KAL TUJHE CHOODD JAUNGAA..

by pandit on May 12, 2009, 01:09:08 AM
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«Reply #45 on: May 14, 2009, 05:13:03 AM »
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bahut khoob sager ji... yeo hi likhte rahow..

Laut jati duniya gam hamara dekhkar
jaise laut jati hai lehre kinara dekhkar
tum kandha mat dena mere zanaaze ko
kahin zindaa na ho jaaon tera sahara dekhkar.


bahut khoob sonu...
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«Reply #46 on: May 14, 2009, 05:13:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob sonu ji!!              tujhse bahut pyaar karta hun mai,ye such hai ki tujh pe marta gun main,lekin main pyaar main jaan nahin de sakta,qki tujhe jeete jee pane ki chah rakhta hun main

bahut sahi farmaya sager saaheb...
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«Reply #47 on: May 14, 2009, 05:23:19 AM »
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Thanku pandit ji ! Aap k liye:- aap unhi hamara housla badate rahe,vada raha hum unhi likhte rahenge,itni laga denge armano ki dukan,her dukan per humare arma bikte rahenge.
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«Reply #48 on: May 14, 2009, 06:45:16 AM »
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Thanku pandit ji ! Aap k liye:- aap unhi hamara housla badate rahe,vada raha hum unhi likhte rahenge,itni laga denge armano ki dukan,her dukan per humare arma bikte rahenge.

WAAH SAGER BHAI KYA BAAT HAI,
AAPKI HAR ADA EK SHAYARANA ANDAAZ HAI..
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Sonu
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«Reply #49 on: May 15, 2009, 05:10:05 AM »
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thanks Sanju app bhi kuch likhu...

bahut khoob sonu...
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«Reply #50 on: May 15, 2009, 05:10:37 AM »
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bahut khoob Sager ji..

Thanku pandit ji ! Aap k liye:- aap unhi hamara housla badate rahe,vada raha hum unhi likhte rahenge,itni laga denge armano ki dukan,her dukan per humare arma bikte rahenge.
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«Reply #51 on: May 15, 2009, 07:29:04 AM »
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thanks Sanju app bhi kuch likhu...


THANKS SONU JEE..
KAL ZARUR LIKHUNGAA..
DONT PANICK
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«Reply #52 on: May 17, 2009, 04:31:34 AM »
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your most welcome Sanju .... are baba nahi panick hu rahi hoon jub dil kare to likh leyna to javab de dunig Usual Smile


THANKS SONU JEE..
KAL ZARUR LIKHUNGAA..
DONT PANICK
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«Reply #53 on: May 18, 2009, 04:06:05 AM »
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your most welcome Sanju .... are baba nahi panick hu rahi hoon jub dil kare to likh leyna to javab de dunig Usual Smile



thanks for understanding...
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«Reply #54 on: May 21, 2009, 05:36:57 AM »
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your most welcome Usual Smile

thanks for understanding...
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«Reply #55 on: May 21, 2009, 05:39:42 AM »
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Yeh jism jala do yeh ruh jala do
Meri wafa ka sanam kuch toh sila do

Rahe yaad hume mar kar bhi tere sitam
Beshak zindagi mein tum hume bhula do

Tod kar dil na aaye khalish(silvat) chahere par
Dil dukhane ki raqib hume bhi kala do

Mumkin nahi tu de sake muskurahat
Chalo aaj hume jee bhar kar rula do

Kab tak tadpegi 'Sonu' yuhi bejaan
Ya khuda iss ruh ko jism se mila do
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«Reply #56 on: May 21, 2009, 07:21:19 PM »
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Thanku pandit ji ! Aap k liye:- aap unhi hamara housla badate rahe,vada raha hum unhi likhte rahenge,itni laga denge armano ki dukan,her dukan per humare arma bikte rahenge.

Sager jee..
aapne to kasam he de-di....
par hum bhi peeche rehne waalo me se nahi hai..
aapka hausala unn he badhate rahengee.............
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«Reply #57 on: May 21, 2009, 07:22:22 PM »
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Yeh jism jala do yeh ruh jala do
Meri wafa ka sanam kuch toh sila do

Rahe yaad hume mar kar bhi tere sitam
Beshak zindagi mein tum hume bhula do

Tod kar dil na aaye khalish(silvat) chahere par
Dil dukhane ki raqib hume bhi kala do

Mumkin nahi tu de sake muskurahat
Chalo aaj hume jee bhar kar rula do

Kab tak tadpegi 'Sonu' yuhi bejaan
Ya khuda iss ruh ko jism se mila do

Kya baat hai sonu je...kya baat hai..
waah waah...
dil ko kaise cheer diya hai aapne aur uski aawaz se ye shayari banayi hai..
great............
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Sager4u
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«Reply #58 on: May 21, 2009, 07:44:02 PM »
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Sager jee..
aapne to kasam he de-di....
par hum bhi peeche rehne waalo me se nahi hai..
aapka hausala unn he badhate rahengee.............
pandit ji apne pm box kholkar dekho. ek masage nock nock ker raha hai.
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«Reply #59 on: May 22, 2009, 01:35:58 AM »
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Yeh jism jala do yeh ruh jala do
Meri wafa ka sanam kuch toh sila do

Rahe yaad hume mar kar bhi tere sitam
Beshak zindagi mein tum hume bhula do

Tod kar dil na aaye khalish(silvat) chahere par
Dil dukhane ki raqib hume bhi kala do

Mumkin nahi tu de sake muskurahat
Chalo aaj hume jee bhar kar rula do

Kab tak tadpegi 'Sonu' yuhi bejaan
Ya khuda iss ruh ko jism se mila do
Bahut khoob sonu ji aapne to apne dil ko nikaal ker rakh diya. Very nice...................
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