संवेदना मेरी - तुम्हारी...

by medha_jain3 on February 25, 2013, 04:57:57 PM
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संवेदना...एक ऐसा भाव जो सभी के भीतर होता है...कुछ प्रकट कर देते है तो कुछ नहीं करते...संवेदना जिस पर बहुत लिखा जा सकता है...उसी  पर कुछ लिखने का एक छोटा प्रयास...


संवेदना मेरी - तुम्हारी...
प्रकट भी...प्रच्छन्न भी...
एक सूर्य अभिनन्दन को उत्सुक...
एक सुर्यास्ताचल में शोक मग्न !!
संवेदना विजित या पराजित...
वेदना मेरी अत्यधिक...परायी तो क्षणिक...
ऐसी उलझी शब्दों में...
सहमत यदि तो सार्थक...अन्यथा निरर्थक !!
संवेदना साकार भी...निराकार भी...
रूप अश्रुधार में साकार सी अविरल बहे...
भीतर ह्रदय में मौन सी निराकार निश्छल रहे !!
संवेदना मेरी - तुम्हारी...
प्रकट भी...प्रच्छन्न भी |
 
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2013, 07:02:10 PM »
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