* MAA*...... Batwara

by Roja on July 03, 2007, 06:39:59 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 25, 2009, 06:46:52 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot khoob Roja sis Clapping Smiley nice creation... Mind blowing Thumbs UP
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«Reply #16 on: February 25, 2009, 04:35:29 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 25, 2009, 06:46:52 AM
Bahoot bahoot khoob Roja sis Clapping Smiley nice creation... Mind blowing Thumbs UP

Shukriya Salma dear
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«Reply #17 on: February 25, 2009, 04:42:43 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on February 25, 2009, 06:14:01 AM
wowwww wht a poem roja ji..................bhut khoob really very nice one kia haqeeqat bayaan ki hai aapne so touchy...god bless u keep wrighting..........................

Haan yeh ek sachayi hai jo likha tha kuch din pehle
aaj na wo maa rahi aur na meri...  sad7
 
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«Reply #18 on: March 19, 2009, 03:12:59 PM »
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Superb! it's really a heart touching poetry!

This is one of the marvelous poetry written by you.

Purely Heart touching,

Although there are few spelling mistakes but that may be overlooked .Usual Smile

Thanks for sharing 

best wishes

Mayank
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«Reply #19 on: March 19, 2009, 03:33:47 PM »
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Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne,.
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«Reply #20 on: March 25, 2009, 07:30:43 AM »
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bahoot khoob roja ji jitnee tareef kee jaye kam hai.....

netra...
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«Reply #21 on: March 25, 2009, 07:48:41 AM »
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Very Well Written didi,

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Beautifully u express ur feelings..

May God bless u.

Shally.
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«Reply #22 on: April 27, 2009, 02:47:23 AM »
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Quote from: Ghaafil on March 19, 2009, 03:12:59 PM
Superb! it's really a heart touching poetry!

This is one of the marvelous poetry written by you.

Purely Heart touching,

Although there are few spelling mistakes but that may be overlooked .Usual Smile

Thanks for sharing 

best wishes

Mayank


Thanks Mayank ji. (spelling mistakes batadete aap toh correct kar leti na  tongue3 )
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«Reply #23 on: April 27, 2009, 02:48:55 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 19, 2009, 03:33:47 PM
Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne,.

Shukriya Azeem brother
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«Reply #24 on: April 27, 2009, 02:51:11 AM »
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Quote from: NETRAPAL on March 25, 2009, 07:30:43 AM
bahoot khoob roja ji jitnee tareef kee jaye kam hai.....

netra...

Thank you very much for reading me Netra ji. Jab likha tha toh maa mere saat thi.
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«Reply #25 on: April 27, 2009, 02:52:02 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 25, 2009, 07:48:41 AM
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Very Well Written didi,

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Beautifully u express ur feelings..

May God bless u.

Shally.

Thanks for reading me dear Shally.
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«Reply #26 on: April 27, 2009, 01:28:28 PM »
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Teri Godd Se Badkar Mera Jahaan Nahi,.
Tere Aanchal Se Bada Ye Aasmaan Nahi,.

Dekhi Maine Duniya Aankhon Mein Tere,.
Tere Bin Duniya Mein Meri Pehnchaan Nahi,.

Tujhse Hai Meri Saanson Ka Silsilaa Maa,.
Jo Tu Nahi, To Azeem Ke Jism Mein Bhi Jaan Nahi,.

Tera Reham, Tera Karam, Ki Kya Missal Doon,.
Tere Jaisa, Koi Bhi Duniya Mien Meharbaan Nahi,.

_____________________-Azeem-
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«Reply #27 on: April 27, 2009, 03:52:11 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne azeem brother..
3rd line mujhe bahut accha laga. Nice work. keep up.
 
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«Reply #28 on: April 28, 2009, 07:56:01 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne azeem brother..
3rd line mujhe bahut accha laga. Nice work. keep up.
 

Shukriya Roja Sisi,.
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«Reply #29 on: May 02, 2009, 08:39:11 AM »
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boht boht khoob Roja g aur Azeem bhaiya ap ne bi bht acha likha hai...very touching....!!!
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