KAL TUJHE CHOODD JAUNGAA..

by pandit on May 12, 2009, 01:09:08 AM
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AAJ MAIN CHALA GAYA TO SHAYAD WAAPIS NA AAUNGA,
SIRF APNI YAADON KI EK CHINGAARI CHODD JAUNGAA.

AAJ NAHI, KAL YAAD KAROGEE MERE EHSAAN-E-WAFA,
KAL MAIN KHUD TERI YAADO SE BHI DOOR CHALA JAUNGA.

AAJ SUN LE MERE KAP-KAPATE HOTHO KI DAASTAAN,
KAL TERE LABOO KO PYAASA CHODD JAUNGAA.

AAJ KI AAKHIRI HAI RAAT TERE SEHAR ME,
KAL JAL KAR DHUAAN BAN K UDD JAUNGAA.


...PANDIT.....




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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2009, 01:43:17 AM »
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TUNE THUKRAYA TO JAANE KIDHER JAUNGAA,
TU DENA EK AAWAZ MAIN DAUDA CHALA-AUNGA.

JAB JEE CHAHE AAJMAA LENA MUJHE,
MIT KAR TERE HOTO PE HANSI BAN K BIKHAR-JAUNGA.

SIRF EK BAAR PYAAR SE BATA DENA MUJHE,
ZINDAGI SE HE NAHI TERI YAADO SE BHI NIKAL JAUNGAA.



....PANDIT......

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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2009, 01:44:33 AM »
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AAJ MAIN CHALA GAYA TO SHAYAD WAAPIS NA AAUNGA,
SIRF APNI YAADON KI EK CHINGAARI CHODD JAUNGAA.

AAJ NAHI, KAL YAAD KAROGEE MERE EHSAAN-E-WAFA,
KAL MAIN KHUD TERI YAADO SE BHI DOOR CHALA JAUNGA.

AAJ SUN LE MERE KAP-KAPATE HOTHO KI DAASTAAN,
KAL TERE LABOO KO PYAASA CHODD JAUNGAA.

AAJ KI AAKHIRI HAI RAAT TERE SEHAR ME,
KAL JAL KAR DHUAAN BAN K UDD JAUNGAA.


...PANDIT.....

Bahut accha likha aur her ek alfaz mein dard ka ehsaas b hua.
God bless u Pandit... Nice emotional lines... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2009, 01:45:57 AM »
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Bahut accha likha aur her ek alfaz mein dard ka ehsaas b hua.
God bless u Pandit... Nice emotional lines... Thumbs UP


THANK YOU VERY MUCH ROJA JEE...
KABHI-KABHI NIKAL AATE HAIN ZAZBAAT...

NYWAYS,
AAPNE PASAND KIYA HUME BAHUT ACCHA LAGA..
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2009, 01:50:16 AM »
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TUNE THUKRAYA TO JAANE KIDHER JAUNGAA,
TU DENA EK AAWAZ MAIN DAUDA CHALA-AUNGA.

JAB JEE CHAHE AAJMAA LENA MUJHE,
MIT KAR TERE HOTO PE HANSI BAN K BIKHAR-JAUNGA.

SIRF EK BAAR PYAAR SE BATA DENA MUJHE,
ZINDAGI SE HE NAHI TERI YAADO SE BHI NIKAL JAUNGAA.



....PANDIT......

Wah ek aur dard bara kalam padne ko mila. Bahut khoob Pandit.

Mujhe chod kar jane ki baat kyu kaha sanam
Meri zindagi ho tum, tum ho mere jaan-e-mann,

Ek nasha, Ek saja Ek Ada ho kaza
Tum ko her roop mein mai dekha sanam

Chain dil ka mere noor aankhon ka tum
Ho tumhi zindagi meri ye jaan-e-mann

Jab kabhi sochti hu likhu kuch na kuch
Naam tera hi likhti hai meri kalam

Chahe dushman zamana ye banta rahe
Teri khatir sahungi mai her ek sitam

Jaan hai tu, "Roja" ki ye mere Sanam
Dil diya hai tujhe, teri kasam..



