~*~Sunn Ri Maaye~*~ In Remembrance (Shikha) -Panna 2:Occassion Specific Poetry

Shikha12

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«Reply #15 on: May 16, 2008, 10:09:45 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 12, 2008, 04:51:27 PM

too good Shikha!! shabdo ke is khail mai shayad kuch palo ka aaraam aa jaaye.. magar jo kho gaya hai wo sirf apne ander se hi mil sakta hai!! hamesha khush raho!!

Thanks Pooja di.. notworthy

Lekin shabdon ke khel mein bhi kuch palon ka aaraam nahin aata.. Kami aur jyaada mehsoos hone lagti hai...
Neways, Thanks a lot for reading my words and for giving your valuable comments.. wave


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Tosha

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Re: ~*~Sunn Ri Maaye~*~

«Reply #16 on: May 30, 2008, 10:08:15 PM »

Di!!

bahut hi piyara likha hai .... "Maathe par mere haath dhar de chain mujhe aa jaaye," <-- wow!!

Kahane ko shabd kam hai .... ahesas hai sirf ahesas!! Usual Smile

wish you all the happiness life can ever bring. Take good care of yourself. icon_king


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Tosha

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«Reply #17 on: May 30, 2008, 10:46:16 PM »

This is not really appropriate but somthing for mommy!! so i thought i'd share... as we all love our mommy!!

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<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/w_4_Wp4uT6Y&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/w_4_Wp4uT6Y&rel=1</a>"


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Shikha12

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«Reply #18 on: May 31, 2008, 06:58:39 AM »

Thanks Tosha for your lovely words and also for so nice sharing.. Its really worth watching..

Thanks once Again.. notworthy


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Sonia01

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«Reply #19 on: May 31, 2008, 03:47:08 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 10, 2008, 07:38:46 PM

On Mother's Day, A Simple Tribute to My Mother, Who Left Us so Untimely and so Unexpectedly on 27th April 2008..

But I Beleive Her Blessings Are Always With Me...

I know... You Are Watching Me Maa... This is For You Only...

Sunn ri maaye, mujhko koi naya khilona laa de naa,
Chaand Taaron bhara aasmaani bichhona laa de maa…

Kitni hai baatein karne waali, kitni kam mulakaatein,
Khinche Khinche se din hai aur lambi lambi raatein…
Maathe par mere haath dhar de chain mujhe aa jaaye,
Mujhpe apni mamta bhara sapan salona bikhra de maa…

Teri bindiya, teri choodi, aur woh teri hansti aankhein,
Mere mann mein yaad bann kar jaise tu mujhe jhaanke…
Tera aanchal lehra lehra kar mujhe tarsa tarsa jaaye,
Ab toh mujhko apne aanchal ka ek kona pakda de maa…

Kaise ho gayi duur tu mujhse, main har pal ye sochun,
Tu hi keh de, ab tu jo nahin toh apne aansu kaise rokun…
Main bhi tujh takk aana chhahun, mujhko paas bula le,
Kadam se mere, apne kadamon takk rasta batlaa de maa…

Hai mera kusoor yeh, maine tujhko laakh takleefe di hai,
Lekin teri yaad mein meri ab toh aankhein bheegi si hai…
Mujhko maaf kar de maa, ab utth kar galey se laga le,
Aankein kholo, kuch to bolo, chup rehkar yu saza de naa…

(I know, this is Net World. Like my all the other works, this poetry will also be copied by someone somewhere. I can not do anything, if someone steals my true thoughts from me by stealing my work. But Just could request to please mention my name with this... I will take this as your respect for human values and thoughts.. Thanks a Lot..)

oooh what a beautiful creation... Mahiya ... Her ek line dil ko hilakar rakh diya hai. God Bless You Mahiya


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Re: ~*~Sunn Ri Maaye~*~

«Reply #20 on: June 01, 2008, 07:14:33 AM »

very touching mahiya ji....
shbdon se ehsason ko bayan kar paana....
bahoot sunder kavita hai..

, and tosh ji nice one....


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Shikha12

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«Reply #21 on: June 01, 2008, 08:09:55 AM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on May 31, 2008, 03:47:08 PM

oooh what a beautiful creation... Mahiya ... Her ek line dil ko hilakar rakh diya hai. God Bless You Mahiya

Quote from: bekarar on June 01, 2008, 07:14:33 AM

very touching mahiya ji....
shbdon se ehsason ko bayan kar paana....
bahoot sunder kavita hai..

, and tosh ji nice one....

Thanks so much Sonia and Bekarar.. for your visit, reading, commenting and understanding my Work.

