Relatioship between father and son R.K.Rastogi

by Ram Krishan Rastogi on February 04, 2018, 06:07:03 PM
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BAAP BETE ME KYA SAMBANDH HAE YE BTATATA  HOON
BETA BHI KABHI BAAP BNEGA,YAH BHI SAMJHATATA  HOON

बाप बेटे में क्या सम्बन्ध है, ये मै बताता हूँ
बेटा भी कभी बाप बनेगा,ये भी समझाता हूँ

MERI NANNI SI AANKHE THI AUR UNGALIYA MUDI THI
ABHI ABHI MERI YAADASTE DUNIYA SE JUDI THI

मेरी नन्नी सी आँखे थी और उंगलिया मुड़ी थी
अभी अभी मेरी यादास्ते दुनिया से जुडी थी
 
KUCHH MAHINE PEHLE IS GHAR ME JANM  LIYA THA
PAIDA HOTE HI  MAA AUR BAAP NE GOD LIYA THA

कुछ महीने पहिले इस घर में जन्म लिया था
पैदा होते ही माँ और बाप ने गोद लिया था

JAB  MAE NASAMJH THA KUCHH BHI SAMJH NA PAATA THA
KYOKI DUNIYA ME NAYA KADAM RAKKHA THA

जब मै नासमझ था कुछ भी समझ ना पाता था  
क्योकि दुनिया में अभी नया नया कदम रक्खा था

DUNYADARI KYA CHEEJ HAE SAMJH NA PAATHA THA
DIN GUJRNE LEGE,MAE BH KUCH SAMBHLNE LEGA THA

दुनिया क्या चीज है समझ ना पाता था
दिन गुजरने लगे थे मै भी संभलने लगा था

 
BACHPAN BHI AAGE BADhNE LEGA THA
MAA BAAP KE ISHAARO KO SAMJHNE LAGA THA

बचपन भी आगे आगे बढ़ने लगा था
माँ-बाप के इशारों को समझने लगा था
 
JAB KABHI ROTA THA,PUCHKARTE THE MAA
LAD LADAATE AUR SEENE SE LAGATI THE MAA

जब कभी रोता था,पुचकारती थी माँ
लाड लड़ाती और सीने से लगाती थी माँ  

IS BAAT KO MAE SAMJHNE LAGA THA MAE
LAAD KYA HAE,GUSSA KYA HAE, SAMJHNE LEGA THA

इस बात को समझने लगा था मै
लाड क्या है गुस्सा क्या है,समझने लगा था मै  

R.K.RASTOGI
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2018, 10:35:31 PM »
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BAAP BETEME KYA SAMBANDH HAE YE BTATATA  HOON
BETA BHI KABHI BAAO BNEGA,YAH BHI SAMJHATATA  HOON
MERI NANI SI AANKHE THI AUR UNGALIYA MUDI THI
ABHI ABHI MERI YAADASTE DUNIYA SE JUDI THI
KUCHH MAHINE PEHLWEK GHAR ME JANMLIYA THA
PAISA HOTE HIMERI MAA AUR BAAP NE GOD LIYA THA
JAB MAE NASAMJH THA KUCHH BHI SAMJH NA PAATA THA
KYO KI DUNIYA ME NAYA KADAM RAKKHA THA
DUNYADARI KYA CHIJ HAE SAMJH NA PAATA THA
DIN GUJRNE LEGE,MAE BH KUCH SAMBHLNE LEGA THA
BACHPAN BHIAAGE BADNE LEGA THA
MAA BAAP KE ISHAARO KO SAMJHNE LAGA THA
JAN KABHI ROTHATHA, PUCHKARTE THE
APNA LAD LADAATE THE
IS BAAT KO MAE SAMJHNE LAGA THA
LAAD KYA HAE,GUSSA KYA HAE SAMJHNE LEGA THA

janaab Rastogi Jee yeh parhne mein mujhe mushkil huee kyun ke bahut se haraf aapas mein jhurhe huey theh.
aap pehle hindi mein likhte theh woh bahut achhaa thaa. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2018, 06:34:24 AM »
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Thank you for feedback. I have corrected and seprated the words where required. Nowa days I am out of my town and useing my daughter's Laptop in which Hindi verson software is, not there,therfore i have to write in Roman.for
this please excuse me.Yesterday what happened when I was tping suddenly light was off suddenly and I could not correct my poems. However your inconvience is regretted.  

Your R.K.Rastogi
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2018, 08:27:40 AM »
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Bahot khoob - acha ehsaas  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Sir Hindi ke saath Roman me bhi likha kijiye, kyonke kuch log hain jinhen Hindi theek se padhna nahi aata (aata hai par dushwari hoti hai) so Roman with Hindi will helpful to understand easily for me Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2018, 05:09:40 PM »
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Shri Rustam ji, I have realised the problems of my reader and viewers,and I will write in Roman as well as in Hindi. Thank you for your feed back for improvement.My expectation from the readers that they should appreciate and award "RAU" for my" हौसला अफजाई" My target to complete at least 51 "RAU" . I hope you will help in competing my target. Again thanks for right feeding.
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