mujhe samjho to....

by bekarar on June 08, 2008, 09:09:01 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2008, 07:31:17 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 09, 2008, 07:22:23 PM
aaj kuch bhi post karne ka dil nahi tha sirf punamko wish karne keb liye hi yahan abhi baith....
lekin aapke jawab ne mujhe mazboor kar diya ke mai likhun......
aur sath hi is kavita ke yo par post karne ke mere uddeshya ko bhi poora kar diya...
aapke jawab ko pichale 45 minutes se baar baar pad raha hun.....
lagta hai aapne meri kavita ke har shabd ki gahrai me jaa ke socha hai....
filhaal bas itna hi kahne ki sthiti me hun ....
shukriya...aapne khasa waqt diya mujhe..............

Bekarar ji,
Bilkul sahi kaha, apki likhi pahli kavita ke ek ek shabd ko mehsoos kiya aor kalam apne app likhati chali gai!!

khushi hai khud main, kahin aor na talash kar
jo de jaaye sath to acha, na mile jo sath, aitraaz na kar
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«Reply #16 on: June 09, 2008, 09:13:03 PM »
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Janab bekarar sahab aap dono'n ko shadi ki dusri salgirah mubarak ho, Aap ne is salgirah par wo nazm likhi he jise padh kar be-ikhtiyaar zuban se nikla "Kagaz pe rakh diya he kaleja nikaal ke" Subhanallah! bohot khoob... bhai bade jazbaati insaan ho ye to pata chal hi gaya.  tongue3

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«Reply #17 on: June 11, 2008, 06:09:04 AM »
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Ye nanhi “prince” ki baaten, ye uske khel ye muskaan,
Iska bhola sa chehra, wo iski pyaari si pahchan,
Mujhe kuch yaad dilate hain, mujhe peeche le jaate hain,
Abhi "sanzeeda" baitha hun, kabhi mai bhi khilandad tha,

Kabhi tha rounak-e-mahfil, abhi bilkul akela hun,
Kabhi khushiyon ka mazma tha, abhi dukhon ka mela hun,
“Moula” ne mera “maan” kuch is tarah toda,
Abhi "haara" hua hun mai, kabhi mai bhi sikander tha……..

Bekarar jee itna accha kavita maine aaj tak padi hi nahi.
Bahut dard mehsoos hua her ek line pe... the above and the
last line... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne. God Bless you

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Zindagi ko jeena itna asaan nahi yah hum jante hai
Dil se samjhate hai yah jo gumsaar ho tum
Khud ko khud bekhairoge to bikharte he jaoge
Aor kaya kahe hum, jante hai, bahoot samjhdaar ho tum!!!
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«Reply #18 on: June 12, 2008, 10:33:13 AM »
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sayeed ji aur sania ji.....
mere zajbaton ki kadra karne ka shukriya
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«Reply #19 on: June 13, 2008, 01:23:18 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 08, 2008, 09:09:01 AM
doston aaj meri shaadi ki doosri varshganth hai aur ye kavita maine apni wife liye likhi hai ...
aap logon  ke sath share karne ka dil hua..

Dil me dafan jo dard hain, kabhi inko bhi samajho tum,
Beawaz ubharati ja rahi, har aah ko samjho tum,
Kabhi jo bah nahi paaye, un ashqon ko samjho tum,
Abhi sookha hua hai jo, wo ashqon ka samandar tha…..

Mai gahri neeend me so jaun, dheeme dheeme tum aao,
Mere adharon ko choomo tum, mere maathe ko sahlao,
Mai fir chounk ke jagun, hans ke tum chitak jaao,
Kabhi mai kah nahi paaya, jo mere dil ke ander tha………

Ye nanhi “prince” ki baaten, ye uske khel ye muskaan,
Iska bhola sa chehra, wo iski pyaari si pahchan,
Mujhe kuch yaad dilate hain, mujhe peeche le jaate hain,
Abhi "sanzeeda" baitha hun, kabhi mai bhi khilandad tha,

Kabhi tha rounak-e-mahfil, abhi bilkul akela hun,
Kabhi khushiyon ka mazma tha, abhi dukhon ka mela hun,
“Moula” ne mera “maan” kuch is tarah toda,
Abhi "haara" hua hun mai, kabhi mai bhi sikander tha……..

Mujhpar uthati ungaliyon ka kya zawab dun,
In fabtiyon aur taano ka kya zawab dun,
Mujhpe hansane wale shayad jaante nahi,
Jo 'boot" sa bana baitha hun, mai bhi dhurndhar tha,

Mujhe mom kar do tum pighalna chahta hun mai,
Wo bholapan mujhe de do, machclna chahta hun mai,
Mere toote hue dil ko, sameto aur sahejo tum,
Abhi jo toota-bikhra lagata hai, kabhi pakiza mandar tha

Bahut khoob... wonderful creation.... and Happy Anniversary Bhaiya
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«Reply #20 on: June 13, 2008, 01:25:23 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on June 09, 2008, 03:43:22 PM
Ek koshish:

Dil ki awaz jo na samjhe to khul kar samjhao tum
Apne he Ander na yah gum rakh kar chup ho jaao tum
Apne bhawnao main lao awaz, bebas se na rah jao tum
Apne is samunder main, apne jeevansathi ko bheego jao tum

