GHAR MERA KABHI TERA YEH BARBAAD KARE HAI...Hasan

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 14, 2011, 02:38:01 PM
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(...Bumm dhamaako ke pas manzar mein...)

Ghar mera, kabhi tera,yeh barbaad hai,
Fitne naye burpaa, nayee uftaad kare hai

Mashkook dilo.n ko kare,naashaad kare hai,
Phinkwaaye hai BUMM,phir wahi imdaad kare hai

Saazish ko teri jaan ke anjaan hai duniya,
Kya khoob tu saazish Bade Ustaad kare hai

Lalach mein,koi khauff se,saaish mein bhi koi,
Chup-chaap tere hukm pe bus saad  kare hai

Taaqat hai to khudd ko tu khuda jaan raha hai,
Kis zoam mein ye harkat-e-Shaddaad kare hai

Mismaar,ye jannat teri, ho jaayegi ek din,
Thookega her eik jo abhi bus daad kare hai

Ab baaz bhi aa,chain se jeene de jahaa.n ko,
Kyuu.n apni gharaz mei.n hamein barbaad kare hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2011, 03:13:15 PM »
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kaabil-e-taarif.. Bahut dardnaak lafzo se vistruut kiya bhai.. Waakai bahut khub likha..

Gharo me apne aatanki maaz kare hai,
bolo iss aatank ka kon naash kare hai...
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2011, 06:38:24 PM »
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 P.S:correction-Ist line read;...barbaad kare hai4th she'er-saazish      4 saaish...Hasan
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2011, 06:53:33 PM »
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bhai, aap modify karke shayri durust kar sakte hai..
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2011, 03:25:09 AM »
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ghazal dil ko choo gayee hasan bhai tareef ke liye mukammal alfaaz nahin mil rahe

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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2011, 04:03:43 AM »
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GUMboy ji,ghazal ki dad ke liye shukriya.Correction maine aap ke she'r main nahi kiya hai.Ghazal post karne mein kuchh ghaltiyaan hui thhin jinko correct kiya hai.Hasan 
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2011, 04:11:38 AM »
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Dr. saheb, ghazal pasand farmaane ke liye shukriya.Asl shaatir dimaagh ki taraf ishaara kiya hai jo khel bhi khel raha hai aur hamdardi ka dhong bhi rach raha hai.Ummeed hai ki iss se kuchh Food for Thought milega .
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2011, 04:51:35 AM »
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bhai, maine bhi apko apki shayri durust karne ke baare me kaha tha.. Jane do, apne ab durust kar diya hai..
Take care..
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2011, 07:47:28 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 14, 2011, 02:38:01 PM
(...Bumm dhamaako ke pas manzar mein...)

Ghar mera, kabhi tera,yeh barbaad hai,
Fitne naye burpaa, nayee uftaad kare hai

Mashkook dilo.n ko kare,naashaad kare hai,
Phinkwaaye hai BUMM,phir wahi imdaad kare hai

Saazish ko teri jaan ke anjaan hai duniya,
Kya khoob tu saazish Bade Ustaad kare hai

Lalach mein,koi khauff se,saaish mein bhi koi,
Chup-chaap tere hukm pe bus saad  kare hai

Taaqat hai to khudd ko tu khuda jaan raha hai,
Kis zoam mein ye harkat-e-Shaddaad kare hai

Mismaar,ye jannat teri, ho jaayegi ek din,
Thookega her eik jo abhi bus daad kare hai

Ab baaz bhi aa,chain se jeene de jahaa.n ko,
Kyuu.n apni gharaz mei.n hamein barbaad kare hai






bahut khoob siddiqui ji.

matle mein pahle misre mein ...barbaad kare hai  choot gaya hai.


aur aakhri sher mein..meri nakara samajh ke mutabiq ..kyon apni ghazal mein hamein aabaad kare hai to kuch khull ke khyaal zaahir hogaa. aisa mujhe lagta hai. waise aap to ghazal ke maahir hain. aur behtreen khyaal ka izhaar kiya hai. daad daad aur kaafi daad
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2011, 08:21:21 AM »
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bahut khoob,, bahut achi.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2011, 09:06:03 AM »
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mb saheb,hausla afzai ke liye shukriya.Jeehaan,matle mein lafz 'kare' chhoot gaya thha jiska  correcion main ne post kar diya thha.Aakhri she'r mein lafz 'barbaad' hi sahi hai kyuunki jiski taraf ishaara hai woh hameiN aapas mein mashkook kar ke aur lada ke yaani divide and rule ki policy per chal ke apni gharaz yaani hum ko apne dictates per chalane ke liye majboor kar raha hai.Ghazlon mein to hum aap pyar ke rishte se bandhhe hain insha allah hamesha aabaad raheinge.Aapka eik baar phir shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2011, 09:20:20 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 25, 2011, 09:06:03 AM
mb saheb,hausla afzai ke liye shukriya.Jeehaan,matle mein lafz 'kare' chhoot gaya thha jiska  correcion main ne post kar diya thha.Aakhri she'r mein lafz 'barbaad' hi sahi hai kyuunki jiski taraf ishaara hai woh hameiN aapas mein mashkook kar ke aur lada ke yaani divide and rule ki policy per chal ke apni gharaz yaani hum ko apne dictates per chalane ke liye majboor kar raha hai.Ghazlon mein to hum aap pyar ke rishte se bandhhe hain insha allah hamesha aabaad raheinge.Aapka eik baar phir shukriya.Hasan


maaf karein ghalti meri hi thi main ne do baar padha to mujhe gharaz jo hai wo ghazal laga. iss wajh kar main se apni samjh aur pure sher ke hawale se abaad kaha. warna pura sher moqammal hai.
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«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2011, 01:23:09 PM »
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Awais saheb.zarranawazi ke liye bahu bahut shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2011, 01:35:04 PM »
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siddiqui sahab ...shama bandh diya,,,,,daaad kabool karen ,,,,bahur khub kaha hai
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 14, 2011, 02:38:01 PM
(...Bumm dhamaako ke pas manzar mein...)

Ghar mera, kabhi tera,yeh barbaad hai,
Fitne naye burpaa, nayee uftaad kare hai

Mashkook dilo.n ko kare,naashaad kare hai,
Phinkwaaye hai BUMM,phir wahi imdaad kare hai

Saazish ko teri jaan ke anjaan hai duniya,
Kya khoob tu saazish Bade Ustaad kare hai

Lalach mein,koi khauff se,saaish mein bhi koi,
Chup-chaap tere hukm pe bus saad  kare hai

Taaqat hai to khudd ko tu khuda jaan raha hai,
Kis zoam mein ye harkat-e-Shaddaad kare hai

Mismaar,ye jannat teri, ho jaayegi ek din,
Thookega her eik jo abhi bus daad kare hai

Ab baaz bhi aa,chain se jeene de jahaa.n ko,
Kyuu.n apni gharaz mei.n hamein barbaad kare hai
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2011, 03:22:12 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya,sunil ji.
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