Guzre huye saal

by minna077 on December 29, 2006, 08:25:08 PM
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naye saal pe yaad aaye, saal guzre huye phir se
utre hain nami ban kar, khyal guzre huye phir se

kabhi ik pal jo roye to hanse kitna hi agle pal
hairan karte hain mujhko, kamal guzre huye phir se

jawab jin ke diye na mere dil ko tumne kabhi
khade hain saamne mere, sawal guzre huye phir se

khone ko jo tha, wo kho diya tha tabhi magar
lagta hai kho raha hoon, samaan guzre huye phir se

jahan bhi ho tum jahan mein, jo sun sako to suno
ho rahe hain mere alfaz byan guzre huye phir se

naye saal pe yaad aaye, saal guzre huye phir se
utre hain nami ban kar, khyal guzre huye phir se


-------Varun
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2006, 10:45:51 PM »
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Varun....Welcome to Yoindia....Its very nice.  Bohot khoob likha hai...Hope to see more coming from you.

Since this poem is not on theme of khumar-e-ishq, I am movng the thread to occaion specifiv poetry.

Keep it up ! Usual Smile

Talat
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«Reply #2 on: December 30, 2006, 01:05:29 PM »
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Jaisa aap ko theek lage Talat Ji.
Tareef ke liye shukriya, mein aur likhta rahoonga
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2007, 06:08:09 PM »
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supebb Varun ji...bahut acha likha hai aapne
welcome to yoindia !!

guzre hue salon ki yaadein abhi taza hai
dil mein kuch gum abhi sulagte hain
na jaane kiske diye hue kadmon ke nishaan hai yeh
na chahte hue bhi jinpe hum chalte hain
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2007, 03:27:18 AM »
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nice varun and nikki
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2007, 11:37:08 AM »
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thank u Pooja sis...
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