It was for the first time, I became selfish for more and more views on my work (this Poetry)... I am taking each and every comment here as a tribute to my Mother.. Thanks a lot once again.. notworthy


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Yasmeen Dua

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«Reply #22 on: June 08, 2008, 03:45:17 AM »

Hmmmm,... Boht hi Nyce wordinG hai MisS aap Ki


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Shikha12

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«Reply #23 on: July 23, 2008, 11:31:23 AM »

Thanks a lot for encouragement.. Yasmeen..


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Roja

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«Reply #24 on: August 31, 2008, 04:07:18 AM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 10, 2008, 07:38:46 PM

(I know, this is Net World. Like my all the other works, this poetry will also be copied by someone somewhere. I can not do anything, if someone steals my true thoughts from me by stealing my work. But Just could request to please mention my name with this... I will take this as your respect for human values and thoughts.. Thanks a Lot..)

Dear Mahi, Yeh bahut badi samasya hai. Yahan padte hai kuch log aur kahi aur share kerte hai. Yeh mere saat bahut bar hota rehta hai. But How to claim ke yeh mera hi likha gazal or sher hai?
sahi mein badi samasya hai.


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Shikha12

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«Reply #25 on: August 31, 2008, 08:24:12 AM »

Hhmm.. Samasya toh hai..

Let's hope someday people might start respecting other's feelings and sentiments..


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Shikha12

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«Reply #26 on: September 03, 2008, 06:53:58 AM »

Shukriya Kulbhushan... Yeh poetry dil ke bahut kareeb hai..
Is par koi bhi comment milta hai toh bahut achha lagta hai.. Usual Smile

I feel like someone is paying tribute to my mother..
Thanks once again.. notworthy


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Re: ~*~Sunn Ri Maaye~*~

«Reply #27 on: September 05, 2008, 01:51:38 AM »

very nice sharing gum........maa ke har pahlu ko sameta hai....likhne wale ne


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Shikha12

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«Reply #28 on: January 20, 2009, 12:20:56 PM »

सुन री माए, इक दिन भी ना बीता बिन तेरी बातें,
मंदिर की घंटी के सुर जैसी, रहती दिल में यादें..
कल ख्वाबों में फिर देखा, तुम सिरहाने ही थी मेरे,
तेरी गोद में सिर रख कर, कट गयी भीगी रातें..

माँ.. यह दिन है वोही की जिस दिन, तुम धरती पर थी आयीं,
जन्मदिन की बधाई दूँ किसे, तुम धरा में समाईं..
ज़रा माथे तिलक कर दूँ, कदमों के निशान तेरे खोजूं,
ये तो कह दो कहाँ पहुँचाऊँ, मैं प्यार की सौगातें...
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Sunn Ri Maaye, Ik din bhi naa beeta bin teri baatein,
Mandir ki ghanti ke sur jaisi, Rehti dil mein yaadein..
Kal khaawaabon mein phir dekha, Tum sirhaane hi thi mere,
Teri goud mein sir rakh kar, Katt gayi.n bheegi raatein..

Maa.. Yeh din hai wohi ki jis dinn, Tum dharti par thi aayi.n,
Janamdin ki badhaai doon kisey, Tum dharaa mein samaayi.n..
Zaraa maathe tilak kar doon, Kadmon ke nishaan tere khojun,
Ye toh kah do kahan pahunchaaun, Main Pyaar ki Saugaatein...

Happy Birthday Maa... I Miss You...


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Roja

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«Reply #29 on: January 21, 2009, 12:22:07 AM »

Quote from: Mahiya on January 20, 2009, 12:20:56 PM

Sunn Ri Maaye, Ik din bhi naa beeta bin teri baatein,
Mandir ki ghanti ke sur jaisi, Rehti dil mein yaadein..
Kal khaawaabon mein phir dekha, Tum sirhaane thi mere,
Teri goud mein sir rakh kar, Katt gayi.n bheegi raatein..

Maa.. Yeh din hai wohi ki jis dinn, Tum dharti par thi aayi.n,
Janamdin ki badhaai doon kisey, Tum dharaa mein samaayi.n..
Zaraa maathe tilak kar doon, Kadmon ke nishaan tere khojun,
Ye toh kah do kahan pahunchaaun, Main Pyaar ki Saugaatein...

Happy Birthday Maa... I Miss You...

Mahi... bahut accha likha hai aapne. Dil pigal si gayi padkar.
her ek alfaz aisa laga ke maa samne hai aur keh rahi hai dilse..

Good presentation Dear...


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