Sone ki vo purani chireyya phir pankh phaila ke nachegi

by nandbahu on August 15, 2013, 02:15:25 PM
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Subah uthte hi man mein, ye vichar aaya
Aajadi mili par humne, kya khoya kya paya

Chhiyashad sal hue par ab bhi, kuchh nahi badla
Pehle gulam angrejo key, ab gulam apno ne banaya

Bare vade baree batein, kabhi hum sunte thhe
Soney ki chirayya desh ko hi hum, kehte thhe

Na sona raha na chirayya hi, najar aati hai
Ghotalo aur bhrashtachar ke gidda, hi mandrate hai

Ram krishna ki bhoomi mein, manjar badal gaya sa hai
Ravan, kans, duryodhan aur dushashan ki hi maya hai

Kahin par behan beti asmat bachane ko lachar baithhi hai
Krishna na koi aayega, ye vo bhi jan chuki jo hai

Laddu, meva kaju sang beiman dakar rahe jo hain
Gareebi, mehngai ki mar imandar nit jhel rahe jo hain

Jhanda lal kile mein phehrana, ek maan samjha jata thha
Shan aur ban se har dil mein, ajadi ka deep jalta thha

Na ab vo shan aur na hi ban, sab kahin kho gaye se hain
Ye pavan utsav par ye kam, ek aupcharikta bhar reh gayee si hai

Bachhe aaj key ghotalo ke beech, janam lene ko majboor  hain
Beimani ki hava mein sans lene ko, vo mayus kitne hain

Deshbhakti ka jajba batao toh, kaise unmein panpega
Shaheedo ki shahadat ko, vo kaise yad rakh payega

Vibhishan apno mein baithe, dushman se hath milaye hain
Videshi takto ke samney desh ko, juey mein lagaye baithe hain

Hey mere ishwar, allah, nanak aur maseeha, tum jara sun lo
Meri phariyad ghar ghar mein, har yuvak ke dil tak pahuncha do

Abhi bhi samay hai sab milkey, iss pavan dhara ko bacha lo
Vo pehli jaisee pavanta, aur shanti ko sab milkey le aao

Har mandir mein ghanti bajegi, aur masjid mein ajan hogi
Sone ki vo purani chireyya, phir pankh phaila ke nachegi

JAI HIND JAI BHARAT
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2013, 02:17:50 PM »
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BEHAD ACHHA LIKHA AAPNE SIR.. KAFI LAMBA QALAAM  HAI PAR DESH KE HALAT PAR KUCH LIKHNE BAITHO TO ITNI LAMBI LIST HAI KI KHATAM HONE KA NAAM HEE NAHI LETI.....BAHUT KHUB BAHUT SACHA KALAM HAI AAPKA AAPKE DIL KI TARAH...


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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2013, 02:19:27 PM »
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bahot bahot badiya rachna....desh k prati aapki bhaawnayein saaf vyakt ho rhi hain.....
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2013, 02:35:59 PM »
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BEHAD ACHHA LIKHA AAPNE SIR.. KAFI LAMBA QALAAM  HAI PAR DESH KE HALAT PAR KUCH LIKHNE BAITHO TO ITNI LAMBI LIST HAI KI KHATAM HONE KA NAAM HEE NAHI LETI.....BAHUT KHUB BAHUT SACHA KALAM HAI AAPKA AAPKE DIL KI TARAH...


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thanx saudagar ji aapki hauslaafjahi ke liye, ye bhavna aur dard aaj ka TV par programm dekhkar mehsoos ki jo mere jase sabhi nagriko ka dard hai.
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bahot bahot badiya rachna....desh k prati aapki bhaawnayein saaf vyakt ho rhi hain.....
thanx shardha ji
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bahut bahut sundar...Hamari tamanna eik din zuroor poori hogi .
Giddhon ke mayajaal se mukt ho kar sone ki chidya phir pankh
phaila ke naachegi...Sundar rachna par bahut badhai.
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Nandbahu ji Nandbahu ji Nandbahu ji ab kaese tareef karen aapki... alfaaz hi nahi ke kuch kahon...
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Quote from: nandbahu on August 15, 2013, 02:15:25 PM
Subah uthte hi man mein, ye vichar aaya
Aajadi mili par humne, kya khoya kya paya

Chhiyashad sal hue par ab bhi, kuchh nahi badla
Pehle gulam angrejo key, ab gulam apno ne banaya

Bare vade baree batein, kabhi hum sunte thhe
Soney ki chirayya desh ko hi hum, kehte thhe

Na sona raha na chirayya hi, najar aati hai
Ghotalo aur bhrashtachar ke gidda, hi mandrate hai

Ram krishna ki bhoomi mein, manjar badal gaya sa hai
Ravan, kans, duryodhan aur dushashan ki hi maya hai

Kahin par behan beti asmat bachane ko lachar baithhi hai
Krishna na koi aayega, ye vo bhi jan chuki jo hai

Laddu, meva kaju sang beiman dakar rahe jo hain
Gareebi, mehngai ki mar imandar nit jhel rahe jo hain

Jhanda lal kile mein phehrana, ek maan samjha jata thha
Shan aur ban se har dil mein, ajadi ka deep jalta thha

Na ab vo shan aur na hi ban, sab kahin kho gaye se hain
Ye pavan utsav par ye kam, ek aupcharikta bhar reh gayee si hai

Bachhe aaj key ghotalo ke beech, janam lene ko majboor  hain
Beimani ki hava mein sans lene ko, vo mayus kitne hain

Deshbhakti ka jajba batao toh, kaise unmein panpega
Shaheedo ki shahadat ko, vo kaise yad rakh payega

Vibhishan apno mein baithe, dushman se hath milaye hain
Videshi takto ke samney desh ko, juey mein lagaye baithe hain

Hey mere ishwar, allah, nanak aur maseeha, tum jara sun lo
Meri phariyad ghar ghar mein, har yuvak ke dil tak pahuncha do

Abhi bhi samay hai sab milkey, iss pavan dhara ko bacha lo
Vo pehli jaisee pavanta, aur shanti ko sab milkey le aao

Har mandir mein ghanti bajegi, aur masjid mein ajan hogi
Sone ki vo purani chireyya, phir pankh phaila ke nachegi

JAI HIND JAI BHARAT




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thanx saini ji, vandemaatram
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 15, 2013, 02:57:47 PM
bahut bahut sundar...Hamari tamanna eik din zuroor poori hogi .
Giddhon ke mayajaal se mukt ho kar sone ki chidya phir pankh
phaila ke naachegi...Sundar rachna par bahut badhai.
thanx siddiqui ji
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 15, 2013, 03:56:24 PM
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Jai Hind..
thanx nishi ji, jai hind, vandemaatram
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