हमें क्या पता था

by suman59 on March 18, 2013, 06:43:17 PM
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तुम्हें खूब उड़ने का अधिकार होगा,
शिकारी की इच्छा के अनुसार होगा !!

विलायत से मुस्काने आयात करके,
तुम्हारी उदासी का उपचार होगा !!

हमें क्या पता था कि अपना मसीहा,
परत-दर-परत यूँ गुनहगार होगा !!

सभी इस प्रतीक्षा में बैठे मिलेंगे,
कि इस बार शायद चमत्कार होगा !!

कि अब भीड़ को किस तरफ हांकना है,
ये संसद की चर्चा का आधार होगा !!
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2013, 06:52:52 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2013, 06:57:37 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2013, 07:33:06 PM »
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bahut achchha hai
तुम्हें खूब उड़ने का अधिकार होगा,
शिकारी की इच्छा के अनुसार होगा !!

विलायत से मुस्काने आयात करके,
तुम्हारी उदासी का उपचार होगा !!
chalo abb upchaar to hoga ....
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daad qubul karen ,achcha khayal hai
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«Reply #4 on: March 18, 2013, 07:40:08 PM »
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Suman59 Ji,

Waaah waah bahut khoob....laajwaab

ghazal kahee hai aapne....

is sher ke liye khusoosee daad

qubool farmaayen....

"विलायत से मुस्काने आयात करके,
 तुम्हारी उदासी का उपचार होगा !!"

All the best...for next post...

Raqeeb Lucknowi


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«Reply #5 on: March 18, 2013, 08:33:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob suman ji. bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh rachna. dheron daad..
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«Reply #6 on: March 18, 2013, 11:27:48 PM »
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nice .bahut khoob.congrats,sumanji.
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«Reply #7 on: March 18, 2013, 11:47:01 PM »
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तुम्हारी गज़ल भी है उम्दा,शिकारी,
कहीं कोई आशिक तो बेहाल होगा!!

बहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने

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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2013, 12:05:56 AM »
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Suman Jee Aadaab...!



WaaH jee waaH kia kahne waaH badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai jee..
bade gehre aur umdaa khayaaloN ko piroyaa hai jee... Usual Smile

Kia kahne badi achcche ashaar rahe sabhi... Usual Smile
Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: March 19, 2013, 12:38:28 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: March 19, 2013, 01:50:22 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #11 on: March 19, 2013, 03:08:28 AM »
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waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah Buht Khoob   

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daad iss liye k sabi keh rahay hain,,,, warna mujhay hindi bilkul nahi ati  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: March 21, 2013, 03:16:52 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: March 21, 2013, 03:18:04 PM »
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thanks anmol arora jee
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«Reply #14 on: March 21, 2013, 03:18:42 PM »
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bahut achchha hai
तुम्हें खूब उड़ने का अधिकार होगा,
शिकारी की इच्छा के अनुसार होगा !!

विलायत से मुस्काने आयात करके,
तुम्हारी उदासी का उपचार होगा !!
chalo abb upchaar to hoga ....
..........................
daad qubul karen ,achcha khayal hai
thank you very much haan jee
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