HOLI KE RANG - SARVESH RASTOGI

by SARVESH RASTOGI on February 27, 2010, 03:41:37 PM
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HOLI KE RANG AMBER PE CHHANE LAGE
WO HAME PHIR BAHUT YAAD AANE LAGE
UNKO CHHOONE KI KHWAISH UMADANE LAGI
DIL ME ARMAAN HALCHAL MACHAANE LAGE

MAN HI MAN ME HUIN KITNI TAIYARIAN
HASRATON KE GULON SE BHARI KYARIAN
DOOR SAARI HUI AAJ BIMARIAN
JAB TARANGON ME SAAGAR SAMAANE LAGE

DEKHNA HAI ABHI JO KHAYALON ME HAI
CHHOONA HAI WO ABHI JO SAWALON ME HAI
AISA KAM HAI ABHI JO UJALON ME HAI
AB ANDHERE HAME GUDGUDAANE LAGE

BHAGENGE TO BAHUT WO IDHAR SE UDHAR
UNKO JAANE NA DOONGA MAIN BACHKAR MAGAR
UNKE ANURODH KA PHIR NA HOGA ASAR
CHAHE KITANE HI WO KASMASAANE LAGE

UNPE RANGEEN PHOOLON KA RAS CHHOD KAR
KAR HI DALUNGA UNKA BADAN TARBATAR
BHEEGANE SE WO AAENGE AISE NAZAR
TAJ JYON BARISHON ME NAHANE LAGE

HOLI AAYEE HAME JODANE KE LIYE
SARE SHIKAVE GILE CHHODANE KE LIYE
AB NAHIN KOI DIL TODANE KE LIYE
JAB KI RANGON KI GANGA BAHAANE LAGE

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2010, 04:07:02 PM »
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Waah Waah Sarvesh ji.. Holi Ke Rango mea bhi Khumaar Bhar diya aapne.. Sach mea Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat likha hai .. Bahoot Umda !

Happy Holi !
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2010, 11:38:31 PM »
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Wah wah Sarvesh ji.too good.lovely creation.bahut achi lagi .keep writting.Holi mubarak ho aap sabko. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2010, 05:04:04 AM »
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Wah wah Rastogi ji bahut achhi lagi aapki ye poem. Holi par kisi ke yaad aane ka bada achha varnan kiya aapne. Beautiful words and nice creation.
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2010, 05:54:26 AM »
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SARVESH RASTOGI JI.
BAHUT KHOOB IMAGINATION HAI AAPKI.
BAHUT ACHHE SE EXPRESS KIYA HAI.
AAPSE GUJARISH HUMEN BHI AISE COLOURFUL LIKHNA SIKHAYEN.
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2010, 06:04:36 AM »
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Waah Waah Sarvesh ji.. Hili Ke Rango mea bhi Khumaar Bhar diya aapne.. Sach mea Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat likha hai .. Bahoot Umda !

Happy Holi !

Bahut bahut shukriya Sophi Ji
Meri rachna pathakon ko pasand aaye isi me meri kamyabi hai
Thanks a lot
Happy Holi
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2010, 06:39:16 AM »
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Wah wah Sarvesh ji.too good.lovely creation.bahut achi lagi .keep writting.Holi mubarak ho aap sabko. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

Bahut bahut shukriya Madhuwesh Ji
badi inspiration milti hai aapse, thanks a lot
Happy Holi
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2010, 09:16:28 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    SARVESH RASTOGI JI....

AAJ YE HAATH SE MAUKA NAHI KHONA HAI
UNKA ANG ANG "HOLI KE RANG" SE BHIGONA HAI
AAJ APNE PYAAR KA IZHAAR KARNA HAI
HAR HAAL MEIN APNI KHWAISH POORI KARNA HAI..

HOLI MUBARAK....





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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2010, 09:47:09 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sarveshji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2010, 10:25:59 AM »
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bahoot hi sunder likha hai sarvesh ji...aapki likhi sabhi kavitayen gungunane ka jee karta hai.....badi sadhi hui lay hai aapki...saath hi vishay par aapki pakad bhi bani rahti hai...dheron shubhkamanyen ..is rachna ko bhi aaur aapko bhi
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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2010, 10:31:37 AM »
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WAH
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2010, 12:16:22 PM »
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Wah wah Rastogi ji bahut achhi lagi aapki ye poem. Holi par kisi ke yaad aane ka bada achha varnan kiya aapne. Beautiful words and nice creation.

Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz Ji
Aap jaise kadardaan hon to likhne ka maza aata hai
Meharbani
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2010, 12:23:05 PM »
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Behad Sunder Shabdon Me Rangon Ko Lafzon Me Saja kar Pesh Kiya hai Aapne Sarvesh Ji.. Maza aa gaya padh aapki Is Kavita Ko.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause




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«Reply #13 on: February 28, 2010, 01:09:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause :clap:HOLI MUBARAK S.R
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«Reply #14 on: February 28, 2010, 03:04:46 PM »
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SARVESH RASTOGI JI.
BAHUT KHOOB IMAGINATION HAI AAPKI.
BAHUT ACHHE SE EXPRESS KIYA HAI.
AAPSE GUJARISH HUMEN BHI AISE COLOURFUL LIKHNA SIKHAYEN.

Lot of Thanks Sangwan Ji
Khubsurat shabdon me aapne tarif ki hai, thanks again
Ye to aapki vinamrata hai varna aap to khud bhi bada khoob likhte hain, very nice
Hausla badhate rahiye
SARVESH RASTOGI
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