Holi par kuchh Dohe...... manjum

by manjum on March 23, 2011, 03:55:26 AM
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Holi par Kuchh Dohe.....

Subah rangili sham rangili.
yesi aayi thi yah holi.
Sab par barse rang kai,
Par meri khali thi jholi.

Din rangin rangili rat,
Dil main rah gayi dil ki bat.
Kaise sah paun main pagli,
Mile jo mujhko ye aaghat.

Jab bhi aati dekhi holi,
Rat andheri mujhe boli.
Subah ka rang main dungi tujhko,
Subah ne par aankh na kholi.

Holi aayi aur chali gayi,
Sab ki Duniya rang rangi gayi.
Main masoom lie dil apna,
Jane kitni bar chhali gayi.

Rang nahin umang nahin thi,
Khushion ki koi bhang nahin thi,
Yesi thi taqdeer meri ki,
Holi ki huddang nahin thi....

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2011, 04:14:37 AM »
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Manju jee ! Holi bhee itnaa dard liye aatee hai iskaa ahsaas hai mujhe bhee...phir bhee ek mashwarah aap ke liye

Ab ke baras jo aaye holi
dukh dard ko tu maar de goli
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2011, 04:24:47 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya mamtaji......

sahi kaha aapne...

agale baras kuchh esa karenge hokli main....
se uda denge gham ko kya rakha hai goli main...
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2011, 07:03:05 AM »
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Holi par Kuchh Dohe.....

Subah rangili sham rangili.
yesi aayi thi yah holi.
Sab par barse rang kai,
Par meri khali thi jholi.

Din rangin rangili rat,
Dil main rah gayi dil ki bat.
Kaise sah paun main pagli,
Mile jo mujhko ye aaghat.

Jab bhi aati dekhi holi,
Rat andheri mujhe boli.
Subah ka rang main dungi tujhko,
Subah ne par aankh na kholi.

Holi aayi aur chali gayi,
Sab ki Duniya rang rangi gayi.
 Mani masoom lie dil apna,
Jane kitni bar chhali gayi.

Rang nahin umang nahin thi,
Khushion ki koi bhang nahin thi,
Yesi thi taqdeer meri ki,
Holi ki huddang nahin thi....

manj "mann"

bahut khoobsurat ehsaas lage hume ... Manjum Ji !

acche rahe sabhi bandh ... rachna ke holi par ... !

dil se daad ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2011, 07:05:22 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anshuji.... bas aap sab ki duaye hi hain jo likhte rahte hain.... shukriya... ki aapne pasand kiya...

sath rahie...
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2011, 07:08:36 AM »
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bahut khoob manju ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2011, 07:12:48 AM »
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are niralaji lagta hai pasand nahin aaya aapko... kuchh likha nahin itna chhota comment pahli bar hai aapka......

han sahi bhi hai... holi jaise khushi ke mauke par... rona......

par thanks......pasand karne ke lie...

sath rahie......
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2011, 07:28:38 AM »
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hmm nhi...pasand to bahot aya islie kuch likh nai saka. bs normal sa cmnt de dia
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2011, 07:31:17 AM »
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kya kahe par bahut bahut shukriya... aapki duae mil jaye aur kya chahie...
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2011, 07:45:29 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2011, 07:46:29 AM »
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thanks saahilji.......
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2011, 10:19:56 AM »
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kehte Hai, Jab Dard hadd se Zyaada Chot De To kalam Se Likha
har Lafz Ro Padhta Hai..Iss kalam mein Yeh dard mehsoos Hua..Padhte waqt Aankhein Nam Ho Aayi..Kuch Likhne Ki Gustaaki Kar Raha Hoon...
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2011, 10:23:21 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji...... dard tab hi dard hai jab mahsus aur aapne hamare dard ko dard ke sath mahsus ki shukriya aapka...

jo likhkar aap hame nawaz rahe hain ham uska intzar kar rahe hain.... likhie plz....
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2011, 10:26:38 AM »
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Waqt To Aakhir Waqt hai Guzar Jaayega
Jahan Itne Dukh Dekhe, waha Sukh Bhi Aayega

Naa Ro Apni Kismat par Eh Mere "Dost"
Ek Din Tera Daaman Khushiyon Se Bhar Jaayega

Yeh Baat Sach Hai Ke Rabb Bardaasth Se Zyaada Dukh Nahi Deta
Magar Aukaat Se zyaada Sukh Zaroor Deta Hai!!!!
Rabb Khusboyon Se Tera Ghar-Aangan Bhi Mehkayega

"Khwaish" Dua Har Insaan Ki Rang Laati Hai Zaroor!!!
Hum To Phir Bhi Insaan hai,
 Ghisne Par pathar Bhi Nikhar Jayega...

Eh Dost Ek Din Tu Zaroor Muskurayega.........
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«Reply #14 on: March 23, 2011, 10:29:46 AM »
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aamin........ khwaish ji... khuda kare ki esa hi ho.......

ek dam sach baat kahi aapne bahut hosla mila.... han ham bhi mushkurayege.....

yun hi sath rahie....
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