|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
2010 Ke Bitein Dino Mein..
Aapne Bahut Kuch Paya Hoga, Bahut Kuch Khoya Bhi Hoga..
Kisiko Aapne Tukraya To Kisiko Aapne Bhi Apnaya Hoga,
Kisi Se Jhagade Huve Honge To Kisi Ko Sataya Hoga..
Kabhi Khushi To Kabhi Dard Hisse Mein Aaya Hoga..
Kiye Honge Manchahe Kaam Kai,
Aur Naye Anubhavo Se Galti Ko Sahlaya Hoga..
Shayad Cheen Li Ho Kismat Ne Aapki Pyari Cheeze Koi
Par 1 Nai Anmol Cheeze Se Jarrur Milwaya Hoga..
Aap Bhale Hi Bilkul Na Badle Ho,
Per Aapka Koi Na Koi Andaz To Badla Hoga..
Ja Rha Hai Ye Saal, Wo Sare Pal Samet Kar..
Jin Par Aapne Kabhi To Haq Jataya Hoga..
Jhoom Lo Muskura Lo, Jee Bhar Ke Jee Lo Is Saal Ke Ye Kuch Lamhe..
Phir Dekhna Ye Saal Humesha Aapki Meethi Yaado Mein Samaya Hoga..
"Rishi" Ki To Bus Yahi Subh Kamna Hai
Aaye Naya Saal Sab Ke Liye Khushiya Lekar ..
Dekhna Phir Her Pal Aapka Khushiya Aur Ulaas Se Bhara Hoga..
Advance Mein Sabhi Ko "Rishi" Ki Taraf Se Happy New Year 2011
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
AbhiTamrakar
Guest
|
 |
«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2010, 09:25:08 AM » |
|
bahut khoob rishi ji...
daad kubool farmaiye..
sath hi HAPPY NEW YEAR aapko bhi~
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2010, 09:38:15 AM » |
|
bahut khoob rishi ji...
daad kubool farmaiye..
sath hi HAPPY NEW YEAR aapko bhi~
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Abhi JI Same To U |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
dead heart
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2010, 03:25:54 PM » |
|
Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat kalam hai Rishi jee.. Apki yeh kalam sachi lagi.. Kuch lines wakei mujh par applicable hai..  Naya saal mubarak |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
killbill
|
|
|
«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2010, 06:36:51 AM » |
|
wah rishi jee wah--
kya mast tarikaa hai apka--
naye saal ki badhai dene ka..
bahut khub ji bahut khub.
aapko bhi Mast aur Ummedon asaaon se bharpur
HAPPY NEW YEAR.
SUKRIYA
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2010, 09:39:03 AM » |
|
Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat kalam hai Rishi jee.. Apki yeh kalam sachi lagi.. Kuch lines wakei mujh par applicable hai.. Naya saal mubarak Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rahim Ji Hume Accha Laga Ki Humne Jo Likha Aapko Dil Se Accha Laga |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2010, 09:41:52 AM » |
|
wah rishi jee wah--
kya mast tarikaa hai apka--
naye saal ki badhai dene ka..
bahut khub ji bahut khub.
aapko bhi Mast aur Ummedon asaaon se bharpur
HAPPY NEW YEAR.
SUKRIYA
Shukriya KB Ji And Aapko Bhi Nai Saal Ki Advance Mein Badhai |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
Rau: 19
 Offline
Gender: 
Waqt Bitaya:67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle
Posts: 5603 Member Since: Jun 2010
|
|
|
«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2010, 10:08:04 AM » |
|
bht hi pyara likha hai rishi tumne..sara saal aankhon k aage se guzar gaya....
thnx for this lovely poem re.....
and happy new year to u toooo
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2010, 09:34:25 AM » |
|
bht hi pyara likha hai rishi tumne..sara saal aankhon k aage se guzar gaya....
thnx for this lovely poem re.....
and happy new year to u toooo
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kasak JI And Advance Me Nav Varsh Ki Hardik Subkamnaye |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
nirala
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2010, 04:04:10 AM » |
|
hmmm chalo bhai hamne socha aapke iss mast poem me ham bhi sharik ho jaye.
itna achha kaise likha aapne..
koi nai jaise bhi likha mujhe kya lekin poora ek saal ka Kachha-Chittha likh dia aapne..
haha bahut sundar hai.
u ko i ki side se HNY ji.
"
thanx
"
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2010, 01:25:26 PM » |
|
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Bekarar Ji |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2010, 01:27:22 PM » |
|
hmmm chalo bhai hamne socha aapke iss mast poem me ham bhi sharik ho jaye.
itna achha kaise likha aapne..
koi nai jaise bhi likha mujhe kya lekin poora ek saal ka Kachha-Chittha likh dia aapne..
haha bahut sundar hai.
u ko i ki side se HNY ji.
"
thanx
"
Thnx Nirala Ji Hum Koi Perfect Shayar To Nahi Hai Jo Bhi Aata Hai Likh Dete Hai Bus Aap Hi Logo se sikhne ko milta hai hume |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
nirala
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2010, 01:38:49 PM » |
|
lo jii aap humse sikhenge to hame kaun sikhayega  |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2010, 01:57:02 PM » |
|
Yaha Pe To Bahut Sikhane Ke liye Bhai Hum Kya Sikhayenge Hum Khud Sab Se Kuch Na Kuch Sikhte Hai lo jii aap humse sikhenge to hame kaun sikhayega |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
on eTI community..
