Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

by abdbundeli on August 17, 2010, 04:52:53 PM

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abdbundeli

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Kaheen buund kee hai lalak;
Kaheen aab hee aab !
Kaheen aab sailaab ban,
Khaanaa karey kharaab!!

कहीं बूंद की है ललक ;
कहीं आब ही आब !
कहीं आब सैलाब बन ,
खाना करे खराब !!

- abd bundeli


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 05:04:06 PM »

Kia Baat hai Bundeli Sahab......
Ashaar meiN jaan hai dil ki gehrai meiN utar gaye...

PalkeN hathti nahiN thi kabhi us mahtaab se
Sina jal raha hai aaj kyuN apne hi aab se


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2010, 04:58:20 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 17, 2010, 05:04:06 PM

Kia Baat hai Bundeli Sahab......
Ashaar meiN jaan hai dil ki gehrai meiN utar gaye...

PalkeN hathti nahiN thi kabhi us mahtaab se
Sina jal raha hai aaj kyuN apne hi aab se

Thanks 'ParwaaZ' ji!

Pahloo mein aayaa nahin
Jaisey hee hamkhwaab!!
Jaag uthhaa mein chounktaa,
Huye khwaab beyaab!

- abd bundeli


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cara

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2010, 05:07:05 AM »

WAH KYA BAAT HAI ABD JI.......

KAHIN BUND BUND KO TARSE
KAHIN ITNA PAANI BARSE
KHET KHALIYAAN SAB KARE KHAHK...


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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 09:42:20 AM »

bahut khoob


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KOYAL46

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2010, 09:57:57 AM »

Nice sher ABDji.... Applause

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 17, 2010, 04:52:53 PM

Kaheen buund kee hai lalak;
Kaheen aab hee aab !
Kaheen aab sailaab ban,
Khaanaa karey kharaab!!

- abd bundeli


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2010, 10:04:33 AM »

ahaaa..
pesh he ji...sher ko sher arz he~

kahin ulfat ne dil toda
kahin unki furkat tod gayi
kabhi zindagi deti thi unki nazare
aaj maut mere paas chhod gayi~


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 11:02:54 AM »

Quote from: cara on August 18, 2010, 05:07:05 AM

WAH KYA BAAT HAI ABD JI.......

KAHIN BUND BUND KO TARSE
KAHIN ITNA PAANI BARSE
KHET KHALIYAAN SAB KARE KHAHK...

Thanks cara ji!

Yahaan Leh mein pralaya-saa
Drushya kiyaa utpanna;
Wahaan 'Pak' mein koti jan,
Ghan ney kiye wipanna!

यहाँ लेह में प्रलय -सा
दृश्य किया उत्पन्न ;
वहाँ 'पाक ' में कोटि जन ,
घन ने किये विपन्न !

- abd bundeli / Ramwatiya


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 11:06:39 AM »

Quote from: klaskar on August 18, 2010, 09:42:20 AM

bahut khoob

Thanks 'klaskar' ji!

- abd bundeli


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 11:11:33 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 18, 2010, 11:02:54 AM

Thanks cara ji!

Yahaan Leh mein pralaya-saa
Drushya kiyaa utpanna;
Wahaan 'Pak' mein koti jan,
Ghan ney kiye wipanna!

- abd bundeli

uchhaashista parikalpana he apki mitra~


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 11:25:27 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 18, 2010, 09:57:57 AM

Nice sher ABDji.... Applause

Thanks 'KOYAL46' ji!

Aisey kalaam (rachnaa) ko Hindi/Sanskrit mein 'DOHAA' kahtey hain! Yah 'sher' key baraabaree ki rachnaa hee hai!

- abd bundeli


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 11:29:24 AM »

bilkul sahi kaha ji..

"Abhi" khud ko bhajat rahe chadar se nikale paanv,
abhimaani jan ke rahe nahi koi naam na gaanv~


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 11:40:38 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 18, 2010, 10:04:33 AM

ahaaa..
pesh he ji...sher ko sher arz he~

kahin ulfat ne dil toda
kahin unki furkat tod gayi
kabhi zindagi deti thi unki nazare
aaj maut mere paas chhod gayi~

Thanks! Aur, bahut achchhey Abhi ji!

'Chayanawaa na aaye, sakhi, un bin nashaaya gayee!
Mein apney ghar mein baithee kahuun hiraaya gayee!'

'चयनवा न आये , सखि , उन बिन नशाय गयी !
मैं अपने घर में बैठी कऊँ हिराय गयी !!'

- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 11:48:31 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 18, 2010, 11:11:33 AM

uchhaashista parikalpana he apki mitra~

'uchhaashista' kaa 'arth' mein samajh nahin paayaa, Abhi ji! Dhanyawaad!

- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2010, 11:52:20 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 18, 2010, 09:57:57 AM

Nice sher ABDji.... Applause

Thanks 'KOYAL46' ji!

- abd bundeli


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