~*~Sunn Ri Maaye~*~ In Remembrance (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on May 10, 2008, 07:38:46 PM
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On Mother's Day, A Simple Tribute to My Mother, Who Left Us so Untimely and so Unexpectedly on 27th April 2008..


But I Beleive Her Blessings Are Always With Me...


I know... You Are Watching Me Maa... This is For You Only...







सुन री माए, मुझको कोई नया खिलौना ला दे ना,
चाँद तारो भरा आसमानी बिछौना ला दे माँ…

कितनी है बातें करने वाली, कितनी कम मुलाक़ातें,
खींचे खींचे से दिन है और लंबी लंबी रातें…
माथे पर मेरे हाथ धर दे चैन मुझे आ जाए,
मुझपे अपनी ममता भरा सपन सलोना बिखरा दे माँ…

तेरी बिंदिया, तेरी चूड़ी, और वो तेरी हँसती आँखें,
मेरे मन में याद बन कर जैसे तू मुझे झाँके…
तेरा आँचल लहरा लहरा कर मुझे तरसा तरसा जाए,
अब तो मुझको अपने आँचल का एक कोना पकड़ा दे माँ…

कैसे हो गयी दूर तू मुझसे, मैं हर पल ये सोचूँ,
तू ही कह दे, अब तू जो नहीं तो अपने आँसू कैसे रोकुँ…
मैं भी तुझ तक आना चाहूं, मुझको पास बुला ले,
कदम से मेरे, अपने कदमों तक रस्ता बतला दे माँ…

है मेरा कुसूर यह, मैने तुझको लाख तकलीफे दी है,
लेकिन तेरी याद में मेरी अब तो आँखें भीगी सी है…
मुझको माफ़ कर दे माँ, अब उठ कर गले से लगा ले,
आँखें खोलो, कुछ तो बोलो, चुप रहकर यू सज़ा दे ना…




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Sunn ri maaye, mujhko koi naya khilona la de na,
Chaand Taaro bhara aasmaani bichhona la de maa…

Kitni hai baatein karne waali, kitni kam mulakaatein,
Khinche Khinche se din hai aur lambi lambi raatein…
Maathe par mere haath dhar de chain mujhe aa jaaye,
Mujhpe apni mamta bhara sapan salona bikhra de maa…

Teri bindiya, teri choodi, aur woh teri hansti aankhein,
Mere man mein yaad ban kar jaise tu mujhe jhaanke…
Tera aanchal lehra lehra kar mujhe tarsa tarsa jaaye,
Ab to mujhko apne aanchal ka ek kona pakda de maa…

Kaise ho gayi duur tu mujhse, main har pal ye sochun,
Tu hi keh de, ab tu jo nahin to apne aansu kaise rokun…
Main bhi tujh tak aana chaahun, mujhko paas bula le,
Kadam se mere, apne kadamon tak rasta batlaa de maa…

Hai mera kusoor yeh, maine tujhko laakh takleefe di hai,
Lekin teri yaad mein meri ab to aankhein bheegi si hai…
Mujhko maaf kar de maa, ab uth kar galey se laga le,
Aankhein kholo, kuch to bolo, chup rehkar yu saza de naa…


(I know, this is Net World. Like my all the other works, this poetry will also be copied by someone somewhere. I can not do anything, if someone steals my true thoughts from me by stealing my work. But Just could request to please mention my name with this... I will take this as your respect for human values and thoughts.. Thanks a Lot..)


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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2008, 03:04:48 AM »
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Kaise ho gayi duur tu mujhse, main har pal ye sochun,
Tu hi keh de, ab tu jo nahin toh apne aansu kaise rokun…
Main bhi tujh takk aana chhahun, mujhko paas bula le,
Kadam se mere, apne kadamon takk rasta batlaa de maa…

Shikha di, aapka yeh kalam padkar mera dil bahut bahut miss kar raha hai Maa ko tearyeyed

Kahan hogi kaise hogi Maa meri?
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2008, 06:05:55 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2008, 06:21:52 AM »
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Shikha mere paas words nahi hain ki iss shayri ki tareef kar sakun.... Par sach mein bahut hi achha likha hai....
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2008, 06:39:30 AM »
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Its simply wonderful words just reach the depth of my heart shikha

Kaise kahon ki  maa ke pyaar ka koi mol nahi
Kaise kahon maa tuj main joh hai woh kisi aur main nahi

Tum hoti ho dil main hamesha ek choti si kiran bankar
Jaise hawa kahe rahi ho maa hoon tumare saath zindagi bankar

Kuch haseen pal saath joh beethe hai woh yaad aaye hai haaqikat bankar
Dur hote hue bhi paas ho tum meri maa jism se judh gaye ho tum saans bankar

Kuch na kahe payo kya ho tum meri maa jaise ek wardan ho meri zindagi ho
Kaise kahon ki maa ke pyaar ka koi mol nahi tum jaise koi aur nahi..
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2008, 10:34:20 AM »
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On Mother's Day, A Simple Tribute to My Mother, Who Left Us so Untimely and so Unexpectedly on 27th April 2008..


But I Beleive Her Blessings Are Always With Me...


I know... You Are Watching Me Maa... This is For You Only...






