हम भि हैं इस शहर के साताए हुए

by suman59 on March 25, 2013, 03:42:45 PM
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मेघ ऊपर गगन में हैं छाए हुए,
लोग प्यासे खड़े, मुँह को बाए हुए !!

आँख अपनी टपकती हुई छत हुई,
हम भी  हैं इस शहर के साताए हुए !!

लाख बरसो मगर कुछ असर ही नहीं,
लोग मिलते हैं छाता लगाए हुए !!

बोलते कुछ नहीं, बस इशारा करें
मुझको लगते हैं सब पान खाए हुए !!

कल न जाने किधर रुख हवा का रहे,
सोचकर हैं सभी पर फुलाए हुए !!
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2013, 05:29:43 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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Wah,wah,Wah Sumanji,
Very nice ghazal.Really heart touching.Mubarak ho aapko.
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2013, 10:43:05 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on March 25, 2013, 03:42:45 PM
मेघ ऊपर गगन में हैं छाए हुए,
लोग प्यासे खड़े, मुँह को बाए हुए !!

आँख अपनी टपकती हुई छत हुई,
हम भी  हैं इस शहर के साताए हुए !!

लाख बरसो मगर कुछ असर ही नहीं,
लोग मिलते हैं छाता लगाए हुए !!

बोलते कुछ नहीं, बस इशारा करें
मुझको लगते हैं सब पान खाए हुए !!

कल न जाने किधर रुख हवा का रहे,
सोचकर हैं सभी पर फुलाए हुए !!



very good,ma'am
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Bahut bahut bahut khoob sumanji. behad achcha likha hai aapne. dheron daad.
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