हम रह गए आज भी इसी देश में

by suman59 on March 19, 2013, 01:09:13 PM
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सच है कि वह निकल गया कल ही विदेश में,
हम रह गए आज भी इसी देश में !!

जब तक यहाँ रहा उसे कूड़ा कहा गया,
अब वापसी में हो गया वह भी विशेष में !!

कतरा रहे थे लोग उसे कर्ज़ भी देते,
पाता है पुरस्कार अब अपने ही देश में !!

जो रोकते थे रास्ता साँपों के वेश में,
अब दे रहे हैं रास्ता साधू के वेश में !!

रहता है साथ वक़्त भी उस आदमी के साथ,
आगे हैं, सुबह-शाम जो जीवन की "रेस" में !! 
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2013, 01:27:00 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2013, 01:34:03 PM »
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Suman Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH badi achchi prernatmak kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile
bade achche khayaal rahe taNziyaa bhi aur salaaH bhare bhi..

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2013, 01:43:45 PM »
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Bahut khoob suman ji. bahut achcha likha hai aapne. so true. bahut bahut mubarak ho aapko
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2013, 03:12:52 PM »
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KYA LIKHU SABAD NAHI MIL REHYE AAP KI POST NE EK KAREEBI DOST KI YAAD DILA DI JO AB IS DUNIYA MAI NAHI HAI
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bahut achcha likha hai aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 19, 2013, 01:27:00 PM
waah waah
dr sb thank you
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Suman Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH badi achchi prernatmak kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile
bade achche khayaal rahe taNziyaa bhi aur salaaH bhare bhi..

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

aapka bahut bahut shukriya janab
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Quote from: RAJ SOLANKI on March 19, 2013, 03:12:52 PM
KYA LIKHU SABAD NAHI MIL REHYE AAP KI POST NE EK KAREEBI DOST KI YAAD DILA DI JO AB IS DUNIYA MAI NAHI HAI
thank u jee
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bahut achcha likha hai aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aapka bahut bahut shukriya sufu jee
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Suman ji, bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne, bahut achchaa lagaa padh ke, bahut achcha likha hai aapne.....!!!
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