* MAA*...... Batwara

by Roja on July 03, 2007, 06:39:59 PM
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Friends... This one is dedicated to my Mother, who is very sick.


Maa ne kahan aankhein namkar,

Bachchon ye kya fasaad hai?
Mujhse batao tumhari maa hu
Kaho tumhari kya fariyad hai???

Kabhi na utnewali aankhein uti
aur hairaan hokar maa reh gayee
Aaj tak huyee na be-adabi aisi
Majboor maa woh bhi seh gayee..

Jis tarah takrati hai talware
Usee tarah ek awaaj goonji
Ek sath hum reh sakte nahi,
Baant do hame Ghar, Daulat aur Zameen..

Majboor maa ne dekha... Lalon ko..
Awaaj ki khanak se ghabrakar
Ek boond aansoo aa tehar gaya
Palkon ke kinaron pe lehrakar..

Khamosh nigah ne kuch kaha
Sun saka jisse na ladla koyee
Diwangi se dundula gayee aankhein
Garam Aansuwon se bhi na pigla koyee..

Kaha nigah ne bante ho Ghar kya?
Banton to sahi Maa Ki Khok Pehle..!!
Is Ghar per haq baad main banega
Jahan Nau Maah rahe us per pehle..

Kya band sakte ho Maa ka Jigar?
Vo jajbaat Maa ke Baant sakte ho?
yahi jaijaad kyu chode jate ho?
Le lo Maa Adhi-Adhi jo kaat sakte ho...

Lalat hai us aulaad per Jo
Bant nahi leta hai pyar maa ka
Jis se chahiye they peene aansoo maa ke
Pee raha hai lahoo wo Biradhara ka..

Kyu na maa ki mamta bant lo
Maa ke naseeb ka dard bant lo
tumhe zindagi ki garmahat dene ko
Uska hua khoon jo sard bant lo..

Zameen se pehle kyu nahi baant lete
Maa ka hi jism adha-adha
aur bant lo daulat ki jagah
Maa ke jism ka khoon adha-adha

Doston is batware ki baton ne hi
Tabah kiya sadiyon is desh ko
Bant.the-bant.the kahin yahan tak na pahunche
Desh samajne lage bas ek ghar ko..

to phir yeh bhasha tootne ki band ho
Ab batware ki phir baat na ho
Jagde-bichade roj, phir mil jaye
Jiski subah na ho aisi raat na ho...


Roja
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2007, 07:25:56 PM »
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khamosh nigah ne kuch kaha
sun saka jise na ladla koyee
diwangi dhundla gayee aankhein
garam aasuwon se bhi na pigla koi
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monali
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2007, 07:45:24 PM »
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Rojaji aapne bahutachha likha yeh lines dil ko choo jati hai....

      Khamosh nigah ne kuch kaha
      sun saka na ladla koyee
      diwangi dhundla gayee aankhein
      garam aansuwon se bhi na pighla koi!!!

      Wahaaaaa kya bat hai
      Keep writinh
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2007, 06:22:11 AM »
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Roja..
Bohot hi umda koshish hai aur kuch misre toh bohot hi khoobsurat ban pade hain !
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2007, 05:17:13 AM »
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bahoot khoob Roja... bahoot hi ach alikha hai
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2007, 04:38:46 PM »
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Thanks Ricky ji., Pooja di, and Mona...
I am honoured
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2007, 12:17:25 PM »
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Meri Amma K Naam

Meri Amma Ko Neend Se Jaga De Koyee
Nahi Toh Mujh Ko Hii Sula De Koyee

Mujhko Bistar Ki Aadat Nahi
Apni Godi Main Sula De Koyee

Shayad Jaag Jaye Amma Meri Rona Sunkar
Mujhe Bewajah Rula De Koyee

Maine Kayee Roz Se Nahi Khayee
Mujhe Mohabbat Se Khila De Koyee

Mujhe Kwayish Nahi Mile Kuch Dunia Se
Mujhe Sirf Meri Amma Se Mila De Koyee

Roja
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2007, 03:01:37 PM »
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Aaj Kuch karan vash mai apni Maa se dhur hu.. Par aaj Mai
jo bhi hu Maa ke karan hu..

Ye kavita un sab Maa ke naam Samarpit karti hu, jinke liye
Bachein hai Dil ka tukda aur kya kya nahi seh lethi hai unhe
bada karne main..

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Maa... Meri  pehli shikshak ho tum., tumhein pranaam
Jeevan ke pratam Sabak sikhaya tumne..
Ram, Raheem, Nanak... Jesus Ko Naman sikhaye
Par-dharam sahishnuta ka paat padaya
Maa sabse acchi Shikshak ho tum.. tumhein pranaam..

Badon ka aadhar, choton se pyar,
Sacche rishton ka matlab hai samjaya
Kadi mehnat karna sikhlaya
Maa sabse safal shikshak ho tum, tumhein pranaam..

Mai jitna bhi Yash Naam Kamau
Par burayee se dhur rahu
Sachchi bakthi, seva ka paat padaya

Maa sabse pyari Shikshak ho tum... Tumhein pranam..

Roja
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2007, 06:46:20 AM »
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Roja

Maa ki mamta aur uski qurbaniyon ka bahut he pyara ehsaas tumne yahan apni poetry ke dwara izhaar kiya hai.

