mera janamdin

by samnoj on January 29, 2007, 11:47:37 AM
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kuch khaas aaj ka din hai
kuch khaas aaj ki raat hai
kal ka savera naya ujala layega
dil me dabe jazbaat hai

raat se hi apno ke mubarakbaad aane lage
dil me khusi ke parinde phir chachahane lage
mann karta hai apno ko leker ek nayi duniya sajaye
ye soch soch ker lab na jane kyu muskaane lage

ek naya saal aaya hai zindaghi me leker naya paighaam
jo guzer gaya bhool ne ki koshish me guzar gayi hai shaam
kya bataye kisko kya kya humne khoya hai is saal me
lekin phir bhi honto per sajaye rakhi hai muskaan

to be cont. . .
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2007, 01:11:36 PM »
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wah mateen..excellent... waise humne b ye saal k janam din se khud ko kabhi udas nahi rakne ka wada kiya hai..allah hum sab ki har umeed iss saal se  jald se jald poori kare..Ameen..Insha-Allah



hum b jaldi yahan pe kuch likhne ki khosis karenge aacha sa..lekin filhal kuch likhne ki khosis karti hu
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Iss janam din humara sab se alag guzara tha                         *
umeed na kiya hume, woh sab  paaya tha                              *
shubha thodi si  khafa khafa nikal gayi                                   *
Lekin shaam humara roshan hogaya tha                                 *
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Har ek ki badhai paayi,khusiyon ka mahool hogaya tha            *
apno se jo gile-shikve the wo pal mein hi door hogaya tha        *
kabhi socha na tha humne ,aisa bhi janam din maanayenge      *
laga hume ab aise ki,iss janam din apno k saath akhir tha         *
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Ab aise pal aagaye hain zindagi mein,jo kabhi sochana tha        *
raat ke andheron mein ek diya jaal raha tha                             *
uss diye ki kiran se manzil ka rasta ab nazar aaya tha               *
Umeed hai toh upar wale se,jald wo hume khusiyon ka savera    * dhikayega...! ( Insha-Allah)  :oops:  :oops:                                *
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hmm bina soche aise hi fata-fat likh diya hai..shayaad humne words ko sahi arrange nahi kiya hai.. :oops:
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2007, 09:35:20 PM »
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Very Nice Sam and Salma....Khuda kare har saal ye janamdin aap logon ki zindagi main bohot saari khushian le ke aaye !! Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2007, 11:57:28 AM »
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thanx bachi n Talat

bachi bahut acha likha hai tumne
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2007, 10:09:06 AM »
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Thanks a lot Talat ..thanks for d wish :oops:.. n "Ameen" for that

shukriya mateen..jo tha dil me likh diya..waise humne bhi poora nahi likha hain....wiase jaldi hi aaram se likhenge
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