"besan ki sondi roti par"

by aaina on February 25, 2009, 12:44:19 PM
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besan ki sondi roti par
khatti chtni jaisi maa
yaad aati hai choka baisan
chimta, phukni jaisi, maa

baan ki khurri khaat ke upar
har aahat pe kaan dhare
aadhi soyi aadhi jaagi
thaki dopahri jaisi, maa

chidiyon ki cehkaar mai goonje
rada mohan, ali ali
murghy ke aawaaz se khulti
ghr ki kundi jaisi, maa

biwi, baiti, bhan, padosan
thodi thodi si sab mein
din bhar ek rassi ke upar
chalti natn jaisi, maa

baant ke apna chehra, maatha
aankhain jane kahan gayi
phate purane ek album mai
chanchal ladki jaisi, maa(nida fazli)
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2009, 04:32:09 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
What a great sharing.... Aslam ji bahut khoob ... Nice collection.
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2009, 11:00:12 PM »
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very nice sharing Aaina ji... Applause Applause

thnxxxxxxxxx.....................@kaash
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2009, 11:02:50 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
What a great sharing.... Aslam ji bahut khoob ... Nice collection.

thnxxxxxx roja....................
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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2009, 01:52:06 AM »
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thnxxxxxx roja....................

Welcome Aslam ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2009, 10:39:11 AM »
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thanx for sharing this ... I have been looking for this for a long time now. Thanx once again Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2009, 10:59:30 AM »
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Nice sharing Aaina Ji
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salma786
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2009, 03:29:57 AM »
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Bahoot hi khoobsoorat sharing Aslam ji Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2009, 07:16:43 PM »
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besan ki sondi roti par
khatti chtni jaisi maa
yaad aati hai choka baisan
chimta, phukni jaisi, maa

baan ki khurri khaat ke upar
har aahat pe kaan dhare
aadhi soyi aadhi jaagi
thaki dopahri jaisi, maa

chidiyon ki cehkaar mai goonje
rada mohan, ali ali
murghy ke aawaaz se khulti
ghr ki kundi jaisi, maa

biwi, baiti, bhan, padosan
thodi thodi si sab mein
din bhar ek rassi ke upar
chalti natn jaisi, maa

baant ke apna chehra, maatha
aankhain jane kahan gayi
phate purane ek album mai
chanchal ladki jaisi, maa(nida fazli)



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wah kaya kavita share kihai apne... parr kar dil khush ho gaya,.. jaise ek ek shabd ankho ke samne se nikal raha ho... wah bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 03, 2009, 07:25:09 PM »
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Aainaji Nida Fazliji ka kalaam pesh karne k liye shukriya)
besan ki sondi roti par
khatti chtni jaisi maa
yaad aati hai choka baisan
chimta, phukni jaisi, maa

baan ki khurri khaat ke upar
har aahat pe kaan dhare
aadhi soyi aadhi jaagi
thaki dopahri jaisi, maa

chidiyon ki cehkaar mai goonje
rada mohan, ali ali
murghy ke aawaaz se khulti
ghr ki kundi jaisi, maa

biwi, baiti, bhan, padosan
thodi thodi si sab mein
din bhar ek rassi ke upar
chalti natn jaisi, maa

baant ke apna chehra, maatha
aankhain jane kahan gayi
phate purane ek album mai
chanchal ladki jaisi, maa(nida fazli)
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«Reply #10 on: March 03, 2009, 09:18:23 PM »
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thanx for sharing this ... I have been looking for this for a long time now. Thanx once again Clapping Smiley

ur welcome meenal...........
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aaina
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«Reply #11 on: March 03, 2009, 09:19:28 PM »
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Nice sharing Aaina Ji

shukriya harish ji.....................
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2009, 09:20:30 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoobsoorat sharing Aslam ji Thumbs UP

thnxxxxx so much salma ji.................
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«Reply #13 on: March 03, 2009, 09:22:04 PM »
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wah kaya kavita share kihai apne... parr kar dil khush ho gaya,.. jaise ek ek shabd ankho ke samne se nikal raha ho... wah bahoot khoob!!

shukriya pooja ji........my plseasure
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«Reply #14 on: March 03, 2009, 09:24:06 PM »
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Aainaji Nida Fazliji ka kalaam pesh karne k liye shukriya)

apko pasnd aayi shukriya..........smardia
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