Kaheen buund kee hai lalak; kaheen aab hee aab !

by abdbundeli on August 17, 2010, 04:52:53 PM
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Kaheen buund kee hai lalak;
Kaheen aab hee aab !
Kaheen aab sailaab ban,
Khaanaa karey kharaab!!

कहीं  बूंद  की  है  ललक ;
कहीं  आब  ही  आब  !
कहीं  आब  सैलाब  बन ,
खाना  करे  खराब !!

           - abd bundeli


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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 05:04:06 PM »
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Kia Baat hai Bundeli Sahab......
Ashaar meiN jaan hai dil ki gehrai meiN utar gaye...


PalkeN hathti nahiN thi kabhi us mahtaab se
Sina jal raha hai aaj kyuN apne hi aab se

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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2010, 04:58:20 AM »
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Kia Baat hai Bundeli Sahab......
Ashaar meiN jaan hai dil ki gehrai meiN utar gaye...


PalkeN hathti nahiN thi kabhi us mahtaab se
Sina jal raha hai aaj kyuN apne hi aab se


Thanks 'ParwaaZ' ji!

Pahloo mein aayaa nahin
Jaisey hee hamkhwaab!!
Jaag uthhaa mein chounktaa,
Huye khwaab beyaab!

             - abd bundeli

  
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2010, 05:07:05 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       ABD JI.......

KAHIN BUND BUND KO TARSE
KAHIN ITNA PAANI BARSE
KHET KHALIYAAN SAB KARE KHAHK...
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 09:42:20 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2010, 09:57:57 AM »
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Nice sher ABDji.... Applause Applause Applause


Kaheen buund kee hai lalak;
Kaheen aab hee aab !
Kaheen aab sailaab ban,
Khaanaa karey kharaab!!

              - abd bundeli


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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2010, 10:04:33 AM »
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ahaaa..
pesh he ji...sher ko sher arz he~

kahin ulfat ne dil toda
kahin unki furkat tod gayi
kabhi zindagi deti thi unki nazare
aaj maut mere paas chhod gayi~
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 11:02:54 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       ABD JI.......

KAHIN BUND BUND KO TARSE
KAHIN ITNA PAANI BARSE
KHET KHALIYAAN SAB KARE KHAHK...

Thanks cara ji!

Yahaan Leh mein pralaya-saa
Drushya kiyaa utpanna;
Wahaan 'Pak' mein koti jan,
Ghan ney kiye wipanna!

यहाँ  लेह  में  प्रलय -सा
दृश्य  किया  उत्पन्न ;
वहाँ  'पाक ' में  कोटि  जन ,
घन  ने  किये  विपन्न !

           
            - abd bundeli / Ramwatiya
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 11:06:39 AM »
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bahut khoob

Thanks 'klaskar' ji!

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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 11:11:33 AM »
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Thanks cara ji!

Yahaan Leh mein pralaya-saa
Drushya kiyaa utpanna;
Wahaan 'Pak' mein koti jan,
Ghan ney kiye wipanna!

            - abd bundeli


uchhaashista parikalpana he apki mitra~
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 11:25:27 AM »
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Nice sher ABDji.... Applause Applause Applause


Thanks 'KOYAL46' ji!

Aisey kalaam (rachnaa) ko Hindi/Sanskrit mein 'DOHAA' kahtey hain! Yah 'sher' key baraabaree ki rachnaa hee hai!

                             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 11:29:24 AM »
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bilkul sahi kaha ji..

"Abhi" khud ko bhajat rahe chadar se nikale paanv,
abhimaani jan ke rahe nahi koi naam na gaanv~
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 11:40:38 AM »
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ahaaa..
pesh he ji...sher ko sher arz he~

kahin ulfat ne dil toda
kahin unki furkat tod gayi
kabhi zindagi deti thi unki nazare
aaj maut mere paas chhod gayi~


Thanks! Aur, bahut achchhey Abhi ji!

'Chayanawaa na aaye, sakhi, un bin nashaaya gayee!
 Mein apney ghar mein baithee kahuun hiraaya gayee!'

'चयनवा  न  आये , सखि , उन  बिन  नशाय  गयी !
 मैं   अपने  घर  में  बैठी  कऊँ  हिराय  गयी !!'

                        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 11:48:31 AM »
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uchhaashista parikalpana he apki mitra~

'uchhaashista' kaa 'arth' mein samajh nahin paayaa, Abhi ji! Dhanyawaad!
         
               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2010, 11:52:20 AM »
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Nice sher ABDji.... Applause Applause Applause


Thanks 'KOYAL46' ji!

  - abd bundeli
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