Sunn ri maaye, mujhko koi naya khilona laa de naa,
Chaand Taaron bhara aasmaani bichhona laa de maa…

Kitni hai baatein karne waali, kitni kam mulakaatein,
Khinche Khinche se din hai aur lambi lambi raatein…
Maathe par mere haath dhar de chain mujhe aa jaaye,
Mujhpe apni mamta bhara sapan salona bikhra de maa…

Teri bindiya, teri choodi, aur woh teri hansti aankhein,
Mere mann mein yaad bann kar jaise tu mujhe jhaanke…
Tera aanchal lehra lehra kar mujhe tarsa tarsa jaaye,
Ab toh mujhko apne aanchal ka ek kona pakda de maa…

Kaise ho gayi duur tu mujhse, main har pal ye sochun,
Tu hi keh de, ab tu jo nahin toh apne aansu kaise rokun…
Main bhi tujh takk aana chhahun, mujhko paas bula le,
Kadam se mere, apne kadamon takk rasta batlaa de maa…

Hai mera kusoor yeh, maine tujhko laakh takleefe di hai,
Lekin teri yaad mein meri ab toh aankhein bheegi si hai…
Mujhko maaf kar de maa, ab utth kar galey se laga le,
Aankein kholo, kuch to bolo, chup rehkar yu saza de naa…


(I know, this is Net World. Like my all the other works, this poetry will also be copied by someone somewhere. I can not do anything, if someone steals my true thoughts from me by stealing my work. But Just could request to please mention my name with this... I will take this as your respect for human values and thoughts.. Thanks a Lot..)




kuch poetry aisi hoti hai jisse hum sirf likhte nahi,
jeete hai..
yeh unn mein se ek hai...har ek akshar apne aap mein ek kahani kehta hai..

sirf itna keh sakta hoon ki aapne yeh poetry jee hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2008, 05:21:31 AM »
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Shikha mere paas words nahi hain ki iss shayri ki tareef kar sakun.... Par sach mein bahut hi achha likha hai....

Thank you so much for appreciation Jagdish...
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2008, 05:22:19 AM »
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Its simply wonderful words just reach the depth of my heart shikha

Kaise kahon ki  maa ke pyaar ka koi mol nahi
Kaise kahon maa tuj main joh hai woh kisi aur main nahi

Tum hoti ho dil main hamesha ek choti si kiran bankar
Jaise hawa kahe rahi ho maa hoon tumare saath zindagi bankar

Kuch haseen pal saath joh beethe hai woh yaad aaye hai haaqikat bankar
Dur hote hue bhi paas ho tum meri maa jism se judh gaye ho tum saans bankar

Kuch na kahe payo kya ho tum meri maa jaise ek wardan ho meri zindagi ho
Kaise kahon ki maa ke pyaar ka koi mol nahi tum jaise koi aur nahi..


Thanks HoneyRose... And Very Nice and Touching Work by you too...
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2008, 05:24:01 AM »
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kuch poetry aisi hoti hai jisse hum sirf likhte nahi,
jeete hai..
yeh unn mein se ek hai...har ek akshar apne aap mein ek kahani kehta hai..

sirf itna keh sakta hoon ki aapne yeh poetry jee hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Thanks Khwaish...

I don't know how to appreciate good work... But your words seems very true.. I am really very thankful to you for taking out time and reading my poem...
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2008, 05:29:29 AM »
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Shikha, I just want to say, that each word is so true...The poem is full of emotions a daughter feels for her mom. I would have said "Bohot khoob" if it was just a poetry..but I know what it means to you and what effect it has left on me.


Nice lines Honey !
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2008, 05:34:39 AM »
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Thanks Talat... I know, you could understand...
And yes, You are so right, It is not just a poetry for me...
Thank you so much for taking time to read this and commenting on same...
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2008, 06:04:24 AM »
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Thank You  Celmira sis and Mahiya dear for liking my peom..Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2008, 10:54:23 AM »
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Sunn ri maaye, mujhko koi naya khilona laa de naa,
Chaand Taaron bhara aasmaani bichhona laa de maa…

Kitni hai baatein karne waali, kitni kam mulakaatein,
Khinche Khinche se din hai aur lambi lambi raatein…
Maathe par mere haath dhar de chain mujhe aa jaaye,
Mujhpe apni mamta bhara sapan salona bikhra de maa…

Teri bindiya, teri choodi, aur woh teri hansti aankhein,
Mere mann mein yaad bann kar jaise tu mujhe jhaanke…
Tera aanchal lehra lehra kar mujhe tarsa tarsa jaaye,
Ab toh mujhko apne aanchal ka ek kona pakda de maa…

Kaise ho gayi duur tu mujhse, main har pal ye sochun,
Tu hi keh de, ab tu jo nahin toh apne aansu kaise rokun…
Main bhi tujh takk aana chhahun, mujhko paas bula le,
Kadam se mere, apne kadamon takk rasta batlaa de maa…

Hai mera kusoor yeh, maine tujhko laakh takleefe di hai,
Lekin teri yaad mein meri ab toh aankhein bheegi si hai…
Mujhko maaf kar de maa, ab utth kar galey se laga le,
Aankein kholo, kuch to bolo, chup rehkar yu saza de naa…






Shikha

A very emotional tribute to your mom by you. Aisi poems padh kar to dil karta hai ki har waqt Maa ke paas he beete.

Being so far away from her, dil mein yahi rehta hai ki kab next trip India ka banega.

May the departed soul of your mom rest in peace.
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2008, 02:21:15 PM »
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Thanks Rajbir ji for your valuable thoughts.. icon_smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2008, 04:51:27 PM »
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too good Shikha!! shabdo ke is khail mai shayad kuch palo ka aaraam aa jaaye.. magar jo kho gaya hai wo sirf apne ander se hi mil sakta hai!! hamesha khush raho!!
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