Aata hai khayal dil me mere

by sanchit on January 31, 2011, 03:32:52 PM
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Aata hai khayal dil me mere kabhi kabhi,
Ki kyon kaha gaya hai ki,

"JAHAN NA PAHUNCE RAVI,
WAHAN PAHUNCHE KAVI"

Kahin aisa to nahi ki,
Kaha tha jisne aisa wo bhi ho ek kavi,
Kya aisa kaha gaya sirf majaak me,
Ya sachmuch hi itna mahaan hai kavi,

Shayad haan,

Tabhi to likh paye Kalidaas ABHIGYAN SHAKUNTLAM
or Valmiki RAMAYAN,
Gar na hote mahan to kese ban jate Methli Sharan Rashtra kavi,
Kavi keh jata hai baat saralta se badi se badi,
Jo nahi kar sakta hai koi bhi,
Shayad isiliye kaha gaya hai ki...
                "JAHAN NA PAHUNCE RAVI,
                 WAHAN PAHUNCHE KAVI"...


               Haan Shayad...
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 03:50:12 PM »
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Achhi samikshaa ki hai aapne...Sanchit ji...... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2011, 07:15:36 PM »
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Aata hai khayal dil me mere kabhi kabhi,
Ki kyon kaha gaya hai ki,

"JAHAN NA PAHUNCE RAVI,
WAHAN PAHUNCHE KAVI"

Kahin aisa to nahi ki,
Kaha tha jisne aisa wo bhi ho ek kavi,
Kya aisa kaha gaya sirf majaak me,
Ya sachmuch hi itna mahaan hai kavi,

Shayad haan,

Tabhi to likh paye Kalidaas ABHIGYAN SHAKUNTLAM
or Valmiki RAMAYAN,
Gar na hote mahan to kese ban jate Methli Sharan Rashtra kavi,
Kavi keh jata hai baat saralta se badi se badi,
Jo nahi kar sakta hai koi bhi,
Shayad isiliye kaha gaya hai ki...
                "JAHAN NA PAHUNCE RAVI,
                 WAHAN PAHUNCHE KAVI"...


               Haan Shayad...

Good One .......... !!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2011, 12:39:46 PM »
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wah
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 04:35:09 PM »
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BAhut Khub Sanchit JI
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2011, 07:29:29 PM »
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Absolut Super Comment, dies wollte ich selbst auch schon immer Mal ausdrucken, wusste nur nie wie man dies niederschreiben kann Winking !           
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2011, 08:28:19 PM »
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Grundsatzlich betrachtet   ne super Story, ich bin mir nur unsicher, ob das   langfristig realistisch machbar bleibt!       
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2014, 11:40:36 PM »
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Achhi samikshaa ki hai aapne...Sanchit ji...... Applause Applause Applause
shukriya koyal ji...
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2014, 11:42:03 PM »
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Good One .......... !!!!!!!!!!!
thanks anshumali ji...
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sanchit
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2014, 11:42:37 PM »
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wah
kishan ji shukriya...
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2014, 11:43:08 PM »
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BAhut Khub Sanchit JI
rishi ji bahut shukriya...
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