लिखी कविता तेरे लिए..................................आनंद मोहन

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दोस्तों,
 यहाँ  इस यो इंडिया के मंच पर हम सभी आपस में अपनी रचनायें शेयर करते हैं,   तारीफ़ भी करते हैं और टिप्पणियां भी. सच मानिये, हर एक प्रतिक्रिया, चाहे वो तारीफ हो या आलोचना, रचनाकार में एक नया उत्साह भरता है, कुछ नया और बेहतर करने का. यो इंडिया पर जुड़नेवाले निश्चित ही कविता से कुछ तो लगाव रखते ही है, फिर भी ना जाने क्यों ज्यादातर लो बिना प्रतिक्रिया दिए ही आगे बढ़ जाते हैं. ऐसे सभी दोस्तों से मेरा अनुरोध है कि अगर रचना ना भी पसंद आये तो आलोचनात्मक ही सही मगर कुछ प्रतिक्रिया अवश्य दें ताकि हमारा सम्बन्ध उत्तरोत्तर प्रगाढ़ होता जाए और रचनाओं में और भी निखार आती जाये. इसी सन्दर्भ में यह रचना प्रस्तुत है-


भला नहीं तो बुरा सही,

पर कुछ तो कहो दीवानों.

लिखी कविता तेरे लिए

तुम मानो या ना मानो.




रोज पिरोकर शब्दों को

हम माला एक बनाते,

मान के पाठक को देवता

हैं अर्पण कर आते.

देखा न चेहरा अपना

फिर भी भावों को पहचानो.

लिखी कविता तेरे लिए

तुम मानो या ना मानो.



शब्द बनी पहचान हमारी

कविता बनी है काया.

सिवा पिरोने के गीतों के

और काम ना आया.

नाम-धाम से नहीं

हमारे काम से हमको जानो.

लिखी कविता तेरे लिए

तुम मानो या ना मानो.


              -आनंद मोहन


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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2012, 11:55:28 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2012, 12:00:22 PM »
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bahut hee bhaawpoorn kawitaa anand mohan ji main dil se aapko saadhuwaad deta hoon god bless you
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HRIDAY JEE KO HRIDAY SE DHANYAVAAD.
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भला नहीं तो बुरा सही,
पर कुछ तो कहो दीवानों.
लिखी कविता तेरे लिए
तुम मानो या ना मानो.

bahut bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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