.
सलाह के लिए शुक़रिया जी.
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