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Yahan Yo me jab main aai shayri k bare me jyada nahin janti thi...aap sab ko padhke samjhke kaafi kuch sikhne mila...aur aap sabne jis tarah hausla badhaya likhne ka jo pyaar diya ..mujhe ek nai soch mili ...

yahan mujhe har member se jinke contact me main aai ..jinka likha hua maine padha sabne kuch na kuch sikhaya hai...

aap sabko tahe dil se thnx kehna chahti hun aaj teachers day k din k aapne mujhe ek nai soch ek nai disha di hai jine ki....

sabse pehle main sir ji
aapko thnx kahungi...aapne mujhe bht support kiya hai apni baaton se apne sidhe saadhe andaaz se hamesha cool and calm rehna sikhaya...thnx sir ji

Parwaaz ji...
aapne jitna mujhe help kiya wo aap hi jante hain..bht pareshan kiya hai maine aapko apni ulti pulti baaton se..par aap shanti se mujhe samjhte hain...aapki postmartum karne ki style kisi bhi poem ki ..i love it...thnx parwaz ji ..yunhi sikhate rahyega


abdbundeli ji...
aapse kabhi baat nahin hui hai lekin aapki rachnaon ko padh ke hi main bht kuch sikha hai..kis tarah kahan kaise shabdon ko jod kar naye meanings ban jate hain ..kitne sare new words kitni differnt style apne feelings express karne ki..bht sara sikha hai aapne aur sikh rahi hun lagataar...thnx ji isi tarah apni khubsurat rachnayein hume padhte rahiyega...


khwaish ji.....
yo pe akar jiske likhne se main sabse jyada impress hui wo hain aap...apko dekhkar hi aap jaisa likhne ki dil me aai aur ye koshish shuru ki...aapka andaaze bayaan to alag hi hai..sab fan hain ji aapke...


suresh sangwaan ji and smardia ji...
aapki rachnayen padhke mujhe kuch alag theme pe likhne ka dil kiya..pehle sirf love poems aya iss tarah k hi likh pati thi aapki poems padhke kuch alag likhne ki koshish ki aur aapne pasand ki aur tareef karke hausla badhaya isitarah sath dete rahiyega.....

rahim...
tumhari jitni tareef karun kum hai..sach me dard me likhte ho to jaise dil hi nikal k rakh dete ho tum..thnx bhai mujhe sikhane k dil ki baat kis tarah bahar lai jati hai...

shihab..
tum jis tarah likhte ho kya kahun..shabd aur feelings ka bejod taalmel hai tumhara...bht hi khubsurat andaaz hai...

rahul...
tumne sikahya hai k zyada emotional nahin hone ka..usse sab emotional ho jate hain..bht pyara likhte ho tum aur wo bhi pure dil se....


matrix guy...
aapse kya sikha hai ye to batana bht mushkil hai ji..lekin aapki poetries jitni dard se lubrez hoti hain utni hi jyada achchi desihn hoti hain unki,,,,aapki designing ka lag andaaz aur aapse zindgai jine ka andaaz sikha ha maine...thnx ji


rancho...
life jiyo haske befikr hoke...jo hona hai hoga..tumse ye hi sikha hai maine...kaash main tumhari tarah befikr ho sakti..

abhi ji...
my first critic...tum nahin hote to ye adhuri lines kabhi complete hi nahin hoti ..mujhe pata hi nahin chalta k adhuri hain...thnx abhi for ur friendship ...


koyal
meri shaitaan gudiya...
tumse to har pal haste khelte rehna sikha hai maine...har mehfil ko apni shaitani se kaise jiwant kar deti ho tum sach me kamaal hai.....love u bachcha ..hamesha aisi hi rehna


klaskar ji..
tumhari to baat hi nirali hai ji...jitni tareff karun kum hai..tumse to dosti nibhani sikhi hai humne...kitna mast likhte ho aur kya ...ab aapki jyada tareef nahin hogi mujhse...


anaam....
cchhote nawaab saheb......jasus karamchand hain aap....lekin ek bht ahche poet bhi...aur bht acche insan aur dost...thnx ji for ur frndshp..

k ji....
aapki masti aur ulte pulte jawab...masttttttt....har game ko masti bhara bana dete ho aap...yunhi haste khelte rahiye hamesha....


azeem ...
tumhare likhneme to jaise aaj ki parchai nazar aati hai..aaj k halat aur aise topics pe likhte ho k jise koi soche hi na...bht pyara likhte ho tum..


naresh ji... pooja ji.. nikhar ji...devangi ji..geet ji... shidra ji..neel ji..mamta ji..nazarghauri ji..sajid ghayal ji...VB ji...JS ji...aur bhi kai members jinke naam abhi mujhe yaad nahin aarahe..sabne mujhe kuch na kuch sikhaya hai...

aaj k din main aap sabko pure dil aatma se thnx kehna chahti hun aapke pyaar aur support k liye.... notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2010, 09:41:11 PM »
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Kasak Jee aapne sab ki tarif kii sab se kya kya sikha bataya aur aapke is tarif meiN hum bhi shumaar huye dekhkar behad achcha laga..... Hume yahaaN aaye hua ek mahina hi hua hai.. Par shayad hi yahaaN humne kisi aur member se itni baat ki jitni aapse kii...... Hum koi bahut bade nahi hai shayad umar meiN aapse chote bhi ho sakte hai... per as a respet and shayari e adaab ke usool se hi hum baat karte hai.... isliye hume kai log kafi buzurg samjhne lage hai...

khair...........