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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2009, 02:28:35 AM »
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Nice ones Pandit Ji and good response Roja Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2009, 02:32:39 AM »
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arey wah pandit ji kya khoob likha aapne,very nice.
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pandit
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2009, 03:27:59 AM »
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Wah ek aur dard bara kalam padne ko mila. Bahut khoob Pandit.

Mujhe chod kar jane ki baat kyu kaha sanam
Meri zindagi ho tum, tum ho mere jaan-e-mann,

Ek nasha, Ek saja Ek Ada ho kaza
Tum ko her roop mein mai dekha sanam

Chain dil ka mere noor aankhon ka tum
Ho tumhi zindagi meri ye jaan-e-mann

Jab kabhi sochti hu likhu kuch na kuch
Naam tera hi likhti hai meri kalam

Chahe dushman zamana ye banta rahe
Teri khatir sahungi mai her ek sitam

Jaan hai tu, "Roja" ki ye mere Sanam
Dil diya hai tujhe, teri kasam..





Bahut khoob roja jee..

aap k inn lines ka reply zarur dungaa..
but aaj nahi, kal, q ki abhi ek article likh raha hoon...

wait kizeagaa..
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pandit
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2009, 03:28:16 AM »
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Nice ones Pandit Ji and good response Roja Ji

Thanks Rajesh bhai....
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Sonu
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2009, 03:41:16 AM »
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bahut khoob pandit ji...

kea bat hai sanju bahut khoob...

Yaad karte hai tumhe tanhai mein ,
dil dooba hai gamo ki garai mein,
hume mat dhoundna duniya ki bhid mein,
hum milenge tumhe tumahi parchaai mein.


Quote from: pandit jlink=topic=46349.msg891239#msg891239 date=1242090548

AAJ MAIN CHALA GAYA TO SHAYAD WAAPIS NA AAUNGA,
SIRF APNI YAADON KI EK CHINGAARI CHODD JAUNGAA.

AAJ NAHI, KAL YAAD KAROGEE MERE EHSAAN-E-WAFA,
KAL MAIN KHUD TERI YAADO SE BHI DOOR CHALA JAUNGA.

AAJ SUN LE MERE KAP-KAPATE HOTHO KI DAASTAAN,
KAL TERE LABOO KO PYAASA CHODD JAUNGAA.

AAJ KI AAKHIRI HAI RAAT TERE SEHAR ME,
KAL JAL KAR DHUAAN BAN K UDD JAUNGAA.


...PANDIT.....





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Sager4u
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2009, 03:56:53 AM »
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Pandit ji ko jai shree ram, pada maine aapka kalaam, aap mere dil me ghar kar gaye, aapke sabdo or aapko mera koti-2 salaam........... Nice work pandit ji or roja ji aapka bhi jawab nahin.
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2009, 05:22:00 AM »
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bohut khoob pandit ji Applause
aapne bhi khoob saath nibhaya hai roja ji Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2009, 05:25:51 AM »
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AAJ MAIN CHALA GAYA TO SHAYAD WAAPIS NA AAUNGA,
SIRF APNI YAADON KI EK CHINGAARI CHODD JAUNGAA.

AAJ NAHI, KAL YAAD KAROGEE MERE EHSAAN-E-WAFA,
KAL MAIN KHUD TERI YAADO SE BHI DOOR CHALA JAUNGA.

AAJ SUN LE MERE KAP-KAPATE HOTHO KI DAASTAAN,
KAL TERE LABOO KO PYAASA CHODD JAUNGAA.

AAJ KI AAKHIRI HAI RAAT TERE SEHAR ME,
KAL JAL KAR DHUAAN BAN K UDD JAUNGAA.


...PANDIT.....







NAAICE................PANDIT
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2009, 05:29:03 AM »
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arey wah pandit ji kya khoob likha aapne,very nice.

THANKS MADHUWESH JEE..
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2009, 05:29:55 AM »
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bahut khoob pandit ji...

kea bat hai sanju bahut khoob...

Yaad karte hai tumhe tanhai mein ,
dil dooba hai gamo ki garai mein,
hume mat dhoundna duniya ki bhid mein,
hum milenge tumhe tumahi parchaai mein.



THANKS SONU...
GUD WORK AGAIN..
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