chupkay sai

by sushilbansal on August 07, 2012, 04:25:02 PM
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moaet ka rishta
janam sai hi ban jata hai atot
par chupkay say aati hai voh
billey ki tarha
daav lagati hue
koi bharosa nahi
kab kaha us ka dave lag jaey
na kuch bolti hai
na kuch sunti hai
na prem kay zhotae vadei karti hai
laykin
jab aati hai
logo ko hi sunti hai
apni chikhai.
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2012, 04:50:06 PM »
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boht khub janab
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2012, 07:25:36 PM »
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Quote from: sushilbansal on August 07, 2012, 04:25:02 PM
moaet ka rishta
janam sai hi ban jata hai atot
par chupkay say aati hai voh
billey ki tarha
daav lagati hue
koi bharosa nahi
kab kaha us ka dave lag jaey
na kuch bolti hai
na kuch sunti hai
na prem kay zhotae vadei karti hai
laykin
jab aati hai
logo ko hi sunti hai
apni chikhai.



gud.........apne tallafooz aur lafzo.n pe zaraa tawaajo dein to shayad aapkii baat samajhne mein dushwaarii nahin hogi. Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2012, 10:49:22 PM »
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 coffee2 happy1 toothy2 Hats off to you! Thankyou ! Thankyou !
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 07, 2012, 07:25:36 PM

gud.........apne tallafooz aur lafzo.n pe zaraa tawaajo dein to shayad aapkii baat samajhne mein dushwaarii nahin hogi. Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Baat itne se hai ...when ever if you have time will you please....modify my poem
"chupkay sai"
Khamosh ji ap kay sehyog say mayre kagaj ki kishti ko dooer tak baha laye jaye gi kalpna aur kavita ke dhara.
 
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2012, 10:54:35 PM »
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 love4 sunny
Quote from: saahill on August 07, 2012, 04:50:06 PM
boht khub janab
Sahil ji yadi kuch shabad ap mayre kavita may tiek karna chahay to mujeh acha lagega.
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2012, 12:03:15 AM »
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nice lines bansal jee
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2012, 12:32:56 AM »
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nice lines
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2012, 05:06:33 PM »
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 icon_salut blob9 Thankyou !
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nice lines
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