Aapki tarif hum akele to nahi kar payeNge aapki tarif ke liye pure YO ka yogdaaN hona chaiye tab bhi aapki khubiyaaN samne nahi aa payeNgi..... hum bus aapke liye itna hi kaheNge ke Agar "kisi meiN sikhane aur samjhne ki Justajuu ho to aap jitni ho, warna na ho..... " Aapne kafi kam samay meiN itna growth kiya hai ke hum khud hairaan hai .... Aapke samjhne ki kshamata dekhkar..... aapse humne sikha hai ke agar hume bhi aage aur sikhana hai to hume bhi aapke jitni energy rakhni chaiye sikhane ke liye agar aapke jaisi sikhane ki kshamata hume mil jati to aaj jo hum apne aap meiN kami mehsus karte hai bher sikhane ki woh bhi puri ho jati....

Wel aap humesha Khush rahiye....
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2010, 09:59:59 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2010, 11:47:09 PM »
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kasak ji aji hum bhi hain yahan ....nausikhiye mein waise aap ka shukria  aap behtreen likhti hain. main aksar padhta hoon
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 11:59:08 PM »
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Is nacheeze ka naam yaad raha itne bade bade namo me isse badhkar aur kya baat ho sakti hai mere liye.....bohat shukriyaa jo aapne mujhe is layek samjha.
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2010, 06:48:17 AM »
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I am touched di..! Thanks alot..bahaut shukriya kay apne hume iss thread main yaad kiya..Hmm apse bahaut seekhne milta hai..hamesha likte rahiyega..!
Khush rahein!
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2010, 06:57:21 AM »
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kasak ji aji hum bhi hain yahan ....nausikhiye mein waise aap ka shukria  aap behtreen likhti hain. main aksar padhta hoon

mujhe maaf kar dijiye MB ji...
kal jab thread likh rahi thi...itne sare naam likh liye aur aapka dhayn nahin aay..sach me maafi chahti hun...
aapki kalaam padhte hain to samjh aata hai k kis tarah apne feelings ko cntrl  me rakh k kum shabdon me jyada feel dena hai..aapki sab poems ek length ki hoti hai ..sab sher me barabar se hi shabd hote hain jo k main ab tak nahin kar pai..ek line badi ek chhoti hi reh jati hai...
sorry ji ye kal sab yaad tha likhna lekin na jane kaise chuk ho gai..ek bar fir dil se maafi chahti hun aapse...
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2010, 08:10:27 AM »
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THANKS YOU FOR UOOR KIND COMPLIMENTS......ISS FORUM...SE MAINE AAP SABB SE BAHUT KUCH SEEKHA HAI..!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2010, 08:25:03 AM »
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thanks and same to you Anamika ji.
 you have expressed yourself very well.
we are also feeling nice about your feelings about us.
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Yahan Yo me jab main aai shayri k bare me jyada nahin janti thi...aap sab ko padhke samjhke kaafi kuch sikhne mila...aur aap sabne jis tarah hausla badhaya likhne ka jo pyaar diya ..mujhe ek nai soch mili ...

yahan mujhe har member se jinke contact me main aai ..jinka likha hua maine padha sabne kuch na kuch sikhaya hai...

aap sabko tahe dil se thnx kehna chahti hun aaj teachers day k din k aapne mujhe ek nai soch ek nai disha di hai jine ki....

sabse pehle main sir ji
aapko thnx kahungi...aapne mujhe bht support kiya hai apni baaton se apne sidhe saadhe andaaz se hamesha cool and calm rehna sikhaya...thnx sir ji

Parwaaz ji...
aapne jitna mujhe help kiya wo aap hi jante hain..bht pareshan kiya hai maine aapko apni ulti pulti baaton se..par aap shanti se mujhe samjhte hain...aapki postmartum karne ki style kisi bhi poem ki ..i love it...thnx parwaz ji ..yunhi sikhate rahyega


abdbundeli ji...
aapse kabhi baat nahin hui hai lekin aapki rachnaon ko padh ke hi main bht kuch sikha hai..kis tarah kahan kaise shabdon ko jod kar naye meanings ban jate hain ..kitne sare new words kitni differnt style apne feelings express karne ki..bht sara sikha hai aapne aur sikh rahi hun lagataar...thnx ji isi tarah apni khubsurat rachnayein hume padhte rahiyega...


