"Maa" Aapka Haath Sar Par Ho "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 07, 2011, 02:36:58 PM
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"MAA" kehne Ko Yeh Lafz Bahut Chota Hai Par Iss Lafz Ki Gehraai Ko Duniya Mein Koi Naap Nahi Sakta..Hum Duniya Ke Liye Be-shak Kuch Bhi Nahi Hai, Par Har Insaan Apni Maa Ke Liye Sab Kuch Hota Hai..Kuch Anmol Jazbaat Hai Jinhe Lafzon Mein Utaarne Ki Koshish Kar Raha Hoon...Zaroor Saath Dijiyega..

Aapki Duayon Se Naseeb Hai Yeh Saugaat Mujhe
Aapki Hi Balayen Rakhti Hai Abaad Mujhe

Main Duniya Ke Liye Be-shak Khaak Hoon
Par Main Hoon, Aap Ke Liye Sab Kuch!!!
Aapka Haath Sar Par Ho To,
Kaun Kar Sakta Hai Phir Barbaad Mujhe...

Naa Jaane Kin Lafzo Se Main Aapka Shukriya Ada Karoon!!!
Main Sirf Ek Jism Hoon ,Aapne Di Hai Awaaz Mujhe...

Girte-Sambhalte,Rote-Haste Har Haal Mein Aap Mere Saath Ho!!!
Ek Aap Hi Ho Jis par Hai Sab se Zyaada Naaz Mujhe...

"Maa" Lafz Kehna Bahut Asaan hai Par
Iss Lafz Ki Gehraai Ko Samajhna Na-Mumkin!!!!!!!!
"Maa" Aapke Hi Pyaar Ke Dam Par main Zinda Hoon
Zinda Rakhta hai Bas Yehi Ek Ehsaas Mujhe....


                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2011, 05:36:07 PM »
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khwaish ji...aapkiye post tareef karne ya wahh wahh kehne se bht unchi hai
ye sirf ek poem nahin har ek bachche k dil se kabhi na kabhi nikli hui baat hai
aaj aapne har bade chhote bachche k dil ki baat yahan likh di hai....dil se salaam aapke iss pyari creation ko....
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2011, 06:15:28 PM »
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Dost, bahaut khubsoorat aur ache topic pe likhi gayi hai..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2011, 07:16:34 PM »
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Anuji aapka kin lafzon mein shukriya ada karoon,aapne iss kalaam ke ehsaas ko bakhoobi samjha..aapne apna waqt diya aapka teh dil se shukriya Anuji..
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«Reply #4 on: March 08, 2011, 08:26:02 AM »
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very touchy topic and very touchy lines khwaish ji.....
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«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2011, 11:24:45 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 07, 2011, 06:15:28 PM
Dost, bahaut khubsoorat aur ache topic pe likhi gayi hai..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
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Khush rahiye..!

Aapka teh Dil Se Shukriya Bhai Rahim!!!

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: March 08, 2011, 11:34:52 AM »
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wah khwaishji...kya kahen.... bas kuchh likhne ka mann ho gaya dekhte hain kab likh pate hain... bahut khub...

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«Reply #7 on: March 08, 2011, 01:49:32 PM »
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khwaish ji aap ki is rachna mai bahut dum hai aur aap ke har word mai vajan hai padhke badi maaki yaad aagayi Usual Smile really hart touching poem aap ki is rachna ko mera dilo jaan se respectli salam
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2011, 08:57:06 AM »
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bahot aachi peshkash khwaish ji......

theme is mother  and apka likha hua bas aur kya chaiye padne ko........bahot hi zazbato se bharpur poetry he .......this is dedicated to all mothers.....padkar sukun mila ......no words for it......

khwaish ji ek baat me confuse ho raha hu...please wo clear kare.....

