रिश्तों की बुनियादों में दीमक लगा दी तुमने - By "Betaab"

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मेरी वफ़ा तोलते क्यों हो,
शक की राहें खोलते क्यों हो.

कुछ तो भरोसा करो मुझ पर,
मेरी जिंदगी में ज़हर घोलते क्यों हो.

रिश्तों की बुनियादों में दीमक लगा दी तुमने,
आपसी प्यार का घर तोड़ते क्यों हो.

रिश्ते  तो है चार पहिओ की गाडी की तरह,
रिश्तों के पहिये खोलते क्यों हो.

कुछ भी न साथ लेकर जाओगे,
दौलत को ही प्यार बोलते क्यों हो.

अभी तो अश्क थोड़े हैं बाकी ,
मेरे अश्कों को हथेली पे तोलते क्यों हो.

        Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2013, 09:07:36 PM »
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bahut khoob ....hardik badhai apko
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bahut khoob ....hardik badhai apko
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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2013, 12:12:16 AM »
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मेरी वफ़ा तोलते क्यों हो,
शक की राहें खोलते क्यों हो.

कुछ तो भरोसा करो मुझ पर,
मेरी जिंदगी में ज़हर घोलते क्यों हो.

रिश्तों की बुनियादों में दीमक लगा दी तुमने,
आपसी प्यार का घर तोड़ते क्यों हो.

रिश्ते  तो है चार पहिओ की गाडी की तरह,
रिश्तों के पहिये खोलते क्यों हो.

कुछ भी न साथ लेकर जाओगे,
दौलत को ही प्यार बोलते क्यों हो.

अभी तो अश्क थोड़े हैं बाकी ,
मेरे अश्कों को हथेली पे तोलते क्यों हो.

        Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".



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शक की राहें खोलते क्यों हो. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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