Hai pyas jo adhro per, uske sone per honto se usko jagao tum
Jis ada ke ho deewane, un adao ko usko dikhlao tum
Pyar apne se chonka kar use, aoro ko chonkana sikhlao tum
Pyar se bhara hai yah jo dil tumhara, her pal use dikhao tum

Nanhe se Prince se dil beshak apna her roj behlao tum
Per apne Ander ke bache ko na tarsaao tum
Na socho jee loge prince ke bachpane ke Sath apna bachpna
Dil se dua dost, her waqat khilkhilaao tum

Ronak-e-mehfil ajj bhi ho, Kaise maan liya khud ko tanha
Lekar muskaan honto per dekhon, abhi kaha baithe ho tum
Maan apna na laga khud ka khud ke khayalo main
Humari najar se bhi dekh, kis tarah ke insaan ho tum

Unglia uthana dunia ka kaam hai, uthane do
Kyun aise choti choti baato se preshan ho tum
Bana kar lakshy bado tum agge he agge
Kyun ki hum jante hai, dhurndhar ho tum

Zindagi ko jeena itna asaan nahi yah hum jante hai
Dil se samjhate hai yah jo gumsaar ho tum
Khud ko khud bekhairoge to bikharte he jaoge
Aor kaya kahe hum, jante hai, bahoot samjhdaar ho tum!!!


well expressed lines Pooja didi... very good work... wah
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«Reply #21 on: June 13, 2008, 02:27:11 PM »
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shukaria Sonia!!!
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«Reply #22 on: June 13, 2008, 02:29:57 PM »
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well writtn pooja ji
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«Reply #23 on: July 01, 2008, 09:48:56 PM »
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thanks pandit jee!!
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«Reply #24 on: August 05, 2008, 02:58:58 AM »
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Aaj aapka likha padne ko mila Sanjeev bhaiya..
Shadi ka saalgira mubark. Bahut accha likha hai. kahi kahi aankhein
num si huyi... Well writtern..Bahut accha taufa hai bhabi ji k liye.
God Bless
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«Reply #25 on: August 05, 2008, 03:00:28 AM »
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Hai pyas jo adhro per, uske sone per honto se usko jagao tum
Jis ada ke ho deewane, un adao ko usko dikhlao tum
Pyar apne se chonka kar use, aoro ko chonkana sikhlao tum
Pyar se bhara hai yah jo dil tumhara, her pal use dikhao tum

Bahut khoob didi... Acchi koshish hai.. Applause
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«Reply #26 on: August 05, 2008, 03:09:34 AM »
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khushi hui roja ki ise padha tumne ......ab sawal ye bhi utha ki tum is tak pahunchi kaise?
neways shukriya..
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«Reply #27 on: August 05, 2008, 03:17:52 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 08, 2008, 09:09:01 AM
doston aaj meri shaadi ki doosri varshganth hai aur ye kavita maine apni wife liye likhi hai ...
aap logon  ke sath share karne ka dil hua..

Dil me dafan jo dard hain, kabhi inko bhi samajho tum,
Beawaz ubharati ja rahi, har aah ko samjho tum,
Kabhi jo bah nahi paaye, un ashqon ko samjho tum,
Abhi sookha hua hai jo, wo ashqon ka samandar tha…..

Mai gahri neeend me so jaun, dheeme dheeme tum aao,
Mere adharon ko choomo tum, mere maathe ko sahlao,
Mai fir chounk ke jagun, hans ke tum chitak jaao,
Kabhi mai kah nahi paaya, jo mere dil ke ander tha………

Ye nanhi “prince” ki baaten, ye uske khel ye muskaan,
Iska bhola sa chehra, wo iski pyaari si pahchan,
Mujhe kuch yaad dilate hain, mujhe peeche le jaate hain,
Abhi "sanzeeda" baitha hun, kabhi mai bhi khilandad tha,

Kabhi tha rounak-e-mahfil, abhi bilkul akela hun,
Kabhi khushiyon ka mazma tha, abhi dukhon ka mela hun,
“Moula” ne mera “maan” kuch is tarah toda,
Abhi "haara" hua hun mai, kabhi mai bhi sikander tha……..

Mujhpar uthati ungaliyon ka kya zawab dun,
In fabtiyon aur taano ka kya zawab dun,
Mujhpe hansane wale shayad jaante nahi,
Jo 'boot" sa bana baitha hun, mai bhi dhurndhar tha,

Mujhe mom kar do tum pighalna chahta hun mai,
Wo bholapan mujhe de do, machclna chahta hun mai,
Mere toote hue dil ko, sameto aur sahejo tum,
Abhi jo toota-bikhra lagata hai, kabhi pakiza mandar tha








aap toh accha likhte hai sir ji...happy second marry aniversery
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«Reply #28 on: August 05, 2008, 03:27:09 AM »
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shukriya IG....tumne padha aur pasand kiya......
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«Reply #29 on: August 05, 2008, 03:32:03 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 05, 2008, 03:00:28 AM
Bahut khoob didi... Acchi koshish hai.. Applause

ThaNKS Roja
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