khwaish ji.....
yo pe akar jiske likhne se main sabse jyada impress hui wo hain aap...apko dekhkar hi aap jaisa likhne ki dil me aai aur ye koshish shuru ki...aapka andaaze bayaan to alag hi hai..sab fan hain ji aapke...


suresh sangwaan ji and smardia ji...
aapki rachnayen padhke mujhe kuch alag theme pe likhne ka dil kiya..pehle sirf love poems aya iss tarah k hi likh pati thi aapki poems padhke kuch alag likhne ki koshish ki aur aapne pasand ki aur tareef karke hausla badhaya isitarah sath dete rahiyega.....

rahim...
tumhari jitni tareef karun kum hai..sach me dard me likhte ho to jaise dil hi nikal k rakh dete ho tum..thnx bhai mujhe sikhane k dil ki baat kis tarah bahar lai jati hai...

shihab..
tum jis tarah likhte ho kya kahun..shabd aur feelings ka bejod taalmel hai tumhara...bht hi khubsurat andaaz hai...

rahul...
tumne sikahya hai k zyada emotional nahin hone ka..usse sab emotional ho jate hain..bht pyara likhte ho tum aur wo bhi pure dil se....


matrix guy...
aapse kya sikha hai ye to batana bht mushkil hai ji..lekin aapki poetries jitni dard se lubrez hoti hain utni hi jyada achchi desihn hoti hain unki,,,,aapki designing ka lag andaaz aur aapse zindgai jine ka andaaz sikha ha maine...thnx ji


rancho...
life jiyo haske befikr hoke...jo hona hai hoga..tumse ye hi sikha hai maine...kaash main tumhari tarah befikr ho sakti..

abhi ji...
my first critic...tum nahin hote to ye adhuri lines kabhi complete hi nahin hoti ..mujhe pata hi nahin chalta k adhuri hain...thnx abhi for ur friendship ...


koyal
meri shaitaan gudiya...
tumse to har pal haste khelte rehna sikha hai maine...har mehfil ko apni shaitani se kaise jiwant kar deti ho tum sach me kamaal hai.....love u bachcha ..hamesha aisi hi rehna


klaskar ji..
tumhari to baat hi nirali hai ji...jitni tareff karun kum hai..tumse to dosti nibhani sikhi hai humne...kitna mast likhte ho aur kya ...ab aapki jyada tareef nahin hogi mujhse...


anaam....
cchhote nawaab saheb......jasus karamchand hain aap....lekin ek bht ahche poet bhi...aur bht acche insan aur dost...thnx ji for ur frndshp..

k ji....
aapki masti aur ulte pulte jawab...masttttttt....har game ko masti bhara bana dete ho aap...yunhi haste khelte rahiye hamesha....


azeem ...
tumhare likhneme to jaise aaj ki parchai nazar aati hai..aaj k halat aur aise topics pe likhte ho k jise koi soche hi na...bht pyara likhte ho tum..


naresh ji... pooja ji.. nikhar ji...devangi ji..geet ji... shidra ji..neel ji..mamta ji..nazarghauri ji..sajid ghayal ji...VB ji...JS ji...aur bhi kai members jinke naam abhi mujhe yaad nahin aarahe..sabne mujhe kuch na kuch sikhaya hai...

aaj k din main aap sabko pure dil aatma se thnx kehna chahti hun aapke pyaar aur support k liye.... notworthy notworthy notworthy

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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2010, 08:29:34 AM »
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mere liye kuchh nahi..... sad11  love9  tearyeyed
bahot heart huaa  sad5
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«Reply #10 on: September 06, 2010, 08:40:00 AM »
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wah anamika ji aapne to sab ki sach me calss le li....

par sach to yehi hai ki aapne jo kuchh bhi kaha sabke baare mein woh sach me kabile tariff hai...

very good and nice teaching..

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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2010, 03:58:55 PM »
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Anu Ji..Itna Pyaar, itni Izzat Dene Ke Liye Aapka Tehhhhhhhhhhh Dil Se Shukriya..Yeh Thread Padhkar Sach Mein Bahuttttt Khushi Hui hai, Jis Insaan Ka Dil Itna Saaf Ho Wahi insaan Kisi Ki Tareef Aur Kisi Ko Apna Teacher Samajh sakta Hai..

Aapke iss Andazz Ko main Salaam karta Hoon..Aur Rahi Baat Fan Hone Ki, Anu ji hum bhiN Aapke Fan hai..Mujhe Sabse Zyaada Aapki haazir-Jawaabi Pasand Hai Chaahe Woh kisi Bhi Topic Par Ho..Main Umeed Karta Hoon Aapka Saath Humesha Yoindia Se bana Rahe..Aap Humesha Yuhi Yoindia Mein Raunak-E-Bahaar bankar Rahe.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!


                   Thankyou !
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