लिखता हू दिल की बाते.......

by pawan16 on March 02, 2012, 12:22:17 PM
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जब मैं अकेला होता हू,
आपके साथ दर्द-ए-दिल बाटता हू,
ये महफिल ऎसी हे दोस्तो की,
जहा मैं अपने लफ्सो मे जान डालता हू,
अपने वक्त् मे से कुछ वक्त छाटता हु,
लिखता हू दिल की बाते,
इनमे अपनी पहचान तलाशता हू,
लिखता हू दिल के शब्द,
ये केवल आपकी वाह-वाही से जानता हू,
सच बताऊ जब यहा मै वक्त गुजरता हू,
लगता हे जब की मैं अपनी जिंदगी को सवारता हु.......पवन गुप्ता


jab main akela hota hu,
apke sath dard-e-dil ko batta hu,
ye mehfil aisi hai apne dosto ki,
jaha main apne lafzzo me jaan dalta hu,
apne waqt mq se kuch khaas waqt chatata hu,
likhta hu kuch dil ki baate,
in lafzoo me apni pechaan talashta hu,
likhta hu dil ke shabad,
ye keval apki waah-waahi  se janta hu,
sach batau yaha jab waqt main guzarta hu,
aisa lagata hai main apni zindgi ka sawarta hu.............pawan gupta
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2012, 01:24:16 PM »
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Pawan ji aap kee shayribahut achhee hai par kaheen words likhne men ghaltiyaan hotee hain zaraa un par dhyaan de len to sone pe suhaagaa hogaa
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2012, 01:40:33 PM »
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sani ji main aage se pura dhyan rakunga ki main is kami ko jaldi se jaldi dur kar sako.......tarif ke liye sukriya....................
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2012, 03:53:21 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2012, 04:38:50 PM »
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thanks mkv ji.........
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2012, 10:15:12 AM »
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wah kya bat he bahut khoob ji..
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2012, 04:45:11 AM »
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thanks hameed sir...........
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