Maa aur Bachpan

by amit.koc on April 08, 2015, 10:35:23 AM
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दोस्तों ये पंक्तिया मेरी एक शायरी "तेरी नज़रों से जो बच जाते तो अच्छा होता"के तर्ज पर है. एक शायरी मां और बचपन के नाम.

जो गर बचपन मे लौट पाते तो अच्छा होता
लोरियां मां की जो सुन पाते तो अच्छा होता

बहुत फैलाये पर शोहरत के आसमनों में
तेरे आंचल में सिमट जाते तो अच्छा होता

बहुत तेहज़ीब-ओ-अदब से मां खाते मेहफिलों में
तेरे हाथों से जो खा पाते तो अच्छा होता

दगमगातें हैं मेरे पांव आज राहों में
तेरी उन्गली पकड़ चल पाते तो अच्छा होता
जो गर बचपन में लौट पाते तो अच्छा होता
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2015, 01:31:30 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2015, 07:45:28 PM »
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bahut hee sunder likhaa hai aapne bilkul maan kee loree kee tarah.
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2015, 10:48:50 AM »
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Bahut bahut dhanyawaad aap sabhi ka... Sach mai, Maa aur bachpan ye dono hi khuda ke pass hone ka ehsaas dilate hain...
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