Tumhari is thread ke kaaran he maine tumhe pm kiya tha aur tumhari amma ka haal poocha tha, jiski wajah se aaj hum ache dost hain.

Tumahari amma theek ho rahi hain, iski behad khushi hai mujhe.

Maa ke liye bache bhi kya kya karte hain uska ek example yeh bhi dekho. =D>

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/6bsA5WGFWrw&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/6bsA5WGFWrw&rel=1</a>

God bless !
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2007, 11:20:24 AM »
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Quote from: "Rajbir"
Roja

Maa ki mamta aur uski qurbaniyon ka bahut he pyara ehsaas tumne yahan apni poetry ke dwara izhaar kiya hai.

Tumhari is thread ke kaaran he maine tumhe pm kiya tha aur tumhari amma ka haal poocha tha, jiski wajah se aaj hum ache dost hain.

Tumahari amma theek ho rahi hain, iski behad khushi hai mujhe.

Maa ke liye bache bhi kya kya karte hain uska ek example yeh bhi dekho. =D>

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/6bsA5WGFWrw&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/6bsA5WGFWrw&rel=1</a>

God bless !


Bahut bahut shukhriya
the thread jo diya tha dil ko pigla diya..
Thank you very much for your caring lines..
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: September 13, 2007, 02:56:01 PM »
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bahoot khoob Roja!!! bahoot hi acha likha hai... "Meri Amma ke naam" kavita ne to rula diya.. bahoot dard hai is kavita main... Good work!!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 23, 2007, 02:34:33 AM »
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Maa Dunia Ka Woh Moti Hai
 
Jiski Chamak Her Bachche Ki Aankh Mein Hoti Hai
 
Yeh Moti Gum Ho Jaye Toh, Dil Udaas Ho Jata Hai
 
Zindagi Ki Raah Per Bas Andhara Hi Nazar Aata Hai
 
Per Maa Kahi Bi Rahein, Uski Dua Her Bacche Paata Hai
 
Maa Se Pyara Koi Nahi Yaha Pe
 
Is Dunia Ke Aane Ke Baad, Ek Maa Ko Hi Jana Hai

Maa Her Dukh Sehti Hai, Chehre Ke Muskurahat Se
 
Dukh Apna Chupati Hai
 
Dunia Mein Sab Kuch Bikhta Hai
 
Maa Ka Pyar Nahi Bikhta


Maa ka Pyar unhe poochiye jin ke pass yeh
Pyar ka kazana nahi hai...
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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2007, 07:19:41 AM »
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three of ur creation is realy beautiful. very toching.. ur deseve real appreciation for this.. keep writing Dear
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«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2007, 11:35:33 AM »
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Roja I have no words to appreciate it.

really yaar u r the great shayaar.

So nice work.

Prem Chawla
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«Reply #14 on: February 25, 2009, 06:14:01 AM »
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Friends... This one is dedicated to my Mother, who is very sick.


Maa ne kahan aankhein namkar,

Bachchon ye kya fasaad hai?
Mujhse batao tumhari maa hu
Kaho tumhari kya fariyad hai???

Kabhi na utnewali aankhein uti
aur hairaan hokar maa reh gayee
Aaj tak huyee na be-adabi aisi
Majboor maa woh bhi seh gayee..

Jis tarah takrati hai talware
Usee tarah ek awaaj goonji
Ek sath hum reh sakte nahi,
Baant do hame Ghar, Daulat aur Zameen..

Majboor maa ne dekha... Lalon ko..
Awaaj ki khanak se ghabrakar
Ek boond aansoo aa tehar gaya
Palkon ke kinaron pe lehrakar..

Khamosh nigah ne kuch kaha
Sun saka jisse na ladla koyee
Diwangi se dundula gayee aankhein
Garam Aansuwon se bhi na pigla koyee..

Kaha nigah ne bante ho Ghar kya?
Banton to sahi Maa Ki Khok Pehle..!!
Is Ghar per haq baad main banega
Jahan Nau Maah rahe us per pehle..

Kya band sakte ho Maa ka Jigar?
Vo jajbaat Maa ke Baant sakte ho?
yahi jaijaad kyu chode jate ho?
Le lo Maa Adhi-Adhi jo kaat sakte ho...

Lalat hai us aulaad per Jo
Bant nahi leta hai pyar maa ka
Jis se chahiye they peene aansoo maa ke
Pee raha hai lahoo wo Biradhara ka..

Kyu na maa ki mamta bant lo
Maa ke naseeb ka dard bant lo
tumhe zindagi ki garmahat dene ko
Uska hua khoon jo sard bant lo..

Zameen se pehle kyu nahi baant lete
Maa ka hi jism adha-adha
aur bant lo daulat ki jagah
Maa ke jism ka khoon adha-adha

Doston is batware ki baton ne hi
Tabah kiya sadiyon is desh ko
Bant.the-bant.the kahin yahan tak na pahunche
Desh samajne lage bas ek ghar ko..

to phir yeh bhasha tootne ki band ho
Ab batware ki phir baat na ho
Jagde-bichade roj, phir mil jaye
Jiski subah na ho aisi raat na ho...


Roja

wowwww wht a poem roja ji..................bhut khoob really very nice one kia haqeeqat bayaan ki hai aapne so touchy...god bless u keep wrighting..........................
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