"Aapki Hi Balayen Rakhti Hai Abaad Mujhe"

BALAYEN.........yaha iska kya meaning nikal raha he......

jaha tak me janta hu "mother bacche ki bala leti he ya balaye utarti he ya khud per leti he" .. bala deti nahi "kyuki .....bala = afat, problem, musibat (as i know)......mumkin he me bala shabd me confuse hou.....jo bhi he aap ise clear kare......

ek baar fir apki peshkash ko dil se duaye aur congrats........
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«Reply #9 on: March 09, 2011, 09:10:22 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on March 09, 2011, 08:57:06 AM
bahot aachi peshkash khwaish ji......

theme is mother  and apka likha hua bas aur kya chaiye padne ko........bahot hi zazbato se bharpur poetry he .......this is dedicated to all mothers.....padkar sukun mila ......no words for it......

khwaish ji ek baat me confuse ho raha hu...please wo clear kare.....

"Aapki Hi Balayen Rakhti Hai Abaad Mujhe"

BALAYEN.........yaha iska kya meaning nikal raha he......

jaha tak me janta hu "mother bacche ki bala leti he ya balaye utarti he ya khud per leti he" .. bala deti nahi "kyuki .....bala = afat, problem, musibat (as i know)......mumkin he me bala shabd me confuse hou.....jo bhi he aap ise clear kare......

ek baar fir apki peshkash ko dil se duaye aur congrats........

Aapka Tehhhhhh Dillll se Shukriya Uthkarshji, Jo Aapne Iss Jazbaati Rachna Ko Pasand Farmaya..Jhoot Nhai kahunga Aapke Comments Ka Intezaar Tha Mujhe..Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya..


Aur Uthkarshji..Punjabiyon Mein Yeh Jhumla Bahut Baar Kaha Jaata Hai,"Teriyan balayen,main leva" iska Matlab Yehi Hota Hai Ke Teri har Bhala mere Sar-Maathe..(Sign Of Affection) To "Balaye" Shabd Sirf Lene Ke Isatemaal Hoti Hai..Jaise Ke maine Waha Likha"Aapki Hi Balayen Rakhti Hai Abad Mujhe" Actually yeh Har Maa Apne bache Ke Sar par Do Hatahon se Vaar kar Leti Hai.. I hope Main Sahi Tareeke se keh Paaya Jo main Kehna Chaahta Tha.. tongue3
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«Reply #10 on: March 09, 2011, 09:28:15 AM »
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khwaish ji apki baat me samaj gaya ........kyuki apne wahi kaha jo muje laga ......even humne same hi kaha he .........well wese me sirf yaha sentence me "balaye" ka meaning janna chah raha tha aur wo yaha kuch mushkil ho raha he samjana bhi aur samjna bhi......anyways thx for share this........bahot aachi poetry he...keep it up
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«Reply #11 on: March 09, 2011, 03:53:09 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 08, 2011, 08:26:02 AM
very touchy topic and very touchy lines khwaish ji.....

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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2011, 10:14:01 AM »
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Wah Khwaish ji ,apni maa ko itna izzat diya isse badke doulat aur kiya ho sakti,bahut gaherai aur lajawab peshkash,hats off icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2011, 04:28:58 PM »
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khwaish ji aap ki is rachna mai bahut dum hai aur aap ke har word mai vajan hai padhke badi maaki yaad aagayi Usual Smile really hart touching poem aap ki is rachna ko mera dilo jaan se respectli salam

Kishan Ji, Isse Zyaada Mujhe Aur kya chahiye Ke meri Kavita se Kisi Ko Apne Maa Ki Yaad Aa Jaaye...Yeh Comment Hi Iss Kavita Ka Sabse Bada Inaam Hai..Yuhi Saath dete Rahiyega icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: May 07, 2011, 10:15:24 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on March 09, 2011, 09:28:15 AM
khwaish ji apki baat me samaj gaya ........kyuki apne wahi kaha jo muje laga ......even humne same hi kaha he .........well wese me sirf yaha sentence me "balaye" ka meaning janna chah raha tha aur wo yaha kuch mushkil ho raha he samjana bhi aur samjna bhi......anyways thx for share this........bahot aachi poetry he...keep it up


Thankyou Once Again Uthkarshji
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